ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1101

finally u updated

k coming to the update is was mindblowing😛

i loved how u should the inner turmoil of manyata and uday👏

the dialogues were so mature ⭐️

the scenes were so fabulously written with such maturity👏

the description of each setting and scenes was awesome

u have really grown as a written ranjna👍🏼

thanks so much for the pm😊

this update was very nice please update soon

but but if i gave such a nice comment that does not mean that i forgave u for not updating on my birthday

but its K next update should be full of manveer love filled romance in the rain

at the end this update was super duper but manveer romance was missing please let the confession take place soon no distubance😆

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sonu/ sonali

@preya_radev

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1102

hayee an awesome part finally vijay bhai made manyata understand and when manveer were in the hopstal i loved when manyata said
"I'm only Rajkumari Manyata and you're only Yuvraaj Udayveer as long as we live. Because after we die, it doesn't matter whether we're a Princess or a pauper, we're all just lifeless bodies...Phir kyun, kyun jab humme pata hai ke ek din hum sab ko miti mein hi mil jana hai, kyun hum zindagi ki kadar nahi karte. Kyun hum sapne dekhte hai lekin unhe pura karne ki himmat nahi karte?" Manyata asked and Uday was momentarily lost in her words realized what she was trying to tell him
omg i was so much into reading this update so uday was finally gone confess his love but manyata left now i really cant wait for the next part as they r gone unite update really really really really soon and thanks for the pm

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pwincess_sumi

@pwincess_sumi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#1103

Ahh plz make manyata n uday finallly get 2gther I cnt wait any longer plzzz but luved the update

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Inkpen4877

@Inkpen4877

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1104

Such a PHENOMENAL update!!

You have no idea, I had a REALLY crappy day- and then I got to read this update, and it made me SO happy! So now I have this perma grin on my face 😊

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hemvb

@hemvb

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1105

awesome update yaar..finally manyata admitted her love for uday..yayyy!!!!

but feel bad at the end..hopefully uday finds her..

do update soon yaar...all the best..cheers!!!!

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#1106

dat wass beautifulll!!!!!!!! uday and m ka phne convo wass jstt too good!!!!!! vijay and m ka convoo suprlike!!!!! m in uday's arms was soo lovellyy!!!!!!! oh my godd m wo rastein parr!!!!!!!!! bt its rainin dats a good thngg!!!!!!!!! plz plzz udpate the nxt part soon!!!!!!!!!!!😊

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Iqra iftikhar

@Ekra-Meer

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#1107

Day dreamer its an amazing ff u have here... I like the idea of bringing sombody as good as UV!!! This past week i read quite a lotof ff's and a 7-8 of them stood out... Urs is one of them!!! Definitely on my watchlist frm now on... KEEP SHININGGG!!!!

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#1108

Awesome ranjaan!
Loved it
The way u mentioned their loneliness without each ,manyata's realisation and wanting to get her love at the very moment wodout realisng physical pain the madness in her love and UV bounded by his own oath wow !
And i really loved the way manyta tried to explain a thing abt life &death and the way human choose to live

Cont soon :)

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Andrea Marie Villegas Baid

@diorslik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1109

Oh MY GOODNESSS that was so amazing i really like each and every bit of it and yess it was quite stretched but your flawless writing skills killed that😉 and what about meera and ranvijay?? but anyways the update was full with manveer manveer and manverr and manyata is seriously so stubborn how could she leave when she had an injured foot especially when she had Uday with her haaye if i was manyata i would have done all the dramas like uff i can't walk so that he picks me up in his arms and i enjoy getting goosebumps and blush blush blush but seriously you wrote it so well i really love you but i am angry itne time baad update kiya😡 so plzz update soon plus if i am not wrong you name is Rajana right??

Edited by AndreaBaid - 12 years ago