Uday U r mine..FF (last part 44 pg 150 )

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Posted: 13 years ago

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PART 3

Uday turned back to see a hurted Manyata.She was lying on the floor..His face was red with anger of letting the stranger leave so soon...Afterall the stranger tried to hurt his future Maharani...He came to M...

Manyata: Are Halkat vede tu uski peeche kyun jaa rahi hoon jabki mein yahan padi hoon..Wah Udaybeer tujhe mere bhilkul phikar nahi...

Manyata didn't noticed the wound in Uday's hand due to darkness

Uday :Princess aap teek hain?

Uday took M in his arms and slowly lied her in bed.

By the time Vijay n Unnati came hearing noises.

Vijay:Manyata bhai aap teek tho hain na..?

Vijay put on the lights

Manyata:haan vijay bhai mein bhilkul teek hoon..

By this Vijay n Unnati noticed that blood was dripping from Uday's hands

Vijay: khoon.Uday tumhare haat mein tho chot lagi hain..

Unnati:dada...

Uday:choti koi baat nahi.Ek chota sa chot hain.Unnati ran to get first aid box

Manyata(worried):...Uday yeh sab kuch meri vajah se hua ...Kya saroorat thi Hero bhanne ki...

She took a shall and wrapped it over Uday's hands

Uday:oye princess agar main waqt par nahi aati toh aapka kya hota

Manyata :kuch nahi...Mein sherni hoon.Akele uski khabar lethi Haan Nahi Toh

Vijay tried to call the doctor.But the climate was bad and no doctors were available...And the family doctor doctorsaab was out of station...Unnati brought first aid box.

Manyata told Unnati that she will dress Uday's hands..Uday nodded to Unnati n she gave the first aid box to M..

Uday:Choti,Vijay bhanna raat bahut ho chuki hain.aap dono jaakar aaram kijiye..Kal bahut kaam hain.

Unnati:par dada

Vijay:Haan Unnati humhe chalna chahiye.Manyata hain na Udaybeer ka dhyan rakhne...And he gave a smirk

Unnati:(With a small smile):teek hain dada pls take care.Manyata gud ni8

Vijay:Gud ni8

manyata nodded

Manyata slowly cleaned the wound...She was too much worried..Manyata carefully starting dressed the wound..All the time Uday was gazing at Manyata.Manyata 's hair curls was coming to her face nd she coldn't take it back because her hands were busy in dressing.Uday took the curls behind her ears .Manyata didn't noticed...And he was still looking her with full of love...

Manyata:Udaybeer tujhe dard to nahi ho rahi hain

Uday who was too busy in gazing Manyata that he didn't heard what M said

Manyata:Uday...

Uday:Haan princess.Aapne kuch kaha..

Manyata:haan tu kahaan khoyi thi. dard ho raha hain

Uday:Nahi princess.Ye toh ek chottasa chot hain...

Manyata:Yeh chota sa...Tu na apna bhilkul dhyan nahi rakhti...

Uday (with his smirk).Aap hain na meri khayal rakhne keliye😳

Manyata:Accha ab chal ho gayi...

Manyata was about to get up but couldn't...

Uday: Kya hua princess

Manyata:pata nahi shayad moch aagayi hain meri paer main

Uday:Still Manyata:And he started massaging her leg

Uday:Ab kaise hain priness..dard kam hua

Manyata:Haan Udaybeer...Ab bas tu bhi jaakar aaram kar..

Uday:Nahi princess aaj raat hum yahi rukenge.Humhe aapki bahut chinda ho rahi hain.aap so jaayiye..

Manyata:par...

Uday:koi par var nahi.Tum chinda mat karo.Mein yahan sofa mein letungi...

Manyata:teek hain gud ni8..Uday :Gud ni8 Manyata

Precap:Rajyabhishek

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Edited by krishna1989 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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superb...do continue soon..n thnxx 4 da PM...

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snowdream

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Zaynmohin

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Pliz pm me on NeXT update
It is so lovely that i need to continue reading

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part 4

Meanwhile J n Dai maa were shivering with anger of missing the chance of getting M killed..

Jai:Sabkuch khatam ho gayi...Kal Manyata ki rajyabhishek hain.Uske baad mere paas kuch nahi bachegi..All spot light will go to that kaamvali...Kyun ye mere saath hi kyun ho raha hain...Kal se Uday bhi humse dhoor ho jayengi and she birst in to tears.Daimaa tried to console her but couldn't...

The morning of Rajyabhishek...

The whole Mahal was filled with reporters,members from Mahasabha,close friends and relatives..But none spotted M and Uday...Komal went to M's room.when she opened she was astonished to see Uday sleeping in M's room.She went to Uday and waked him up.

