You Are My Miracle (FF) pt 21 upd (Akash returns) - Page 74

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ilvuday

dat was awesome allu...bechare uday ki band hi baj gayi...i loved it👍🏼...haaa haa but yuvraj hoga ki yuvraani?...nyways thanks for pm...😃

Awww thank you 😃
Yup poor uday baby...M an therm se uv ki band bajaye gi 😉
Lol you have to wait n watch ke yuvraj ho ga ya yuvrani 😆
Thank you so much for reading 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: alissa345

Hey Jenny *hugs*
lol thanks M had circuit's bhoot in her 😆
I know right...uv-m are too cute...just love them 😃
Lol yes updated so quick 😳 will try to update next one soon too 😛
Thank you so much basanti...love ya 🤗


hey lizzy...🤗
ur welcome dear...😳luv u too...😳update soon...
and yeah congrats...100 pages...👏ur FF completed 100 pages...👏👏congrats...🤗
chocolates for u...😃
luv u and ur FF...update soon...m waiting...😳

BASANTI

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Posted: 13 years ago
awe! i lov manveer convo n there fight over the baby.manyta-vb scene was funny.great update.cont soon.thnx 4pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys this is part 20...hope you guys like it...

Part # 20

The next day in hotel Uday Niwas...Uday was in his room when one of his security people comes to meet him...

Servant: Uday banna aapse milney aapke security head aaye hai...

Uday: security...iss waqt...???...alright bhejo ussey...

Servant: jee Uday banna...

Uday's security head comes in...

Security person (to Uday): Good morning yuvraaj ji...hamein aapko kuch zaroori information deni thi...

Uday: haan...boliye kya baat hai...

Security person: sir aapko yaad hai humne aapse kaha tha ke koi aapka peecha kar raha hai...

Uday: haan yaad hai hamein...lekin woh toh kaafi time pehle ki baat hai aur ab toh everything is fine...right...???

Security person: sir hamein pata chala hai ke woh aadmi aaj bhi aap ka peecha kar raha hai...aur toh aur woh phone calls jo rajkumari jee ko aatey the private number se woh bhi ussi aadmi ke hain...sir aapki jaan ko khatra hai...

Uday: kya...aur yeh sab tum hamein ab bata rahey ho...kon hai yeh aur kya chahta hai humse...???

Security person: sir humne uss aadmi ka naam pata kar liya hai...uss ka naam Akash Verma hai aur woh illegal drugs aur smuggling ka business karta hai...woh bohat hi psycho type ka aadmi hai...sir hamein aapki security badha deni chahiye...aur sir ussey kya chahiye yeh hum pata nahi laga paye...

Uday: Akash Verma kya chahta hai aur woh aisa kyun kar raha hai iss ka jawab humse behtar aur koi nahi desakta...hamari security badhaney ki koi zarrorat nahi hai...humsirf itna chahtey hain ke rajkumari Manyata ke saath har waqt, 24 hours security mojood ho...Am I clear on that...her waqt...

Security person: ji sir...jaisa aapka hukum...rajkumari ji ki safety ki zimadari ab hamari hai...aap befikar rahein...sir ab hum aap se ijaazat chahtey hain...

Uday: aik minute...hamarey aik sawaal ka jawaab do...kya abhi bhi Akash Verma rajkumari ji ko blackmailing calls karta hai...???

Security person: jee sir...phone calls ab bhi aatey hain...in fact uss blackmailer ka aakhari phone call kal subha 9:00 bajey aaya tha...

Uday: theek hai...rajkumari ji ki safety ka khaas khayaal rakhna...baki hum khud sambhaal leingey...

Security person leaves...

Uday: (to himself) Princess tum ne itni badi baat humse kaisey chupayi...kyun ho tum itni ziddi...sab kuch akeley hi sehti rahi kisi se kuch nahi kaha...bas ab tumhari aur zid nahi chalegi...ab iss matter ka "THE END" hum khud kareingey...(evil smirk)

In Rajmahal the preparations for the wedding were in progress. Everyone was busy with the preparations Komal was taking care of manyata's wardrobe, jay was suppose to take care of manyata's look, vijay bhai was handling the decorations and DS was busy with the guest invitations and brijraaj was doing nothing, he was too depressed that his little girl would soon be leaving him...

Manyata was in her room pacing back and forth looking really tensed...there was something wrong, something that she did not wanted to share with anyone...

Manyata (to herself): bas ab aur nahi...main aur aisey nahi reh sakti...itney din tak maine kisi ko kuch pata lagney nahi diya aur ab...oh God kya karoon mein kab tak chupaoon...main Uday se aur jhoot nahi bol sakti...par ussey sach bata kar pareshaan bhi toh nahi kar sakti...God help me...

