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Posted: 13 years ago
it was an awesome update...loved it...the sword scene and the lap scene was just hayeee...😳...plzzz cont soon dear!!!
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Originally posted by: akshi_t

it was an awesome update...loved it...the sword scene and the lap scene was just hayeee...😳...plzzz cont soon dear!!!

thanks da will try 2 update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally got the time nd read it...😛
wow it was beautiful,... all the manveer scenes i loved it,,,,,,,,,,,,👏👏👏
plz continue soon
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sorry double post... net problems...😆😛
Edited by imkool - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: imkool

finally got the time nd read it...😛

wow it was beautiful,... all the manveer scenes i loved it,,,,,,,,,,,,👏👏👏
plz continue soon

thanks da will probably update 2mrw
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is dedicated to my sister anny...i love u sis...i updated it nw just 4 u actually to say sorry for ma mistake..have u forgiven me dear...

Part 30

As they entered RM Komal came with arti 'She took their arti

Manyata:maa ye sab kyun'

DS:Kyunki aapki aur Uday ki shaadi hone wali hain..

Manyata smiled and she n Uday went to her and took her blessings

Man,Uday:Khanikhamma ds

DS:Khammakhani beta' Manyata beta humhe fakar hain aap par aakir aapne sab kuch sambhala humari gheir maujudagi main'

Manyata:humne kuch nahi kiya dadisaab.jo bhi kiya Uday ne kiya.inke bina hum kuch nahi karpata.

DS:isiliye to hum hamesha kehti thi aap dono ek doosre ke liye hi bane ho'humhe khushi hain ki aap shaadi kar rahi hain.ab chalo bahut baatein ho gayi lambi safar se aayi ho aap sab jaakar fresh ho jayiye..Unnati beta aap bhi jayiye

Manyata:haan Unnati chalo'

All went to their rooms.Manyata looked at Uday .He gestured her to go.and Manyata too left.

DS:Uday aap humari saath chaliye humhe kuch kehna tha aapse'

Uday nodded.

At Manyata's room..

Manyata was looking out through the window and was engulfed in her dreams. Just the Unnati entered,but manyata didn't noticed

Unnati:Bhabhi sa apne sapno ki duniya se bahar aayiyena

Manyata realized thn and turned to see Unnati sitting in her bed and looking at her.

Manyata:unnati aap kab aayi.

Unnati:jee hum tab aayi jab aap humare dada ko sapnom main dekh rahi thi..

Manyata with a smile went and sat near unnati.. aisa kuch nahi unnati.

Unnati:hmm vaise abhi shaadi main zyada din nahi hain ..i think we must start our shopping soon infact today

Manyata:haan Unnati humhe aaj hi jaana hoga..pehle ye bathao kya hum shaadi ki baad suit pehan sakti ho ya saari hi pehenni hogi.

Unnati:jab dada ke saath ho tab suit pehan sakti hoon Manyata lekin public main aapko sari pehenni hogi.I mean more than Dada's wife u r going to be the next Maharani so u'll have to b careful even in ur dressing.aakir jaigarh ki Maharani hogi aap.

Manyata:mmm Jaigarh ki Maharani Mrs. Manyata Udaybeer Singh wow sounds gr8 isn't it Unnati

And both started smiling

Unnati took Manyata's hands in hers.

Unnati:Manyata aaj hum bahut khush hain aakir aap humare dada ka ho jayegi hamesha hamesha ke liye..aapko pata hain humne kabhi apni dada ki chehre main itna khushi nahi dekha hain jitna aapki saathgi se hoti hain.aap dada ko complete karti hain.ab bas jaldi aajao Manyata unki zindagi main.

Manyata smiled:haan meri pyari nanad bahut jald aajaoongi aapki dada ko 24 hrs thang karne ke liye..

Unnati:mmm not a bad idea.

They both hi-fi each other..


Meanwhile at DS's office

Uday:DS yeh kaise ho sakti hain.I mean humne to '.

DS:humhe pata hain Uday magar jo humne apne aankhon se dekha woh galat bhi to nahi ho sakti

Uday:par ...

DS:jo bi ho bahut jald humhe sacchai ka pata chal jayega beta aap chinda mat kijiye.lekin pls jab tak Manyata aur aapki shaadi nahi ho jati tabtak hum chahti hain ki aap saavdani le.

Uday:jee.

After an hour all assembled at Dining table.Manyata came and sat near Uday.

Manyata:maa dad kahan hain.subah se nahi dekha.

Komal:beta Maharaj aur Giri bhaisaab aap dono ki shaadi ki thaiyyari main vyast hain..

Manyata:lekin maa abhi shaadi main ek hafta hain na phir itni busy kaise..

DS:Manyata beta aapki aur Uday ki shaadi 2 riyasaton ki baat hain.isiliye humhe bahut saare thaiyyari karne hoge.

Uday:haan Manyata pehle humhe Devgarh aur Jaigarh ki prajah ko ye khushkabri dene hain..phir Mahasabha ko khaas nimandran dene honge 'aur ye toh 2 riyasaton ke beech ka rishta hain isiliye shaadi bhi bahut doom daam se hona chahiye thaki kisiko shikayat ka mauka na mile.

