You Are My Miracle (FF) pt 21 upd (Akash returns) - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it a lot,you have written very nicely
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
akash has gone phsyco n manveer ...loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb!! u write so well !! ps update soon !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
its amazing dear..
superb update as usual..
waitng for next part eagerly...
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Originally posted by: nityah

its amazing dear..
superb update as usual..
waitng for next part eagerly...
thanx for the pm..

Thanks for reading...I will update soon :)
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awesome...great FF...continue soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
kick that akash out please or pair him with chikky.😆😆BTW GR8 FF.continue soon.

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Originally posted by: K.K.Monster

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="7">kick that akash out please or pair him with chikky.😆😆BTW GR8 FF.continue soon.

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well about akash...you won't be seeing him for a while...and thanks for reading :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing, lovely, really good
when are you goinging to update
hope to read soon
waiting for more manveer and lots of crazy VB scenes hahaha



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Hey guys, this is part 8...hope you all like it...

PART # 8

Uday carries her and takes her to his hotel room...he puts her down on the bed...puts comforter over her...but she stops him...she was emotionally very weak and needed support...she held onto Uday and gets carried away because for her emotions...

Manyata: Udayyy...mujhey chor ke mat jaoo...please...(she pulls him close to her so that he too was on the bed)

Uday: hum yahin hain princess... (He lies next to her)

Manyata stares into his eyes and says...

Manyata: Udayyy...mein tumhare bina nahi jee sakti...(and she hugs him and kisses him on the neck)

Uday: princess tumhe ab so jaana chahiye...okay...(he tries to push her away)

Manyata: nahi...(she holds on to him tightly)

Uday: Manyata...sweetheart you should sleep now...

Manyata: I LOVE YOU UDAY...(and she kisses him)

Uday: I LOVE YOU TOO...princess... (He hugs her and kisses her back)

And the lights go out...

The next morning in Rajmahal...Jay is pacing back and forth in her room looking very restless...and Vijay comes to her room...

Vijay: Jay bhai...what's up...???

Jay doesn't answer back...

Vijay: Jay bhai aisey aagey peechey walk kyun kar rahi ho...kahin breakfast mein overeating ki waja se...tum khana dijest karne ki koshish kar rahi ho...

Jay: SHUT UP...Vijay bhai...hamara mood waisey hi bohat kharaab hai...

Vijay: btw kharaab se yaad aaya...aaj kisi ki halat kharaab hone wali hai...

Jay: kiss ki...???

Vijay: hamari dearest badi behna...jo abhi tak ghar wapas nahi aayi hain...

Jay: who cares Vijay bhai...hogi apne uss Uday ke saath...

Vijay: Jay bhai...(he touches her forehead)...tumhari tabiyat toh theek hai na...I mean...Manyata aur Uday dono aik saath Gayab hain aur tumhein koi farak nahi par raha...

Jay: farak toh hamein Unnati aur Jaggadh ke saath hone se par raha hai...

Vijay: Unnati aur Jaggadh...oh yeah... woh dono bhi aaj toh kal crazy glue se chipke rehte hain...but why do you care...

Jay: hamein gussa iss baat par aa raha hai ke puri duniya mein Unnati ko Jaggadh hi mila...I mean...she knows ke hamari aur Jaggadh ki shaadi hone wali thi and all...par phir bhi...

Vijay: NAHIII...AISA NAHI HO SAKTA...(being awfully dramatic)

Jay: kya Vijay bhai...kya nahi ho sakta..???

Vijay: yahi jo hum dekh rahe hain...Jay bhai...tum Unnati aur Jaggadh ko dekh kar jealous ho rahi ho...

Jay: what...hum aur uss Unnati se jealous...itne bhi bure din nahi aaye hain hamarey...okayy...

Vijay: jo bhi kaho jay bhai par yeh Jaggadh aur Unnati kuch ziyada hi close friends ban gaye hain...

Jay: haan Vijay bhai...you are right...lagta hai ab iss friendship ka "the end" hamein hi karna pade ga...

Vijay: I TELL YOU...

The scene shifts to Uday's hotel room...Uday was in shower and Manyata was still sleeping...Uday was done taking shower and on his way out he hear his phone ringing...he comes out of the bathroom and picks up the phone...it was a call from his work...Because of the voice of the phone Manyata woke up...her head was still hurting really badly...she was still lying on the bed and it took her some time to realize that she was not in her room...she sees Uday standing in his PJ's and a towel around his neck...he was talking to someone on his cell phone...she tries to remember what happened...she looks at the other side and finds her clothes lying on the bed...she suddenly realizes what exactly happened and wraps herself in a quilt...she couldn't believe what she did...she hid her face under the pillow and starts crying...Uday was done talking on the phone...he sees that Manyata was awake and was crying... he goes up to her...