Manyata's phone rings...and the sound of the ringer scares her...she looks at the number and her face turns pale...she looked scared, the phone was still ringing...she was staring at her cellphone looking terrified just when she was about to pick it up komal comes into the room and manyata hits the ignore button on her cellphone...

Komal: manyata beta aap aisey kyun khari hai...(she touches her forehead)...aur yeh...why are you sweating beta...aapki tabyat toh theek hai na...

manyata: tabyat...haan maa tabyat ko kya hua hai...bas woh thori garmi lag rahi thi...aur kuch nahi...

Komal: par beta A.C toh sabse low temperature peh hai...chaliye koi baat nahi...yeh lijiye (she hands her the wedding dress)...Unnati ne bheja hai aapka size make sure karne ke liye...chaliye ab jaldi se hamein pehen kar dikhayiye...

Manyata: (she takes the dress, she looked like she was in pain, all of a sudden she threw the dress on her bed and ran to the bathroom...Vijay bhai was outside the room and he saw this)

komal: (looking worried) Beta kya hua aap ko...Manyata beta...

Manyata: (comes out wiping her face and looking very weak)...jee maa..

Komal: beta aapko vomiting kaissey...???...aapki tabyat kharaab hai...???

Manyata: (looked scared and confused she didn't know what to tell her...)...woh maa kya hai na...

Vijay bhai who was standing outside the room...he knew all about Manyata's pregnancy and so he came to rescue his little sister...

Vijay bhai (to komal): Maamisa...Maamisaa...aap bhi kya pooch rahi hai M bhai se...hum batatey hain kya hua hai ussey...

Manyata: (looks scared thinking that Vijay bhai would spill out everything)...Vijay bhai main batati hoon na maa ko..

Vijay bhai: aahhaaa...dont worry M bhai hum batatey hain na...(to komal) Maamisaa kya hai na aaj subha hum ne hamari pyaari jiji ko aik saath 6 samosas khatey hue pakra tha...issi liye madam ko loosies aur vomiting ho rahi hai...(to Manyata)...seriously M bhai apne tummy tum tum peh kuch toh rahem karo...(he winks at Manyata, who now looks relieved)

Komal: (looks at Manyata)...aik saath six samosas...???

Manyata: haan maa woh mujhey na zorroon se bhook lag rahi thi...

Komal: chaliye koi baat nahi...aap aaram kariye aur dress trials hum baad mein kareingey...okay...(she kisses her forhead)...ab hum chaltey hain baki ki tayariyaan bhi toh dekhni hai...(she leaves, leaving Manyata and Vijay Bhai alone)

Manyata looks at Vijay bhai and says...

Manyata: seriously Vijay bhai...???...samosa...???...aur kuch nahi aaya aapke chalu dimaag mein...???

Vijay bhai: woh kya hai na...abhi abhi hum samosa hi kha kar aarahe the..issi liye hamarey dimaag mein samosa hi bhara hua hai...btw tum hamein thanks kehney ki bajaye attitude dikha rahi ho...batameez larki...imagine karo agar baby wali baat hamarey munh se slip ho jati toh...???

Manyata: Vijay bhai...aahista bolo...nahi toh hum paakrey jayengey...

Vijay bhai: jee nahi...hum nahi tum aur Uday pakrey jaogey...samjhi...

Manyata: Vijay bhai...agar kisi ko kuch bola na aap ne...toh yaad hai na aap main aur mera joota...(evil smirk)

Vijay bhai: fine...nahi boleingey...bas aik baar baby ko aaney do...ussey acchi training deingey tumhari naak mein dum karne ki...

Manyata: accha ho gayi aapki evil planning...ab jao...jao...(she pushes him)

Vijay bhai: jaa rahe hain...jaa rahey hain...MUMMY JEE...(he laughs and leaves the room)

Later that night around 9:00 manyata was in her room sleeping...she wasn't feeling well...she was dreaming when Uday came into her room to check on her...

Manyata sleeping...and Uday comes in...

Uday: Awww...hamari miss haan nahi toh sote hue kitni cute lagti hai...(he goes near her and sits on the bed and looks at her adoringly)

Manyata in her sleep blabbering...

Manyata (in her sleep): ummm...udayyy...babbyy love you...hhhmmm...mujhey chor ke mat jaana...please mat jaana...

Uday (to himself): princess...tum kitni kitni kitni cute ho...hum tumhe kabhi chor ke nahi jayenge...love you baby...(he kisses her on the forehead)

Manyata: (still blabbering) choro uday...kya kar rahey ho...choorrooo...(giggles)...it's ticklish...

