SS I was wrong (MANVEER) chp 16 pg 30 end of SS - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏you echoed the voice of my heart👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was REALLY sweet yaar,how im praying that it happens tonight :)
u must continue,and do pm me when u do:):)
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Nice os pliz pm me when u update the next part pliz.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thankyou all u inspired me to write more surely will update as soon as possible
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So here comes part 2 hope u enjoy reading it😊 Part 2
*(M's POV)
I was in my car continuosly thinking about that one person who was so rude to me yesterday and today he came and supported me. What was he upto? I think I should behave nicely with him and so will he. Yes, that was a nice idea. Just then I saw a shopping mall. I told the driver to stop the car. I stepped out of my car and smiled a bit. I went inside,yes this was the mall I worked in and now I am here to shop for my.. my fiance.I stopped for a moment.Manyata : What should I buy for Uday? (to herself)Just then and idea struck my mind.Wrist watch yeaa he will like that.I searched for the shop and there it was in the corner. I went inside and saw various brands. I stopped at one counter and asked the shopkeeperManyata: Can I see some watches for men?Shopkeeper: Sure ma'm here ( he removed some watches from the shelf )Manyata : I'll take this one It was a black leather belt with a big black dial. Hmmm... this will be perfect for Uday I thought. I rushed outside and there was my car I stepped inside in a hurry and asked the driver to take me to Uday's palace.I reached there and promised to myself I will give this to him.I went inside the place was beautiful... I admired the palace and saw Uncle Giriraj standing there.Manyata: Hello! Uncle how r u ??Giriaj: Im fine beta.hmmm.. let me guess you are come here to meet Uday right?Manyata: Yes uncle... (while blushing)Giriraj : then I wont waste your time go meet himI left the place and rushesd upstairs I saw one of the servant.I asked him where is Uday's room ? He instructed me and there... I finally reached.I gently knocked. From inside came a voice.. it was UdayUday: Come inI entered the room. It was breathtakingly beautiful. I searched for him and there he was standing with his phone facing the other side.Manyata: Uday...Uday : Princess tum yahan ?Manyata: Haan woh mein.. tumhe kuch dena tha..
Uday: Ohh kya hai lao dikhao
Manyata: Ek second pehele tum meri help karoge ?
Uday: Kis cheez mein??
Manyata : iss ring ko nikal ke doge ? woh galat finger mein peheni hai mene aur mein chahati hu ki tum isse apne sahi jagah par pehenao...
(UV's POV)
I was shocked to hear this from her.But still without even thinking for a second i slid the ring in the right finger. While she was busy looking at my eyes. We shared an eyelock and shocking she hugged me..
Manyata: Uday promise me you will never behave like this with me
Uday: I promise you Princess
Manyata: I love you
Uday: I love you too
(M's POV)
I separated from him and opened the box in which I Bought the watch and without even looking at his face I slid it into his hand...
Precap: Manyata's family brings shagun at Udays palace...
soo hope u guyzz like it
Tanvi :)))
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Such a cute part.i like this part no sry i love this part.cont soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wooo...gr88888...plzzz ontinue...n do PM me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Itz awesome update dear ,cont soon and do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely update...can't wait for the next chapter plzzz update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome update very gud u shuld right more n pm me also

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