DS:Bilkul..vaise Manyata beta aapko shaadi ki shopping karni hain na.

Manyata:jee Daadisaab kya hum aaj ja sakti hain

DS:Ofcourse beta .Par aap sirf Uday ki saat hi bahar jayegi.

Manyata:jee DS

Vijay:Nanisaab ye J kahan chale gayi.kahin Uday-Manyata ki shaadi ki baat sunkar Suicide toh nahi ki..

Menaka:Vijay'

DS:J ko humne ek business trip pe bechdiya jagat ke saath'

Vijay:Kya J aur Jagat'

DS:kya hua Vijay any problem.

Vijay :jee nahi

Vijay(to unnati): bechara Jagat.anywys accha hain kam se kam M bhai ki shaadi main koi pareshaani nahi hogi.

DS heard this and she smiled

DS(to herself):nahi vijay chahe tab tak chahe J vaapas bhi aa jaye lekin humare hote hue iss shaadi acche se hogi..hum kisiko bhi ab Manyata aur Uday ke beech aane nahi doonge

All had their breakfast and was getting ready in front of mirror.Just thn Uday entered M's room locking the room from behind

Uday:hi princess nice suit..Manyata just smiled

Uday:vaise Unnati keh rahi thi ki aapne unse poocha ki kya aap suit pehen sakti hain shaadi ke baad..

Manyata:haan toh

Uday:nahi'

Manyata:Haan Unnati ne kaha ki hum aapki saath akele ho tab suit pehen sakti hoon.

Uday:mmm tab bhi nahi..

Manyata was looking in to the mirror and was giving a confused look

Manyata:kyun?

Uday caught her waist from back and whispered to her.

Uday:taaki hum aapko syada pyar kar sake'Manyata's heart beat increased'. he started moving his hands seductively through her body.

Manyata closed her eyes to enjoying the moment to maximum.Her face turned red completely .Uday started kissing her face and shoulders.He opened the zip of her dress a bit and moved her dress slightly down her shoulders and was sucking her body..Manyata was completely hypnotized with his movement .He slowly moved to her back and started kissing her neck and back.Manyata was moaning in pleasure.Just thn Uday's mobile ranged disturbing them.Manyata soon distanced from Uday'Uday took his mobile and checked It was Unnati'

Uday:haan choti we r coming..Manyata is taking too much time in getting ready yar'

Manyata looked towards Uday with shy and Uday was giving his signature smirk.

Manyata soon got ready and they all left for shopping.As expected Media was waiting at mall with their bundle of question..

Reporter 1:Yuvraj Udaybeer Singh is it true that u r getting married to Yuvrani Manyata?

Reporter 2:Yuvrani Manyata are u happy with this marriage?

Reporter 3:Y is the marriage going to happen in a short notice?

Guards cleared the way to the entrance.On reaching entrance Uday replied..

Uday:ya its true we r marrying soon and we both r happy with our Marriage and about short notice well u must understand this marriage was fixed 16 yrs back .do u think 16yrs is a short period.

Reporter4:Yuvrani Manyata r u indeed happy with this marriage.

Manyata:I hope my fiance explained it well..do u doubt him? his words are mine too.Iam very much happy with him.

She smiled looking at Uday and both went inside

They went to a designer shop.Uday selected a white n red combination bridal lehenga for her and asked her to try that.

Manyata was about to take Unnati that Uday stopped them.

Uday:choti aap baki dress dekhlijiye'humare paas zyada waqt nahi hain'Iwill go with her

Vijay:Haan Unnati.leave them alone and give some attention to these dress.Its high time u change ur wardrobe too.Unnati nodded and Manyata and Uday left.

Manyata soon dressed up and came out to show it to Uday.He was completely mesmerized to see her in that.The dress do suited her that much.He was so busy in looking details that he didn't heard manyata saying'Manyata jerked him

Manyata:Uday kuch to bolo hws it'jaldi bolo bahut baari hain ye dress'

Uday:its cool ..just then he saw shadow of some1 in the dressing room'He turned back but didn't saw any1.Uday was a bit careful thn.

Uday:k manyata so we will fix this k.

Manyata nodded.

Uday:nw come n change it.He stepped in to the dressing room and pulled her in closing the door

Manyata:Mr aap yahan kya kar raha hain.bahar jayiye iss tharah changing room par enter karna acchi baat nahi hain.

Uday:oho Manyata ab hum dono ke beech kya hain.waise bhi ek hafte baad aap yeh sab humare saamne hi karega haina..

Manyata:chee besharam

Uday:accha baba hum uss tharaf nahi dekhoge k..aap changekijiye..

Manyata:yani aap bahar nahi jayegi.She was abt to push him out but something in his eyes stopped her.

Manyata:Uday kya hua aap pareshan kyun hain..

Uday:kuch nahi princess 'humhe aapki bahut chinda ho rahi hain isiliye'He was abt to move out but Manyata stopped him.