Uday (to himself): (looking very curious)...yeh Manyata ka dream toh bohat interesting sound kar raha hai...seriously princess tum khwaab mein bhi...(he smiles)

Manyata turns the other way and grabs uday's shirt...and somehow wakes up...

Manyata: (looking confused upon seeing Uday and jumps up)...Tumm...???

Uday: woah woah...relax princess...hum hain vijay banna ka bhoot nahii...(he laughs)

Manyata: (yawns)...hhhmmm...iss waqt Uday sab theek hai na...

Uday: haan sweetheart sab theek hai...hum toh bas apni badi aur choti rajkumari se milney aaye hai...hows our baby doing...???

Manyata: (puts her hand on her belly and looks down)...our baby is doing just fine...dekho baby daddy aaye hai...you can hear him right...???

Uday: (smiles)...hi baby...daddy loves you...(to Manyata)...princess tum itni jaldi so gayi...sab theek toh hai na...koi pareshaani...???

He indirectly asked Manyata if there was something wrong...he wanted her to tell him about the Akash and his blackmailing phone calls...but Manyata ignores it and tries to distract...

Manyata: (silent)

Uday: kaho princess...tum humse kuch kehna chahti ho...???

Manyata: (looking a little scared and tries to distract him)...jee nahi mujhey kuch nahi kehna...par yuvraaj jee aapko kuch nahi kehna...???...hum dekh rahey hain aaj kal aap hum se flirt nahi kartey...aur na hi hamari koi tareef...haan...baat kya hai...???

Uday (to himself): toh princess tum apni zid nahi chorogi...kuch nahi batao gi hamein...ab iss masley se hum khud hi deal kareingey...

Manyata: (snaps in his face)...hai koi jawaab yuvraaj Udaybeer singh...???

Uday: haan beautiful hai na jawaab...waisey tum bohat cute ho...pretty ho...

Manyata: (moves up, grabs his collar and starts pulling him close)...aur...???

Uday: aur...tumhari aankhein itni deep hain ke un mein koi bhi dive maar de...tumharey baal itney sundar hai ke hum unhi main kho jaatey hai...

Manyata: (still pulling him close)...aur..???

Uday: tum itney sexy ho ke tumhe dekh kar hum control hi nahi kar patey...(he giggles)

Manyata all of a sudden pulls him super closer...now there was no space between the two...Manyata wraps her arm around his neck and keeps staring at his lips...

Uday: princess...(she cuts him off)

Manyata: sshhh...(she puts her finger on his lips)...Udayyy...tum ho toh sab kuch hai tum nahi toh kuch nahi...mujhey kabhi akeley mat chorna...mein jee nahi paongi...

She gets even closer...she was lost in his eyes...she kisses him...she was holding on to him tightly...the kiss was still going on...both were lost into each other they didn't care about the world around them..there kiss looked like the first kiss of young lovers madly in love with each other and craving for each other...Manyata was still kissing him, she was not willing to let him go...her hands was at the back of his neck...she was holding his shirt in a fist...the whole atmosphere was getting intense...it was not simply a kiss but it was more like an assurity for Manyata that Uday belonged to him...every part of him was purely hers and no one else's...both were still lost in the kiss...Manyata's stomach growled at which uday laughed and the kiss broke...both looked at each other and started laughing...

Uday: princess...lagta hai baby ko bhook lagi hai...issi liye mummy daddy ko disturb kar diya..

Manyata smiles and Uday hugs her...

Uday: I love you princess...

TO BE CONTINUED...

Hey guys this was part 20...hope you guys liked it...please do leave your comments and hit the like button if you enjoyed reading...love you all 🤗

Love,

Alissa😊

Edited by alissa345 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow...what an update...awesome job princess...I guess I'm the first to one to comment..lol...
Who is this person following Uday n also callin M...dont say its Akash...plzzz update sooon...cant wait for the next part...!!!!! Love u...!! miss u...!!! muuaahhh..!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
its freakin awesome:)loved it..update d next part ASAP..n one more thing pls update Royal comedy soon,its been so long since u updated it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update Alissa! Can't wait to read what's next!
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice+cute+funny update..thanx for pm..keep entertaining us with ur awsm updates..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it... I hate this aakash !!! He is getting on my nerves now...please do something abt him...I don't want him to spoil Uv-Manyata's marriage unlike DEK...neway it's always nice reading ur FF... Please update next part soon yarr... Thanks for this Update and PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
aww...at was so cute btw congo on a century page completion🤗...amazing work beautifully written
ps thanx for pm👏

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