ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145

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Hannia

@hans1998

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1091

didi it was sooo awesome... simply brilliant just epicly loved it :p a big teddy thnx for the update

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Ravneet Kaur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1092

lovely update..pls this time cont soon..

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1093

Very well written... I loved the way you expressed Manyata and UV's feelings and dilemmas. Its true that we often spend too much time on useless egos and let go of the most important things in life... Waiting eagerly for the next update!

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Fekta Holic

@WhatTheF

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1094

wowww...awsome...update full of manveer haa romenticnahi tha but bahot achha tha...

very well written...uday and manyata convo. about life was veryyy...good...finally manyata ko akal aa gayi...update soon..and thanx for PM.

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Rubaa Rana

@adorable_rana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1095

Superb update Ranju👍🏼

Mixed and confused feeling of both are beautifully shown...loved it👏

hospital scene was so heart touching and the last M walking out of the hospital...too great...you are superb writer

Thanx for the pm dear and update soon like really soon🤗

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@-SilverAngel-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1096

Holy Friggin SH*T man!
That was unbelievably good!... It was very mature in content and the dialogues were worth pondering over... OMG and it definitely shows how you've grown as a writer... thinking and analyzing a situation and going indepth in it...

I was bowled over by its magnificence... enjoyed it a lot!👏

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Uday Lovie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1097

plzz plzz plzz update soon .. :):)

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kojagoryfan

@kojagoryfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1098

m speechless. beautifully written.hospital scene ...very touchy.love vijay bhai.love manveer scene.

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@-The_Tomboy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1099

ohhh myyy goshhh!!!!

why is ur ss so good!!!!!

man!!! i am so in love with ur ss!!!

it is so different from all the other ss's!!!

and maybe now they both will like dance in rain??

eee *cheesy smile* ur update was mindblowing!!

but i want to see ranvijay and meera romancing !! :P

eee i am totally in love with ur ss!!

Nd thanks for the update and pm!!

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Zainab

@--Zenu--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1100

Wonderful Update Ranjs! The Way U Wrote Both Them's Feelings Were Jus Fabulous! I'm Out Of Wrds! Stiill ManVeer Did'nt Unite🤔 But I Know Sabr Ka Phal Meetha Hoga B'cause Their Will Be A Dhansu Confession Of ManVeer In Ur Own Way 😉 Thanks 4 d PM & Update Soon 🤗

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