Awww thanks...I'm glad you liked it :)Originally posted by: navyan07
</div>Wow!It was totally awesum!!!Even my sister(cousin) liked all the six parts very much.<div>
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Awww thanks...I'm glad you liked it :)Originally posted by: navyan07
</div>Wow!It was totally awesum!!!Even my sister(cousin) liked all the six parts very much.<div>
Hey guys, this is part 7...hope you all like it...
PART # 7
Uday and Manyata went downstairs and everyone one got back to the dinner table...they finished eating and were now having drinks...Manyata while talking to unnati noticed that her phone was ringing...when she checked her phone it was a text message...she read the message and suddenly her face turned pale, she looked like all the blood in her body froze...she stood up from her seat and said...
Manyata (to Uday): hamein kuch zaroori kaam se jana hoga...please Uday tum yahan sab handle kar lena...hum jaldi tumhe call kareinge...(and she runs outside...)
Uday: par princess hua kya...(but she left already)
Uday knew there was something wrong because he had never seen her like that before...she looked scared...Uday wanted to leave also and find out what was going on but he couldn't just leave like that because if he did everyone would find out that there was something wrong...so he decided to stay back and not show any of his emotions until eveyone left...
They were all having drinks...Jaggadh was too occupied to notice Jay which was making Jay very uncomfartable...she felt like she was bieng ignored and Jay counldn't handle being ignored...so she decided to break in the conversation between Unnati and Jaggadh...
Jay: so Jaggadh...what are you doing days...
Jaggadh: well these days I'm handling our business in abroad...
Jay: oh how nice is that...waisey tum aur Unnati kab mile...???(looking jealous)
Unnati: hum toh Jaggadh se pehli baar tumharey hi wajah se mile the...don't you remember...
Jaggadh: haan...hum aur unnati pehli baar club mein miley the...aur phir hum aik dusre ke itne acche dost ban gaye...
Unnati: you are right Jaggadh...hum ne kabhi nahi socha tha ke hum itne close friends ban jayen gey...
Jay: close friends...I see...(looking super dooper jealous...)
Vijay: well Unnati...sweetheart how close...(unnati starts to blush)
The scene shifts to Manyata's car...she is in her car driving recklessly...she looks scared and and have tears in her eyes...she was driving back to Rajmahal because Chinki texted her and told her about Akash's letter, that she never got a chance to read it...Chincki told her to read the letter as soon as possible and also that if something happens to Akash then she would be responsible for it...
Manyata's car arrives at the Rajmahal and she runs inside to her room...she looks all around the room to find the letter which Akash wrote to her... she gets frustrated and yells at the servant for touching her stuff...while screaming at the servants she notices something on the side table...she runs towards the side table and picks up the letter...and signals the servants to leave...her hands were shivering while trying to take out the letter from the envelop...she takes out the letter and notices its written in red which looked like it was blood...she starts reading...
Monia
main janta hoon ke tum mujh se bohat pyaar karti ho
aur issi liye mujh se milne zaroor aaogi
yaad rakhna monia agar main tumharey liye apna khoon baha sakta hoon toh...
Uday beer kya cheez hai...uss ko toh main...
der mat karn...
warna aisa na ho ke tumhari wajah se do do logon ko apni jaan se haath dhoona pade...
mujhe tumhara intezaar rahe ga Monia...
After reading the letter, the letter falls from her hand...she felt helpless and thought that it was all her fault...she was the one because of whom Uday's life was in danger...and also she was the one because of whom Akash was brutally hurting himself and was going to kill himself...she felt like screaming due to frustration...She decided to meet Akash and end this for once and all...she got into her car and drove to Akash's house...
On the other side...everyone, Jay, Unnati, Vijay and Jaggadh leaves...Uday was the only one who was still there he called Manyata to ask her where she was and if everything was alright...he calls her but her phone was switched off...then he called Rajmahal to see if she was there and to find out what was the emergency...he calls Rajmahal and a servant picks up the phone...
Uday: Rajkumari Manyata se baat karvaiye...
Servant: Uday banna...Rajkumari Manyata ji toh ghar par nahi hain...
Uday: kuch bataya un ne ke woh kahan ja rahi hain...
Servant: jee nahi uday banna ...woh thori der pehle mahal aayi thein aur kuch dhoondh rahi thien aur phir thodhi der mein kahin chali gayi...rajkumari jee kafi jaldi mein thien...
Uday: achha theek hai...rajkumari ji jaisey hi ghar wapas aayein hamein inforrm karna...
Servant: jo hukum Uday banna...(and disconnects the phone...)
