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Hey guys this is part 6, I hope you all like it...

PART # 6

Scene shifts to Akash's mansion where he is having a meeting with his assosiates in his crime business...Akash was now Working for an illegal business company...he was the person who handled the supply for all the illegal material...This was the route he took to gain all the wealth that now owned...the company he worked for had strong connections with the gangs and all the other violent groups...After the meeting everyone leaves and a man comes to visit him in order to give him some important information...

Akash: toh kya khabar laye ho...

Man: buri khabar hai boss...

Akash: buri khabar...???

Man: haan boss...uss par meri baaton ka koi asar nahi hua...aur uss ne kaha ke yeh sab kar ke aap ko kuch haasil nahi hoga...

Akash signals the man to leave and was left all alone in the house...he stands in front of Manyata's portrait and says...

Akash: (to portrait) Monia tum aaj bhi utni hi ziddi ho jitna pehle thi...dekha mein janta tha tum aaj bhi zaraa nahi badli...par agar tumhari zid hai toh meri bhi aik zid hai ke mein tumhe haasil kar ke hi rahoonga...

Akash picks up a knife which was lying on the table next to him...He cuts his hand to write MONIA on it...and he takes the blood from his hand and uses it to fill Manyata's maang in the portrait and while doing so he says..."Monia tum meri ho sirf meri..."

He then takes a white paper and writes a letter to Manyata using his blood as the ink, he was sure that she would come running after reading what was inside the letter...Akash hand was wounded badly, there was blood all over the place...he wrote I LOVE YOU MONIA with his blood all over the wall...he was continously talking to himself and was behaving like a phsycopath...

The next day, Unnati comes to Rajmahal to meet Rajmata and they are having a conversation about something that no one knows...

Rajmata: Thankyou so much Unnati beta...hamein aap ki madad ki sakht zaroorat thi

Unnati: nahi dadisahab...thankyou keh kar aap hamein sharminda kar rahi hain...hum bhi toh aapki pauti hi ki tarah hain...

Rajmata: bilkul Unnati beta...bas ab sab kuch plan ke motabik ho jaye...

Unnati: aap fikar mat kijiye dadisahab hum ne jaisa plan kiya hai sab kuch usssi tarah hoga...aap sab kuch hum par chor dijiye...

Rajmata: hamein aap par poora bharosa hai beta issi liye toh hum ne aapko chona iss kam ke liye...hum jaante hain ke aap se behtar iss kaam ko koi anjaam nahi de sakta...

Unnati bends down to take the blessings from Dadi sahab and she puts her hand on her head and says...

Rajmata: jiti rahiye...

The scene shifts to manyata's room where she was getting ready for the day...while she was making her hair...someone knocks on the door...

Manyata: andar aajayiye...

Servant: rajkumari sahab aapki coffee...

Manyata: haan... usse side table par rakh dijiye...

Servant: ji ...rajkumari sahab...

She looks at the tray in servants hand and asks her about the paper on the tray...

Manyata: aik minute rukiye...yeh paper kya hai...

Servant: gustakhi maaf rajkumari sahab...par yeh chitthi aap hi ke liye hai...

Manyata: hamarey liye...accha chaliye usse bhi wahan side table par rakh dijiye hum dekh leingey...

Servant: jo hukum rajkumari sahib... (The servant puts the letter on the side table and leaves)

After the servants leaves Manyata goes to towards the side table and picks up the letter, there was no name at the envelop so she opens the envelop and just when she was about to take the letter out of the envelop she hears a voice because of which she drops the letter on the floor...it was Unnati...

Unnati: GOOD MORNING BHABHI...

Manyata: (she turns around and sees unnati) oh Unnati...tum ho...darraa diye mujhe...

And she picks up the letter from the floor, the letter was still inside the envelop, and she was holding it in her hands...

Manyata: aaj subha subha...???

Unnati: kyun kya hum apni bhabhi se milne nahi aasakte...

Manyata: kyun nahi bilkul aasakte hain...waisay uday kahan hai...woh nahi aaya...???

Unnati: nahi bhabhi aaj dada nahi sirf hum aaye hain aur hum dono bahar ja rahe hain...

Manyata: bahar...???...par kahan aur kyun...???

Unnati : bhabhi bhool gayi kya aaj hum ne Jaggadh ko dinner pe invite kiya hai toh hum ne socha ke kyun na hum salon se ho aayein...

Manyata: ohhh ab hum samjhe...waisey maajra kya hai haan...I mean tum aur Jaggadh...

Manyata didn't finish what she was going to say because she was interrupted by Jay who was standing at the door and heard the whole conversation between Unnati and Manyata...