Komal:Kya hua beta .Aap yahan kaise aayi iss sofa mein..Aur aapki haat mein ye kya he..patti...Kya hua...

M also waked up hearing Komal's voice

Uday:kuch nahin anty komal kal raat kissi ne Manyata par hamla kiya...Aur humhe chot lagi...

Tears rooled from komal's eyes.she turned to M

Manyata:beta aap teek tho hain...Aap museebat mein thi aur humhe pata bhi nahi chala..Humhe maaf kar de beta...

Manyata:Nahi maa .Aap maafi mat mangiye...Ismein aapka kya kuzzur hain.Aur waise bhi mujhe kuch nahi hua..Haan humhe bachathe Udaybeer ko chot lagi

Komal:Thanks UDAY beta.Aapne har baar Manyata ko bachathe aayi hain...Aap nahi hoti tho hum humari rani bitiya ka kya hota...

Uday:Nahi aunty komal.Manyata jitna aapka hain uthna bhi humara hain...Woh humai zimmedari hain

Komal went near Uday:Ab aapki chot kaise hain beta .kahin dard tho nahi ho rahi hain...Beta aapki haat mein chot lagi thi ,aapko apni bed pe sona chahiye tha na.Iss tharah sofa par sona...

Uday:Woh aunty Komal Manyata ko akele chod karne ka mann nahi kiya.Isiliye...

Komal:Hum samajthe hain beta.Lekin aapne humhe Uddaya kyun nahi. Beta aapko apni bhi khayal rakhni chahiye...

Uday:Hum teek hain aunty komal.

Komal:Teek hain beta.Aap jayiye beta ,aapko bhi tho thayar hona hain.Aap jaakar fresh h jaayiye Aur hum aathe hain aapki haat ki dressing karne keliye .

And she gave Uday a kiss in his forehead..

Meanwhile M was watching the convo b/w her mom n Uday.She felt extreme happiness with the love her mother has for Uday..

Komal:Uddiye beta aap fresh ho jaayiye.Aaj hum apni rani bitiya ko thayyar karvayengu

Manyata:Such maa. and she went n hug her mother.

M went for having Royal bath with haldi kesar,milk..etc.When M was bathing Komal went to Uday's room n dressed his wound. and was sharing her worries

Komal:Beta humhe bahut darr lag raha hain.Kaun he woh jo humari beti ki jaan ke padi hain...

16 saal pehle humne devgarh mein humari beti ko khoya tha.Issiliye humhe bahut darr lag raha hain...

Uday:Aap chinda mat kijiye Aunty.Hum hain na Manyata humari amanat hain.Hum unka pura dhyan rakhengi..Humari hote hue unhe ek kharoj bhi nahi aayengi.Yeh humara waada hain aapse..

Komal blessed Uday n asked him to get ready

M's room.

Komal:Manyata .Yeh aapki shahi dress hain.Yehi aapko pehna hoga...Aur aapkeliye humne matching gehne bhi lekar aayi hoon.Aapko aajsab se khoobsurat lagna hain...

Manyata:teek hain maa...

Komal got Manyata ready..

Komal:Teek hain beta yahan se aapkoakele hi aana hain.Hum chalthe beta intsaam dekhne keliye...

Manyata nodded...komal went and Manyata was left alone...

J :Yuvrani Manyata

Manyata: J aayiye..

J:What do u mean .Humhe yahan aane ke liye kissi ki ijaasat nahi chahiye..

Manyata:Bilkul J .Tum meri choti behen ho .Tum jab chahe aa sakti hoon.

J: Oh really...Humhe pata nahi tha..

Manyata:Tum mujse itni naphrat kyun karti hoon...

J:kyun karti hoon??? are u joking...Aisa ek wajah batado jisse hum tumse naphrat na kare.Bachpan se hi hum yahan sab ke saamne thi phir bhi sabki aankhen yahan thak ki mujhe janam dene waali maa ka bhi tumhe hi doondthi thi..Jaise ki hum sabke saamne hokar bhi na ho..Tumne humse sab kuch cheena...I hate u Manyata Jiji .Aur humari Naphrat din ba din badega...

J: Agar Aap marr bhi jaye tab bhi hum aapse kabhi pyarr nahi karenge Yuvranisa

she left with tearful eyes.Manyata tried to hold her bach but she didn't waited...

Precap:The new Yuvrani Manyata Kumari

PS: I really wished in the show that there is a motherly affectionate b/w Uday n Komal.But nothing happened hence i thought to include it in ma OS

Do comment ur opinion

Edited by krishna1989 - 13 years ago