Uday gets even more worried...he thinks that what is that Manyata can't even share with him...and wonders where she is...he talks to himself...
Uday (to himself): kahan chali gayi ho princess...aik baat hum se keh kar toh dekho...hum tumhari zid se tang aachuke hain...tum samjhti kyun nahi ho ke tum hamarey liye kya ho...hum tumhe kisi bhi pareshaani mein nahi dekh sakte...
Uday decides to look for her so he gets into his car and leaves...
The scene shifts to Akash's mansion where he wrote I LOVE YOU all over the wall with his blood...he had candles lit all over the house and rose petals all over the floor...his hands were badly wounded and fully covered with blood...there were blood stains all over the house...Akash was sitting on a rocking chair, right in front of Manyata's portrait and was still playing with the knife...he heard some footsteps near the entrance and it felt as if they were approaching closer and closer...as the sound of the footsteps got louder and louder Akash started smiling...he knew who it was...and it looked like as if he was expecting the person...Akash got off the chair and turned around to face the person...
Akash: mein jaanta tha tum zaroor aao gi...
Manyata: kyun bulaya mujhe yahan...???
Manyata looks all around the house...and looks scared and really shoked...she knew Akash was not in proper state of mind but after seeing what he did to his house and how he used his blood to write on walls...she knew he was beyond crazzy almost psychotic ...and she was very very scared to be around him...and the only reason she was there was because of her love for Uday beer...she was willing to go through anything in order to save uday from the danger...she decides to confront Akash...
Manyata: mein ne poocha...tum ne mujhe yahan kyun bulaya...aur sab kya pagalpan hai...
Akash: yeh sab tumharey liye hai Monia...tumhe accha nahi laga...wahan dekho tumhari tasveer...
Manyata looks at her portrait on her wall...and she notices something strange on her forehead in the portrait...it was all red covered in blood...her maang in the portrait was filled with Akash's blood...after seeing this got really mad and almost lost her control...
Manyata: yeh sab kya hai...tumhari himmat kaisey hui...meri tasveer par...tumhe aik baat samjh kyun nahi aati hai...mein tum se pyaar nahi karti...
Akash: tum aisa kyun keh rahi ho monia...(he goes up to her)
Manyata: aik aur kadam aagey mat barhana...tumhara dimaag khraab ho gaya hai...yeh sab kar ke tumhe kuch nahi haasil hoga...
Akash: accha...kuch haasil nahi hoga...???...toh phir tum yahan kyun aayi...haan bolo...
Manyata: main yahan apne pyaar ke liye aayi hoon...samjhey tum...mein Uday se pyaar karti hoon...bohat bohat pyaar karti hoon...aur usse kuch nahi ho sakti...
Akash: JHOOTH...jhoot bol rahi ho tum...tum yahan meray liye aayi ho...
Manyata: akash tum paagal ho chukey ho...aur issi liye tumse kuch bhi kehne ka koi faida nahi hai...
Akash: haan haan haan...main paagal hi toh hoon...tumharey pyaar ne mujhey paagal kar diya hai...(he hold her tight)
Manyata: Akash you are sick...choro mujhey...
Akash: bolo na Monia...tum yahan merey liye aayi ho na...(he tries to go really close to her)
Manyata: Nahi...main yahan Uday ke liye aayi hoon...aur yeh toh kuch bhi nahi hai...Uday ke liye toh mein kuch bhi kar sakti hoon...kissi bhi hud tak jasakti hoon...toh phir tum se milna kya cheez hai...
Akash: (he holds her even tightly)...bohat chahti ho na usse...haan bolo...bohat pyaar karti ho na uss Udaybeer se...
Manyata: HAAN haaan...karti hoon...aur hamesha karti rahoon gi...
Akash: aur agar woh hi na rahe...toh...???...phir kya karogi iss pyaar ka...???
Manyata: (she pushes him away)...don't you dare...tum itney ghatiya insaan ho sakte ho hum kabhi soch bhi nahi sakte the...humse aur hamarey uday se dur raho...nahi toh...(she turns around to leave...)
Akash: soch lo Monia...agar tum mujhe nahi mili toh mein khud ko khatm dar doonga aur saath mein tumharey uss Udaybeer ko bhi maar daloonga...kya tum do do logon ke khoon ka boj le kar jee pao gi...
Manyata: humarey paas tumharey in faltu sawaalon ki liye waqt nahi hai...aur hum tumharey in dhamkiyon se nahi darte...(and she goes outside the house)
On her way out when she was getting into her car she sees chincki coming into Akash's house...she calls Manyata's name...
Chinki: RAJKUMARI MANYATA...
Manyata stops and turns around to listen to chinky...
