SS I was wrong (MANVEER) chp 16 pg 30 end of SS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

awww...that was sweet...i like it... SHORT AND SWEET...😊 CONTINUE SOON...

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Shazzie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

very sweet. love it. pls do update soon.

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princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: annysyed
Pakka wala promise na:):):)

haan baba pakka wala promise😆

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princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: annysyed
Hoyyeee hw shweeet:):):p

but tht will take a little more time chalega na???😆

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princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: annysyed
Oh mela bacha chalega:):)

ok then 😛

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Anny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

U r frm mumbai na, so watz ur age?

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LadySosostris

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

oh this part is so cute n amaging but too short.anyways cont soon.

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SaHillover101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Nice update!! I'll be lookin forward to the next update!!:)

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princess_T

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Part 5(M's POV)I was in his strong arms... Enjoying every second I looked at him and he looked at me... We shared a beautiful eyelock... Suddenly someone snapped us out of that beautiful moment.Vijay bhai: Ab bas bhi karo ahem ahemm hum sab bhi yahan hain HAAN NAHI TOH (teasingly)Unnati: Bhabhi please snap out of it... (teasingly) I freed myself from his grip and looked down... I was so embarassed at that moment.. Just then I made a stupid excuse... While his eyes were gazing at me...Manyata: Woh haan hum abhi aaye dadisahab.. (ignoring everyone)VIjay bhai: hmmm Unnati humein in dono ko tease karne bahut mazza aane wala hai...Unnati : Evil evil i tell you...(copying vijay)Hmmm this guy is going to make me mad... Anyways.. We all were gathered around the table and this time he did not sit next to me.. I was busy eating my food when I felt a leg caressing my leg.. It was tickling I looked at him and there he was smiriking like always... Suddenly the tickling stopped.. I understood what he want.. I stepped out of my slippers and started caressing his leg and this time I was smirking...He looked at me smiling like he never smiled before.. I stopped that leg-leg game and started eating my food because I saw Dadisahab noticing what we were doing and she too didn't leave me she gave me a toothy smile... While I,dadisahab and Uday were busy smiling and eating our food everyone was talking and busy eating... The dinner got over and DS said...DS: chaliye maharaj ab humsab chalte hain..Giriraj: Masahab itni jaldi bethiye kuch baatein karte hain...Brijraj: Nahi Giriraj ab hum chalte hainWith this everyone started walking towards the door... Before going out I turned to see where he was... He was standing behind Unnati and Dad smiling and he gave me a flying kiss... He was looking incredibly cute at that time I smiled at him and went away...In my car I was smiling by remembering him giving me that flying kiss...We reached our palace everyone went to their rooms after wishing Good night.. Hmmm looks like I'll get bored because I was really not feeling sleepy... In my room I was pacing around thinking what to do? Just then I thought let's call him...I looked at the time it was 2:30 am... I don't think I should call him at this time...Hmmm with this I went to my bed.. Twisting and turning the whole night.. I can't understand why I am not able to sleep?The next morning I thought to go the gym... Yeah perfect idea I've always heard Uday saying workout is the best passtime...In the gym I was wearing my ADIDAS track pants and PUMA t-shirt... I jumped onto the traidmill and started running... HUH.. it was actually relaxing but at the same time I was sweating like hell... I picked up my towel and wiped away all the sweat from my face and had some juice... A servant entered the gymServant: Yuvraani ji yeh aapke liye bouquet aur letter hai..Manyata: Kisne diya?Servant : Pata nahi ek admi tha.. Jab humne usse pooche ki woh kaun hai woh bina bole hee chalagaya...Manyata: Thikhe aap jaaiye..This gets me confused if it was Uday then deffinately the servant would have known... I looked at the bouquet it was beautiful but there were Lilies in it lilies were the flowers I used to like but now I like Roses... I opened the letter looking confused... The letter...,.,Moniya, I know you are being forced into marrying Udayveer but I promise I will not let that happen...

(M's POV)

My face turned pale for that moment some part of me was terribly getting destroyed Why I had a feeling that something bad is going to happen why? I looked at my phone the walpaper was a picture of me and Uday... I called him...

to be continued...

Soo hope u guyzzz like it... I've tried to create suspense in this part...