ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145

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-JEHAN-

@-JEHAN-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#661

wowww...ranjana that was amazing..loved it loved it loveddd it!!!

so ranvijay ki meera a gai..thank u!!i was really feeling bad for him..poor guy!!!but uday 😭 right now i m feeling really very bad for him!!!

but awesoe update i loved it...thanks alot for the PM...and plz update soon...

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#662

Originally posted by: AKlover101
Superb update as always Ranjana!! The ManVeer scene was hot!! I really loved the update!! Plzzz do continue soon n thanks for the pm:D

Thank you FIzzaa!! 🤗 glad you found it hot ☺️

will try and no prpb 😊

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#663

Originally posted by: Grenade
Ever heard of a story that sizzles? I've only heard but this is the first time I've actually felt it. Uday tending to her wounds even when he himself was wounded by her so deeply! How selfless can someone be seriously..Prince Udayveer Singh can never be recreated! Hope you're out of your hiding place by now..Dont You Dare underestimate your story..it has all the elements of an amazingly beautiful story..the one I look most forward to! Its worth a million reads..the moment you created between them so Hot I cant describe in words..I really wanna thank you for such a brilliant update.! :)

You're comment literally makes me wanna pour out into tears! 😭 Really I'm THAT happy! 😳

Payal man you like make me ☺️ everytime!

Trust me though, and I'm not just making this up but like literally, your OS's are like inspiration for me..when I was writing this part i was just thinking that I must write it good enough so that people can actually FEEL the emotions the way I felt all the intensity when I read your stuff! Really Im just as big of a fan, maybe bigger, of your writing and if we both can connect to each other's writing so well, then that definitely means we got some serious soul-to-soul connection going on here! 😉 Thank you for being so wonderful and kind, because every time I doubt my SS, I will remember your words 😳

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showstealer

@showstealer

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#664

it was awesome just loved it very beautifully written loved it

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#665

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
loved the update!

Thank you!! 😳

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Tannu

@-Tannu-

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#666

Amazing SS
read all d parts...interesting SS..
loved dargah scene...beautifully written...
i lyk rannvijay's character..but didnt lykd the way he kissed manyata's neck...cheek tak thik tha..but neck..neck par kiss karna to uv ka right hai...am being soo besharam :P
njoyed reading all the parts..especially the part wen manyata drinks alcohol nd sleepover ;)

waise one doubt..is jay's character negative??
badi ajeeb bandi hai..kabhi achhi hojaati to kabhi evil...
aakhir hai kya wo..fasaad ki jad :/
and and and..the emotions of every character were beautifully expressed..specially rannvijay's emotions..nd dargah scene where manyata fall in love wid uv...DEEPLY <3

waiting for the next update...
cont soon:)

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#667

Originally posted by: Inkpen4877
Great update-so much pain and still a crazy amount of passion!

Thanks Kat!! ☺️ I'm seriously in love with your comments! They always describe my whole chap so well in one line! 😊😃

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sonu/ sonali

@preya_radev

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#668

awesome just loved dis part poor manveer... manyata realized her love for uday but lost on the same day that was really sad hmmm looks like ranvijay has got someone coming to his life soon update soon nd thanks for the pm

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Payal

@Grenade

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#669

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

You're comment literally makes me wanna pour out into tears!😭Really I'm THAT happy!😳
Payal man you like make me☺️everytime! Trust me though, and I'm not just making this up but like literally, your OS's are like inspiration for me..when I was writing this part i was just thinking that I must write it good enough so that people can actually FEEL the emotions the way I felt all the intensity when I read your stuff! Really Im just as big of a fan, maybe bigger, of your writing and if we both can connect to each other's writing so well, then that definitely means we got some serious soul-to-soul connection going on here!😉Thank you for being so wonderful and kind, because every time I doubt my SS, I will remember your words😳

Inspiration? Me?? Aw thats new! Trust me your comments make me just as happy! You know, everytime I post my updates, I always think if its good enough for you to like it because I consider your writing to be in whole different level..way much better than me.. If anything, I want to be able to write like you someday, I just love it so much!!
And me too! Me too!! If we acknowledge and appreciate each other's writing so much, there's got to be a special way our writing connects in..!! :)