Chinki: toh rajkumari ji...dekh liya aap ki wajah se Akash ki halat ho gayi hai...
Manyata: kya...mein ne kya kiya hai...???
Chinki: arey wah app toh itni jaldi bhool bhi gayi...woh aap ki wajah se khud ko takleef puhncha raha hai...
Manyata: yeh sab uss ka paagalpan hai aur kuch nahi...
Chinki: sahii kaha tum ne rajkumari jee...yeh uss ka paagalpan hi hai...aur uski iss halat ki wajah tum ho...bohat mazaa aata hai na tumhe sab ki zindagi se khelna mein...
Manyata: yeh tum kya keh rahi ho chinki...
Chinki: agar tumhari wajah se meray Akash ko kuch bhi hua na toh main...main khud ko maar daloongi...nahi reh sakti mein Akash ke bina...please uss se dur raho...chor do usse uski halat pe...aur chali jao hum se dur...(and Chinki goes inside the house leaving Manyata alone...)
Manyata gets into the car and leaves...she was crying...she felt as she was trapped she had no clue what to do...where to go...she felt like everyone's life was at stake because of her...she kept on recalling Akash's and Chinki's word in her mind...she was scared... scared of losing Uday...and she wanted to be alone...she didn't wanted to face anyone or talk to anyone so she decides to go to the club...she goes there and starts drinking...she was not into drinking and all but today she just didn't know what to do so she started drinking...it was as if Chinki and Akash's words were haunting her...she was mentally disturbed...she needed a break...she kept on drinking, drink after drink...she was fully drunk but still kept on drinking more...
The bar manager see her and recognizes her that it was Rajkumari Manyata...she was badly drunk and had no clue what was going on around her...so the manager decides to call Uday and inform him about Manyata and her drunk state...
When Uday finds about Manyata he quickly arrives at the bar...he sees Manyata fully drunk and drinking more alcohol...her eyes were wet with tears...Uday goes to her and asks her to stop...
Uday: princess yeh sab kya hai...aur yeh kya haal bana rakha hai...
Manyata: Udayyy...(she pulls him close)...tum aagaye ...
Uday: yeh sab kiss liye...Jay ki baatonko itna seriously le liya...
Manyata: udayyy...tum kahin mat jaana...
Uday: haan princess ...par yeh tum kya kar rahi ho...rakho isse bohat pee chuki ho...
Manyata: nahi...
Uday: (he takes the glass from her)...ghar chalo princess...bohat raat ho chuki hai...please chalo...
Manyata: nahi mujhey ghar nahi jaana...nahi jaana...(she falls on uday)
Uday: princess...
Manyata: hhhmmm...
Uday: aacha theek hai...ghar nahi jaana par yahan se chalo...
Uday carries her and takes her to his hotel room...he puts her down on the bed...puts comforter over her...but she stops him...she was emotionally very weak and needed support...she held onto Uday and gets carried away because for her emotions...
Manyata: Udayyy...mujhey chor ke mat jaoo...please...(she pulls him close to her so that he too was on the bed)
Uday: hum yahin hain princess... (He lies next to her)
Manyata stares into his eyes and says...
Manyata: Udayyy...mein tumhare bina nahi jee sakti...(and she hugs him and kisses him on the neck)
Uday: princess tumhe ab so jaana chahiye...okay...(he tries to push her away)
Manyata: nahi...(she holds on to him tightly)
Uday: Manyata...sweetheart you should sleep now...
Manyata: I LOVE YOU UDAY...(and she kisses him)
Uday: I LOVE YOU TOO...princess... (He hugs her and kisses her back)
And the lights go out...
TO BE CONTINUED...
So this was part 7...I really hoped that you guys liked it...suggestions are more than welcome... please do comment...also if anyone wants the PM send me buddy request...Thank you for reading ...Thanks again...
Love,
Alissa.đ
I know right...I totally turned Akash into a sociopath...oh well...thats how i imagine him in my head...btw thanks for reading...đOriginally posted by: -Vishwa-
Holy! Akash is really freakyyy!! Why cant they report him
to the mental hospital?? I mean just by looking at the
house anyone can tell his crazy...
anyways great update...loved the intense dialogues and
the last scene...sooo cute!!
there's more romance to come...đ...so stay tuned...and thankyou so much for reading and like it đwaooo wat post...seriously...all my desire of manveer romance came true...waiooo...
Awww that's so sweet of you...I am glad you liked it...do read all parts and let me know how were they...btw thanks for reading :)Originally posted by: RajDhillon2
Hi I just started reading it. I read the first part...it was awesome. you are a very good writer.