Jay: Jaggadh...???

Unnati: haan Jay hum ne aaj usse dinner ke liye invite kiya hai...aur hum yahan bhi issi liye aaye the ke tumhein aur vijay banna ko aaj dinner ke liye invite karne...

Jay: oh thats so sweet of you Unnati...par tum aur Jaggadh aik dusre ko kaise jaante ho...

Unnati: woh actually hum aur Jaggadh kafi achhey dosti hain...issi liye bas...aur Jay agar tum aaj raat hamarey saath dinner ke liye aaogi to hamein bohat accha lage ga...

Jay: of course Unnati...hum zaroor ayengey waisey bhi hamein Jaggadh se mile hue kafi time hogaya hai...so I would surely be there...

Unnati: thats fantastic to phir aaj raaj aath (8) bajey hamarey hotel...

Jay: sounds good...so I'll see you then...(she leaves)

Unnati (to manyata): chalein bhabhi...nahi to hamein der hojayegi...

Manyata: lekin unnati...

Unnati: lekin wekin kuch nahi bas tum hamarey saath chal rahi ho...

Unnati pulls Manyata outside the room and she leaves the letter on the side table WITH OUT even taking it out of the envelop...

The Scene shifts to uday's suite, in his living room he is having a conversation with one of his security officers...

Uday: hum ne jo kaam diya tha...kya hua uss ka...uss ke baarey mein kuch pata chala...???

Security officer: jee sir...aap ne hamein jo number diya tha uss par ssari calls hum monitor kar rahe hain...

Uday: aur woh unknown number...???...woh kis ka number hai...???

Security officer: sir hum ne aap ke kehne par check kiya tha par woh number Akash Verma ka nahi hai...in fact har baar jab unknown number ke naam se call aati hai toh asal mein har baar number doosra hota hai...issi liye yeh calls kon kar raha hai pata lagane mein kuch waqt lagega...

Uday: jitna jaldi ho sakey iss number ka pata lagao...ab hum aur koi risk nahi le sakte...(and he stands up to leave)

Security officer: sir...aik aur baat thi...hamein pata chala hai ke koi har waqt aapka ka peecha karta hai...aur usse aap ke har baat ki khabar hoti hai...

Uday: kya...???...hamara peecha kon kar raha hai...aur kyun...???

Security: sir hum poori koshish kar rahe hain pata lagane ki aur hum ne aapki security bhi barha di hai...par bhi bhi aapko bohat careful rehna hoga...

Uday: theek hai...yeh jo koi bhi hai isse jald se jald dhoondo...aur hamein khabar karte rehna...(and the security guard leaves)

Uday (to himself): pehle Manyata aur ab humarey saath...yeh sab kuch ho kya raha hai...hamein yaqeen hai ke iss ke peeche kisi ki bohat badi chaal hai...

Scene shifts to the salon where Unnati and Manyata are getting back massage and having a conversation about Jaggadh...

Unnati: bhabhi aap pehle kabhi Jaggadh se nahi mili na...

Manyata: ab tak to nahi mili...par thanks to you aaj mil lein gey...(and she smiles)

Unnati: I know right...waisey aapko uss se mil kar bohat accha lage ga...he's such a gentleman...

Manyata: woh toh hamein dikh raha hai...kafi strong impression banaya hai uss ne tum par...hamein toh lagta hai ke kahin tumhe uss se...

Unnati: (blushes) nahi Manyata bhabhi...aisa kuch bhi nahi hai hamein lagta hai aap log iss ke baarey mein kuch ziyada hi saoch rahe hain...it's nothing like that...

Manyata: may be...ho sakta hai ke hum galat hoon par hum sahi bhi toh ho sakte hain...(she smiles at unnati)

Unnati: Manyata bhabhi...seriously...???...aap bhi na kuch bhi...

Manyata: aacha Unnati hamein Jaggadh aur Jay ke baarey mein toh batao...unn ke beech kya hua tha...

Unnati: well as you know...Dadisahab chahti thien ke jay aur jaggadh ki shadi ho jaye...aur issi tarah woh donoo aik dusre se pehli baar mile the...

Manyata: par hum ne sunna tha ke jay ne shaadi ke liye hann keh di thi...

Unnati: haan kahi toh thi par sirf apne selfish motives ke liye...woh hamesha se aik bohat hi ameer ghar mein shaadi karna chahti thi jahan sab kuch sirf uss ka ho aur usse kuch bhi share na karna pade...aur iss ke liye Jaggadh se accha toh aur koi option ho nahi sakta tha...

