SS I was wrong (MANVEER) chp 16 pg 30 end of SS - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
it was really good loved both of the par liked da precap please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
very cute os..enjoyed reading it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
👏👏thanks...great job.brillaint...amazing...loved it...please update sooon...and pm me if you update...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
thankyou all you inspiring mee
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
wish it was this easy in the real serial...nice OS
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Wow...
I wish it's happens in serial...😉😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
😊😊sooo here comes part 3 enjoyyy PART 3
(M's POV)
Now things were really going well between me and Uday. Yesterday I Told him that I love him and he told me the same. Today morning I woke up with a smile... just by remembering him. I got ready, I was wearing a simple pink Anarkali with red laces. I went down everyone was already on the breakfast table. I sat down on my usual chair and saw everybody was busy eating. Breaking the silence I told
Manyata: Dadisahaab hmm.. woh uss din Uday shagun lekar aaya tha
DS: Haan beta hum jaante hain vaise kyun pooch rahi hain aap?
Manyata: woh ab humari baari hai na Shagun lekar jaane ki?
DS : Haan, par beta kya aap iss shadi se khush hain?
Manyata: Ofcourse Daadisahaab humari aur Uday ki beech ki probems ab khatam hogayi hai (while blushing)
Vijay bhai: Ohooo M bhai ab aap aur Uday banna bhi love birds ban gaye wah wah... (teasingly)
Manyata: vijay bhai please hummein chidaye mat(while blushing even more)
DS : Seema shagun ki tayaari kijiye..
(M's POV)
I can't believe im head over heels in love with him. He is gonna be mine in some days.
Vijay bhai : kahan kho gayi Manyata ohooo Uday ke khayalo mein ??
Manyata: vijay bhai stop (with this she got up from the table)
M's POv
I was getting ready to go to his house. I slipped into a White and red anarkali with the earings he gave me on the day of J's so called yuvranni party.I wore them and smiled. I went downstairs everyone was waiting for me. I rushed outside and sat in my favourite car. It was a black MERCEDES. As soon as I saw the palace a smile occured on my lips. The palace was decorated with lights and flowers... Udays favourite flowers roses.. We went inside.
DS: Maharaj yeh Uday aur Manyata ki shaadi ka shagun
Giriraj: Maa Sahab aaye bethiye, Manyata beta kisse dhund rahi hain aap?
Oh gosh he noticed me searching for Uday...
Manyata : Kuch nahi woh uncle...
Giriraj : Uncle ? ab hum aapke sasur hai call me DAD
Manyata : DAD...hmm excuse me hummein washroom jaana hai (Making an excuse to search Uday)
I was walking and a hand pulled me I was about to shout when he coverd my mouth. It was Uday. I smiled.. And even he smiled
Uday : Hii princess (While wrapping his hands around my waist)
Manyata: chodo mujhe Uday koi dekhle ga..
Uday : Ab tum humari officially Mangetar ho toh koi dekhlega toh kya hoga ?
Manyata : Accha mere Romantic prince (while wrapping my arms around his neck)
Uday: Aaj humari shaadi ki date fix hone wali hai
Manyata: Really??
Uday: really (almost whispering in my ears)
I was enjoying his arms. When he leaned in to kiss me, I leaned too. just on that time we heard a sound.. It was DAD (giriraj). He was outiside Udays oops our room.
Giriraj :Uday beta kahan hain aap?
Manyata: Jaao uday dad bula rahe hain
Uday : haan hum jaate hain vaise tumne abhi humare dad ko kya kaha?
Manyata: Dad aur kya?? he is my sasur na ?
With this Uday left the room smiling... And I followed him. This is gonna be the best day of my life...
Precap : Pandit ji announcing the dates of uday and manyata's wedding...
sooo hope u guyzzz like this part 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
Niceee greatt start... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: mystic.charm

Superb but short update!!

well im sorry for the short update im super lazyy😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Nice update n pliz cont soon.u r such a good writer,i tell u.

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