SS I was wrong (MANVEER) chp 16 pg 30 end of SS - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: annysyed

Hey princess u saw shooting of dek na?

yes i did😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Toh plz batavona , woh log kya masti kar rahai thai, plz babe batavona
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: annysyed

Toh plz batavona , woh log kya masti kar rahai thai, plz babe batavona

well there was no masti as such...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: princess_T

yea rite 😆😆😆 lol i'll add more of giriraj in this than the serial😃

u know my favourite characters r jaigarh family...uday ki kia baat hai...but i even use to lyk unnati...but when she betrayed her own dada 4 manyata n dat akash...i didnt lyked her...but again lat week she gained all da respect...by telling da truth to manyata...n giriraj is my favourite dad 4m beginning...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
I LOVED IT!!! Plzzz do continue soon!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏👏thanks...lov it.brillaitn...please update sooon...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

👏👏thanks...lov it.brillaitn...please update sooon...👏👏

chapter 4... hmm i'll update it 2day
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 4
(M's POV)
We walked out of the room in silence. We reached outside and there DAD (giriraj) was standing smiling in an unusual way.
Giriraj: Aap dono kya kar rahe the ? (teasingly)
Uday: Woh kuch nahi dad, Vaise aap ko kuch kaam tha?
Giriraj: Woh haan sab intezaar kar rahe hain aapka panditji shubh mahurat dhund rahe hai aapki shadi ka
Manyata: Really dad ??
Giriraj : Yes beta chaliye (with this giriraj put a hand on manyata's shoulder while looking at uday)
We were heading towards the hall. Uday was irritated on his dad because he jumped in such a wonderful moment.While he was getting irritated I was looking at him and smiling... And here we go we reached the hall panditji was sitting there with DS, dad (brijraj) mom, Vijay bhai, jehnandini and Unnati.. Oh gross, how can I forget I had a fight with her ohhh I think I was lost in Uday land.
Panditji : Toh aaye Manyata aur Udayveer bethiye yaahan
Uday: ji panditji
We sat there. Panditji had a small book in his hand in which he was searching for dates. somewhere in my heart I wanted the nearest date.I was eager what date will it be? Just then panditji looked out of his book and said
Panditji: Aaj se 3 weeks baad ka mahurat hai Rajmata
DS: Badiya hai panditji
3 weeks you gotta be kidding me. I couldn't wait for 3 days and the date is after 3 weeks. I looked at Uday there he was smirking. Sometimes I think when have I seen him in a serious mode? Anyway...
Manyata: Uday 3 weeks bahut zyaada nahi hai (Whispering in his ears)
Uday: Princess intezaar toh humse bhi nahi ho raha but kya kare mahurat ussi din ka hai...
Vijay bhai : Aapne kuch kaha uday banna ? (teasingly )
Uday: Nahi toh aapke kaan baj rahe hai VIjay banna
Well Vijay bhai was teasing us and Unnati not even a smile escaped her lips. I have to fix this,I thought...
Manyata : Unnati ek second yahan aana please humein tumse baat karni hai (almost pulling her )
Unnati : Kya hua manyata ? (in harsh way)
Manyata : I know kii tum humse naaraz ho Im sorry..aur vaise bhi ab tumhare bhai aur humare beech sab theek hogaya hai (blushing)
With this Unnati smiled and said
Unnati : Humne aapko maaf kiya bhabhi sahab...
Manyata : Bhabhi sahab? Oh shit ab tum bhi...
Unnati : Hahahahahaha bhabhi sahab...
We started running Unnati infront of me... And I was behind her laughing giggiling and having fun just then I twisted my leg and bammm I was going to fall when a strong pair of arms caught me..I knew who it was obviously my to be HUSBAND...
to be continued...
so i hope u guyzz like it next part is gonna be full of suspense and yaa sorry for no Manveer romance in this part
Tanvi :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Dear itz sweet part ,but y itz too short:):):):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: annysyed

Dear itz sweet part ,but y itz too short:):):):)

the next part is gonna be big PROMISE😃😃😃

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