CHECKMATE Manveer SS special update pg 80 12/10/19

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Hi,

Some of you guys may know me'😃😃I write a FF called THE QUEEN.😊 The other day wondering along the Manveer land an idea stuck my mind.😉 So here it goes.

This story will be a SS which will be slightly different from the true track of DEK

In here Devgar and Jaygar royal families don't shear such a strong bond. But the prince of Jaygar Udayveer is indeed engaged to Manyata the lost princess of Devgar.

As we know in here too that the princess was kidnapped by Murai Lal after that bomb blast incident. And the royal families thought that this blast was done to stop the royal engagement so they send the prince abroad for his safety.

In this story the queen of Jaygar remained in Jaygar after the king and the prince had left so to take care of her state and her baby daughter Unnati. And yes she was alive for more time than the true track. After five years there came a new security personal with his daughter Monya.

As you guys are guessing yes'this guy is Murari Lal but as Maharani Vasundara doesn't really know this Murari character and they don't shear visits with the Devgar royal family so no one recognizes him. He is changed too with a complete different look.

The queen who was missing her older child soon felt rather attached towards the cute girl Monya who was then considered as a part of the family. She was treated as a princess though she truly wasn't a one and she sheared a sisterly relationship with the little princess Unnati. The prince was an occasional visitor there only for his summer vacations.

Now when our story starts he'll return home some ten years after his mother's death. And our two main characters Uday and Manyata haven't seen each other for many years now.

So what will happen when the two finally meet each other?😉

And when will they realize that their fates are bonded from the very beginning.😉

That is the story CHECKMATE!!!😃😃😃

INDEX

Chapter 1 pg 2 -The princess

Chapter 2 pg 4 -The ghost's night out

Chapter 3 pg 5 - Hunting the hunter

Chapter 4 pg 7 -A Cinderella story

Chapter 5 pg 9 -change of the tide

Chapter 6 pg 11 -Where the sky meets the earth

Chapter 7 pg 13-Man behind the mask

Chapter 8 pg 14- A lesson on love

Chapter 9 pg 16- Things her heart used to know

Chapter 10 pg 19- Crack on the glass

Chapter 11 pg 22- Where the past meets the present

Chapter 12 pg 25-His princess

Chapter 13 pg 29-The darkest hour

Chapter 14 pg 31-Song of rain

Chapter 15 pg 34-Stars on the earth

Chapter 16 pg 37-Unlocking her heart

Chapter 17 pg 39-Golden sands part 1

Chapter 17 pg 42-Golden sands part 2

Chapter 18 pg 46-Companion

Chapter 19 pg 49-Flames

chapter 20 pg 51-Fallen star

Chapter 21 pg 54-Memory lane

Chapter 22 pg 58-sacrificing the pawn

Chapter 23 pg 62-Hundred years of love

Chapter 24 pg 65-White's first move

chapter 25 pg 65-Fear

Chapter 26 pg 69-Reliving

chapter 27 pg 71-Silver lines

Chapter 28 pg 74-The crash

Chapter 29 pg 77-Check and mate

Chapter 30 pg 77-Epilogue

So tell me what you think.😊

Sorry if I wasted your time. 😭

Waiting eagerly for your response.😳

Thanks for reading.😊

Cham.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its a very nIce concept do continue…
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Thanks a lot😊
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thanks a lot
I'll try to keep the interest😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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INTERESTING...nice concept...plz PM me when u update...and update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This sounds so interesting. Great concept.
Please continue 😊

P.S: When will you update your FF The Queen?? Eagerly waiting.
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Thanks for each and every lovely comment. 😃

This is the first chapter hope you'll enjoy it.😃

Chapter one - the princess

She closed her eyes tightly and reopened them determined that this would change the whole process that she had been going through. Her hands which were tied to the chair arms had started to pain. This was a dream for sure'a nightmare that she'll have to wake up from.

There was all this commotion outside which reminded her yet again that this was no dream. Those people were fighting each other just to catch some glimpse of her'their new found princess. This was all her fault. She shouldn't have challenged him. He was the yuvraj after all. There was nothing that's impossible for him.

And all because of her silly fight her Baba was now in jail. The mere thought seemed to frighten her. Was he alright? Did they harm him in anyway'? So desperately she wanted to see him. But it was near impossible.

And then there were all these people'her so called new family. They seemed to be deaf and blind to her. Neither had they heard what she said nor do they seem to see that she's not interested in their sorrows. All that mattered to her now was to get out of her and she had done a good deal of showing it which had earned her this little imprisonment.

The door opened which made her return to the world of reality or dreams which was which she no longer felt so sure about. In came the last one expected. She was in no mood to fight. He had that stupid smirk twisting his lips it made her stump her feet even harder on the carpeted floor that her whole body shook along with the chair.