Manyata: pata nahi koi itna selfish kaisay ho sakta hai...

Unnati: woh Jay hai...aur usse logon ko use and through karne mein bohat mazaa aata hai...

Manyata and Unnati were done with Massage so they decided to get ready and leave...

the scene shifts to Rajmahal, it was almost 8 pm...Unnati and Manyata were already at the hotel with Uday and Jay and Vijay were almost ready and were soon going to leave for the hotel...After getting ready Vijay decides to go to Jays room and try to persuade her since she was mad at him from last night...he goes to Jay's room and knocks at the door...

Jay: kaun hai...

Vijay: hum hain Jay bhai...tumharey dearest bhai...(he goes inside the room)...waohh!!!...you look hot... Jay bhai...

Jay: please Vijay bhai...hamein aap se koi koi baat nahi karni...

Vijay: come on Jay bhai tum apne itne masoom se bhai ke saath aisa kaise kar sakti ho...(with an innocent face)

Jay: masoom yeah right...kuch naya try kijiye Vijay bhai...

Vijay: nahi Jay bhai...kal jo bhi hua woh hum ne nahi kiya...

Jay: OH REALLY...???...toh phir kis ne kiya...haaan...

Vijay: hamein pura yaqeen hai ke uss jungle queen ne hum par zaroor koi kala jadoo kiya ho ga...please hum se aise gussa mat ho...please...please...

Jay: okay fine...seriously Vijay bhai...you are such a drama queen...

Vijay: waisey aik baat to batao Jay bhai...yeh Unnati aur Jaggadh ka kya chakkar hai...aur jaggadh to dinner pe invite karne ki kya zaroorat thi...

Jay: you are right Vijay bhai...daal zaroor kuch kala hai...yeh toh ab wahan ja kar hi pata chale ga...

Vijay: I TELL YOU...

Both Jay and Vijay leave for the hotel...

In Uday Niwas hotel all Uday, Manyata, Unnati, Jay and Vijay welcome Jaggadh who just arrives at the place...When he arrives Unnati greets him with a hug...which everyone seems to find a little unusual...

Uday: hi Jaggadh...kaise hai tum...???(He shakes hand with Jaggadh)

Jaggadh:hum bilkul theek hain ...aur aap sab kaisey hain...???

Unnati: Jaggadh inn se milo...(she introduces Manyata)...yeh hain Manyata hamari hone wali bhabhi...aur Dada ki to be wife...

Jaggadh (to manyata): hello...hum ne Unnati se aap ke baarey mein bohat sunna hai...aap se mil kar bohat accha laga...

Manyata: waisey hum ne bhi Unnati se aapki bohat tareef sunni hai...kyun Unnati...??? (unnati starts to blush and Jay gives a glare to Unnati)

Jay (to Jaggadh): hey Jaggadh...hamein hi nahi bolo gey...kya tum ab tak hum se...

Jaggadh: nahi Jay aisa kuch nahi hai...hum toh bas aap se poochne hi wale the...

Jay: too late now...waisey...(Unnati cuts her off)

Unnati: aur Jaggadh yeh hain Vijay banna...hum sab ke favorite...

Vijay: Awww...you are too sweet Unnati...btw...thanks for introduction...

Jaggadh: hello...aapko kon nahi jaanta...

Vijay: I tell you...

After all the introduction and converstions they moved to the dinner table...all got settle down at the dinner table...Unnati sat next to Jaggadh and served him...they all began eating...

while eating Jay was staring at Jaggadh and Unnati...she was bothered by how close they were to each other and the way they were talking to each other...Jay kicks Vijay who was sitting opposite to her to make him see Unnati and Jaggadh...But instead of kicking Vijay she kicks Manyata...Manyata when first gets kicked she ignores it thinking it might be by accident...on the other side Jay thinks she is kicking Vijay but he is ignoring him so she kicks again this time a little harder...again this time she kicks Manyata and again Manyata ignores it...but when the third time Jay kicks Manyata thinking of it as Vijay bhai, this time Manyata gets really mad and looks under the table...she realizes that it was Jay kicking her for so long...and she kicks her back really hard...

Jay: OUCHHH...(she looks under the table and sees that it was Manyata... she gets super mad and stands up)

Jay (to manyata): dikhta nahi tumhe...hamein kyun maraaa...(everyone looks confused)

Unnati: kya hua jay...???

Manyata:(she stands up too)...Jay tera dimaag apni jagah par hai na...itni der se humein kick pe kick ki ja rahi hai...

Jay: hum ne tumhe kab kick kiya...hum toh Vijay bhai ko kick kar rahe the...