Manyata:aap yahin rahiye Uday par haan don't look'

Uday:of course her highness'

Manyata started to change her dress .Uday saw Manyata's mobile being kept over a side'Uday was in his thoughts

Manyata soon changed the dress and patted Uday

Manyata:Uday ho gayi'Uday turned to her.he cupped her face'.aapko dress pasand aaya'.Manyata nodded .Uday kissed her forehead

Uday:mmm so shall we move.

Manyata nodded .Manyata was about to take her mobile.But Uday holded her hand and soon moved out.Manyata was about to say that Unnati came over there to try a dress.Vijay was accompanying her.

Unnati:Manyata aapko who pasand aaya'

Manyata nodded.

Unnati:so we will buy it k and also humne aur vijay bhanna ne aap keliye aur bhi sarees choose karke rakha hain..pls select from them k tab tak let me try this.

Uday and Manyata nodded.Uday took Vijay to a side

Uday:Vijay bhanna pls stay here until Unnati comes out

Vijay:kya hua Uday any problem'

Uday:kuch nahi but we need to b careful'guards can't come over here so we must ourselves take care of us..

Vijay nodded

Manyata forgot abt her mobile.she moved with uday out.

Manyata was running her hands through many sarees and Uday was talking to sum1 in phone.just thn she felt as if someone was gazing at her.She turned to look but no one was there but the dress stand over there was moving as though some1 was indeed there..Manyata moved to check ..Whn she was about to reach there,she felt some1's hands over her shoulders and jerked 'It was Uday..

Uday:Manyata kya hua ..aap darr kyun gayi..

Manyata:kuch nahi Uday humhe laga shayad wahan koi tha..Uday too checked but didn't see any1'

Uday:shayad aapko laga hoga yahan to sachmein koi nahi hain..vaise bhi guards hain na entrance pe.jabtak humari shopping nahi ho jati yahan koi outsiders nahi aa sakti so relax'

Manyata smiled and again started looking dresses.Eventhough Uday made her relax he himself knewed something was wrong'Once the shopping was done they all left the shop'

Unnati:Manyata aapko matching jewelry aur accessories khareedna hain na'

Manyata was about to say yes but Uday interrupted nahi choti who sab hum mangvadenge'abhi hum sab ko nikhalna chahiye'

Manyata:lekin..

Vijay:lekin kuch nahi M bhai Uday ne kaha na sab kuch mangvadenge 'phir kya its late nw we must leave..

They just reached the entrance that Manyata remembered her phone'

Manyata:oh no Uday I think I forgot my phone at trial room.

Uday:k we will go n take it..

They reached back and searched the room but it was not there.Uday tried to ring but the mobile was switched off now.He asked the shopkeepers but none saw that'

Manyata:Uday I kept it over here.

Uday:I know it Manyata even I saw that.unnati aap yahi trial room use kiya tha na.

Unnati:nahi dada I went to the next1..

Manyata was all sad..

Uday:oh no princess its k we will have a new 1 k.i will order it ri8 nw and u will get ur new phone and sim within 30 minutes nw just b happy'

Manyata:but Uday it had many photos and all in that'

Uday:its k Manyata I will try to find it out k nw just relax.

Manyata sighed

They all left the shop and went to Uday nivas Hotel.After having dinner Uday dropped Manyata and Vijay RM.She was so much tired so she just went to her room.

Uday and Vijay had a talk..

Uday :Vijay bhanna pls make sure Manyata is never alone and do check the windows and all in her room at ni8 ... if possible keep it locked always and also make sure that no one other than family members talk to her even on phone..Well DS will b taking care but i want u too to check everything since u r too close to her,she will say even her small worries to u...

Vijay:Uday bhanna is everything alri8.

Uday :not exactly...i shouldn't say u but at present its important that atleast u knew about everything..

Uday told Vijay everything.

Vijay was almost shocked...

Uday:so i hope u understood the seriousness...take care of her


to be continued...

Precap:mehendi ceremony

Thanks for reading .Hope u like it'pls leave back ur comments..ad do hit like

Edited by snowdream - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vampire12345678

awesome please do continue

thanks😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Deedu thanx for giving me such a beautiful update...deedu dat was not mistake ,dat was jus ur dadz order...itz true dat i was angry with u ,but wen u gav me reason den my angryness flyz far far far away,,,,,,,,,,,u r my deedu,my jaan ,my jigar ,my heart ,my soul toh ziyada time tak angry kaise reh sakti hoon...i luv u deedu frm bottom of heart...abt ur update itz speechless,standing ovtn for u frm me...deedu too much suspense na,:):):)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: annysyed

Deedu thanx for giving me such a beautiful update...deedu dat was not mistake ,dat was jus ur dadz order...itz true dat i was angry with u ,but wen u gav me reason den my angryness flyz far far far away,,,,,,,,,,,u r my deedu,my jaan ,my jigar ,my heart ,my soul toh ziyada time tak angry kaise reh sakti hoon...i luv u deedu frm bottom of heart...abt ur update itz speechless,standing ovtn for u frm me...deedu too much suspense na,:):):)

thanks baby...too much suspense😉 ya it is...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Deedu i m sry like karna bool gyi thi,seede cmnt pe ayi but ab like kiya...wat abt my signiture

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