ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145 - Page 113

Originally posted by: swetsurati

wowww...awsome...update full of manveer haa romenticnahi tha but bahot achha tha...

very well written...uday and manyata convo. about life was veryyy...good...finally manyata ko akal aa gayi...update soon..and thanx for PM.

Originally posted by: adorable_rana

Superb update Ranju👍🏼

Mixed and confused feeling of both are beautifully shown...loved it👏

hospital scene was so heart touching and the last M walking out of the hospital...too great...you are superb writer

Thanx for the pm dear and update soon like really soon🤗

Originally posted by: mahi0809

Holy Friggin SH*T man!
That was unbelievably good!... It was very mature in content and the dialogues were worth pondering over... OMG and it definitely shows how you've grown as a writer... thinking and analyzing a situation and going indepth in it...

I was bowled over by its magnificence... enjoyed it a lot!👏

Originally posted by: vrinda.diva

plzz plzz plzz update soon .. :):)

Originally posted by: a.anu

m speechless. beautifully written.hospital scene ...very touchy.love vijay bhai.love manveer scene.

Originally posted by: Gowri05

ohhh myyy goshhh!!!!

why is ur ss so good!!!!!

man!!! i am so in love with ur ss!!!

it is so different from all the other ss's!!!

and maybe now they both will like dance in rain??

eee *cheesy smile* ur update was mindblowing!!

but i want to see ranvijay and meera romancing !! :P

eee i am totally in love with ur ss!!

Nd thanks for the update and pm!!

Originally posted by: ashukapoor007

Wonderful Update Ranjs! The Way U Wrote Both Them's Feelings Were Jus Fabulous! I'm Out Of Wrds! Stiill ManVeer Did'nt Unite🤔 But I Know Sabr Ka Phal Meetha Hoga B'cause Their Will Be A Dhansu Confession Of ManVeer In Ur Own Way 😉 Thanks 4 d PM & Update Soon 🤗

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

finally u updated

k coming to the update is was mindblowing😛

i loved how u should the inner turmoil of manyata and uday👏

the dialogues were so mature ⭐️

the scenes were so fabulously written with such maturity👏

the description of each setting and scenes was awesome

u have really grown as a written ranjna👍🏼

thanks so much for the pm😊

this update was very nice please update soon

but but if i gave such a nice comment that does not mean that i forgave u for not updating on my birthday

but its K next update should be full of manveer love filled romance in the rain

at the end this update was super duper but manveer romance was missing please let the confession take place soon no distubance😆

Originally posted by: preya_radev

hayee an awesome part finally vijay bhai made manyata understand and when manveer were in the hopstal i loved when manyata said
"I'm only Rajkumari Manyata and you're only Yuvraaj Udayveer as long as we live. Because after we die, it doesn't matter whether we're a Princess or a pauper, we're all just lifeless bodies...Phir kyun, kyun jab humme pata hai ke ek din hum sab ko miti mein hi mil jana hai, kyun hum zindagi ki kadar nahi karte. Kyun hum sapne dekhte hai lekin unhe pura karne ki himmat nahi karte?" Manyata asked and Uday was momentarily lost in her words realized what she was trying to tell him
omg i was so much into reading this update so uday was finally gone confess his love but manyata left now i really cant wait for the next part as they r gone unite update really really really really soon and thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: pwincess_sumi

Ahh plz make manyata n uday finallly get 2gther I cnt wait any longer plzzz but luved the update