Vijay:hum koi ball thori na hai jo hamein koi kick kare...

Manyata: dekha pata tha mujhe...beta aaj to tu mujh se nahi bachey gi...(she attacks jay who was already ready to attack back)

Uday (to manyata): rehne do princess galti se lag gayi ho gi...

Jay: nahi Uday...iss gawarni ko hum ne isse purposely mara hai...aaj toh ya hum bachein gey ya phir yeh...

Manyata: jay kamini...aaj toh mein tumhe choroon gi nahi...teray saarey baal noch loon gi...

Vijay (to Jay): Jay bhai uttar jao maidane jang mein...

Unnati: Vijay banna yeh aap kya kar rahe hain...rokiye Jay ko...

Uday (to jay): Jay tum paagal ho gayi ho kya...choro manyata ko...

Jay: iss gawarni ko sabaq sikhana hi pade ga...

Vijay: that's the spirit Jay bhai...dushman ka khatma kar do...

Jay: shut up Vijay bhai...hamein aapki advise ki zaroorat nahi hai...

Manyata: Uday ...apni rifle le kar aao...mujhe tumhari rifle la kar do...

Jaggadh (to Unnati): are you sure it's nothing serious...??? (looking very confused and lost)

Unnati: haan Jaggadh its normal nothing serious...tum baith jao...(and Unnati makes jaggadh sit down)

Vijay: yeh lo Jaggadh tum rasgollah khao...yeh hamari jungle queen ka favourite hai...( he shoves it into Jaggadh's mouth...)

Uday takes both Manyata and Jay inside the room...and tries to calm them down...

Manyata: choro usse...choro princess...

Jay (to Manyata): bohat smart samajhti ho na khud ko gawarni...aaj tumhe tumhari sahi jagah yaad dila detein hain...

Manyata: tu kya mujhe meri jagah dekhaye gi...pehle ja kar apni shakal toh dekh le...circus ki bandaria lagti hai...

Uday: enough you two...kya bachon ki tarah lad rahe ho...agar tum dono ne bas nahi kiya toh hum Dadisahab ko call kar deingey...(he takes out his cell phone)

manyata and Jay were still fighting...

Uday: hum sach mein call kar rahein hain...theek hai mat mano hamari baat ab Dadi sahab hi tum dono se baat kareingi...

At this both Jay and Manyata leave each other...

Manyata (to Uday): nahi uday...please Dadisahab ko kuch mat kehna...please...unhein bohat bura lage ga...

Uday: theek hai princess par sirf aik shart par...keh tum dono...achii princesses ki tarah neeche jaogi aur achhe se behave karogi...

Jay: whatever...(and she leaves the room...)

Manyata (to Uday): sab iss ki galti thi...I don't understand ke isse mujh se kya problem hai...seriously...

Uday: it's okay princess...(he pulls her close...)

Manyata: it's not okay...humein samjh nahi aata ke hum aisa kya karein jisse Jay aur hamarey beech ki problems kam ho jayein...

Uday: princess...don't worry...hum baat karein gey Jay se...par ab hamein neeche chalna chahiye...sab wait kar rahe hain...

Uday and Manyata went downstairs and everyone one got back to the dinner table...they finished eating and were now having drinks...Manyata while talking to Unnati noticed that her phone was ringing...when she checked her phone it was a text message...she read the message and suddenly her face turned pale, she looked like all the blood in her body froze...she stood up from her seat and said...

Manyata (to Uday): hamein kuch zaroori kaam se jana hoga...please Uday tum yahan sab handle kar lena...hum jaldi tumhe call kareinge...(and she runs outside...)

TO BE CONTINUED...

So this was part 6...I really hoped that you guys liked it...suggestions are more than welcome... please do comment...also if anyone wants the PM send me buddy request...Thank you for reading ...Thanks again...

Love,

Alissa.

Edited by alissa345 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
loved the updates this story is well written!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
its super awesome update..
loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
it was really funny
especially vijay bhai🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Update, Thanks for the PM ... Akash has turned into an obssessive lover ... aghh hate him ... continue sooon :) xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gr8 update!!! Do continue soon!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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luvluy but hardly manveer romance happened...yyy...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Wow!
It was totally awesum!!!Even my sister(cousin) liked all the six parts very much.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
awesome
sach mein, bohot ziada enjoy kia hu!!!
vijay was hilarious, hahaha, loved his dialogues

update soon sweety

Love(L)
Fati
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sirjee

luvluy but hardly manveer romance happened...yyy...

In coming parts there is going to be some serious manveer romance...don't worry I'll make up for it :)

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