"Let me go" She said in the top of her voice. He made no comment and turned to shut the door.

"Those people are going to get a heart attack if you asked me" He said in his annoying voice. "By seeing how wild they're little princess is"

"Don't call me princess" She said.

"Even my mother used to call you princess'not knowing that you're a one'Princess"

"I know what you're doing but these people are fools and you're using them just to prove that no one can win against you"

"Are you lost?" He asked advancing towards her now. She had nowhere to go so she just stared at him not knowing and wondering what he would do now.

"No I'm not'it's you who's going to'when this people know that you were lying'"

"I'm was not lying Princess what I said is the truth"

"You're a cheat!"

"There there sweetheart don't go using all you vocabulary on me it's such a waste of time" He kneeled in front of her chair. "'as we've more pressing matters to discuss."

"Like what" She stammered as those long fingers were untying her now.

"Things like your family"

"'which is in jail thanks to you'"" She winced as she got to her feet. Her right foot was bleeding due to that glass blasting stunt she had to put up just to convince these people that she's not their beloved daughter. He smiled seeing her wince and once picked her up in his arms.

"I said put me down!"

He said nothing and she landed softy on the bed.

"I mean you true family'this family" He was cleaning her wound now which was as painful as the memories of the day.

"They aren't my family" She said even more stammering now. She was confused at his sudden change of colours and this sudden caring shearing act. She bit her lip that's what she always do whenever she's confused. He who knows this very well laughed inside his head. Now things would go on the way he wanted.

"Oh yes they're your family'now if you have calmed down a bit then'just think what it would feel like to see your daughter after 16 years'"

She said nothing and was thinking not about all those people who had seen their so called daughter after 16 years. But about the man who was sitting beside her'about the fateful day they met each other.

*

The sun was clearly visible over the Jaygar palace now as some cars came in to a halt in front of it. From the second or the third car a girl of about twenty years stepped out. Jaynandini looked up at the towering mansion ahead and a smile spread across her face.

"I never thought there're places so beautiful other than Devgar" She said as the Yuvraj of Jaygar joined her also stepping out. He said nothing just smirked at her to which she returned a toothy grin. He knew so well what Jay was aiming. He could see her mind as if she was made out from glass.

There was nothing Jay won't do to impress him. She would do this she would do that'but there was something she didn't know that the person who could impress him wasn't born yet. He had seen that type of girls. And he wasn't interested in them. They were what you called disposable.

He looked up following her gaze. He was home after many years and yes he agreed with her. It was beautiful. And it was a fact that everything that belonged to him was beautiful and what is beautiful should belong to him.

Upstairs of the same mansion in the room she sometimes sheared with Monya Unnati was reading an article in some magazine she had found which was titled as 'The yuvraj's night out'.

Her brows linked with each other as her eyes travelled down the lines. This was one thing she never approved about her Dada.

At the moment Monya pocked her head in to see whether Unnati was inside. There was a devilish grin in her lips.

"Someone has fan mail'.ahhh" She said to the other girls ear holding out a set of rosy envelopes. "from an admirer called'" Unnati turned around in a jiffy. "Aryan'!!"

"There Monya give them to me" She said jumping off the bed as Monya ran away.

"Not so soon my love let me read them first" She said opening the envelope sitting in the staircase. "in front of maharaj ji"

She ran down the staircase her eyes still on Unnati who was following her totally mad now.

"No Monya No give them to me'Please!!!"

She just laughed as she went down backwards she was so used to this place now that she could fight with Unnati while descending the stairs.

Uday who entered just at the moment forgot what he was saying to jay. He had never' never ever in his life had seen someone so beautiful that he felt his own breath and soul were leaving him and flying away in her laughter. She was descending the stairs three at a time dressed in sliver and green anarkali suit'glass bangles ringing with her steps matching her laugh. Her eyes were twinkling as she fought for some envelopes in her hand.

Monya who hadn't seen this in coming party just kept coming backwards fighting with Unnati until she hit something so very solid.

"what the'" She said as Unnati was finally successful in pulling those envelopes out of her hand. "there wasn't a wall here'"

And Unnati who was laughing with glee at her win against Monya turned suddenly white.

"Dada!!" She gasped.

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Wow you reached the end!!😊

So how was it like?😳

Tell me tell me tell me please!!!😳

Thanks for reading!!😃

P.s. I'll update the queen tomorrow😊 but if not it'll be Thursday😭 sorry😭 but studies you know. 😭

Cham

Edited by Cham42195 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice 1😊😊 continue soon😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update and the ff seems to be interesting too.
Do pm me when you update next..
I'll be pleased to read more.
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N0w ths ix n0t fair i was already in l0ve wid ur dat ff and now u r writing dix one t0o n i must say itx amazing! Plx update ths one ASAP cnt wait to read next part

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