Uday knew Manyata was upset with whatever happened last night...it was something that shouldn't have happened and was against her values...but he decided to act normal as if nothing happened at all because he knew talking about it would only make her feel worse...

Uday: good morning princess...tum jaag bhi gayi...chalo ab ja kar fresh ho jao...

Manyata was staring at him blankly...

Uday: Utho princess...tum ready ho jao...phir hum tumhein mahal drop kar deingey...okay...

Manyata: (looking embarrassed) SSORRRYYY...I'm sorry...I'm really sorry...kal raat mujhe pata nahi...so sorry...(she starts crying)

Uday: sshhh princess...sorry kiss liye...(she sits next to her on the bed)

Manyata: yeh main ne kya kar diya...main aisi nahi hoon...main ne sach mein jaan kar kuch nahi kiya...pata nahi yeh sab kaisey...

Uday: princess...hum jaante hain...tumhein koi explanation dene ki zaroorat nahi hai...it's all my fault...tum toh drunk thi par hum toh hosh mein the na...issi liye tumhein bura feel karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...

Manyata: nahi uday tum khud ko blame mat do...tumhe toh main ne hi...yeh sab meri wajah se hua...dimaag kharaab ho gaya tha mera...yeh bohat galat hua...I'm really sorry...

Uday: princess... (He lifts her face up)...princess hamari baat suno...it was a MISTAKE...okay...just a mistake...

Manyata: par...

Uday: galtiyaan kis se nahi hoti...aur phir hamari toh shaadi hone wali hai...

Manyata was lost in her thoughts...this was more than a mistake for her...she knew this would make things even worse...she thought that Uday's life was already at stake because of her...and her being close to him would only hurt him...but Uday didn't know any of this...he did not know what Chinky told her and how Akash threatened her...she thought that after whatever happened last night it would make things even more complicated...she was scared of losing Uday...but being with him would only cause him pain...she was crying from the inside and outside...she felt helpless...

Uday: (kisses her forehead)...there's nothing to worry about princess...come on now get up...

Manyata: (no reply)

Uday : chalo princess...ab uth bhi jao...waisey bhi ghar par kisi ko kuch pata chale uss se pehle tumhe wahan chale jaana chahiye...

Manyata was still looking down...Uday helps her get out of the bed as her head was still spinning because of drinking too much alcohol last night...she goes to the bathroom and freshens up...

In the Rajmahal Unnati comes to meet Dadi sahab...she goes into her office...

Unnati: Dadi sahab...apka plan sach mein kaam kar raha hai...

Dadisahab: hum ne kaha tha na aapse...ghee agar seedhi ungli se na nikle toh ungli tedhi karni hi padti hai...

Unnati: Dadi sahab aapko Jay ki shakal dekhni chahiye thi...she was so jealous...I think she still have feelings for Jaggadh...

Dadisahab: bas ab hamein Jay ko iss baat ka ahsaas dilana hai ke Jaggadh hi unn ke liye sab se achha option hai...

Unnat: wow...dadisahab...superb plan... Jay dada ko chor kar Jaggadh ki taraf divert ho jayegi...aur phir Jay aur Manyata aik dusre ke kareeb bhi aajayenge...

Dadi sahab: bilkul unnati beta...hum exactly yahi chahte hain...Jay aur Manyata ki dosti hona bohat zaroori hai...aur yeh tabhi mumkin hoga jab Jay ka attention Jaggadh ki taraf divert ho jaye...

Manyata was unusually quite in the car...she was confused and it was clear on her face...Uday on the other hand took things the other way...he thought that she was upset with Jay last night and because of that she got drunk and now she looked scared because of whatever happened between them...he thought she was scared that what everyone is going to think about her after they find out about last night...but he got everything wrong...he had no clue about the whole Akash fiasco...and chicky drama...

The scene shifts to Rajmahal where Jay finds out that Unnati was at the mahal...so she decides to go and have a little chat with her...

Unnati was still with Dadisahab when Jay comes...

Jay: Hey Unnati...tum kab aayi...

Unnati: Hi Jay...bas abhi kuch hi der pehle...

Dadisahab: beta ab hum chalte hain...aap dono baatien kijiye...(she leaves)

Jay (to Unnati): so unnati...kal raat tum aur Jaggadh dinner ke baad kahin bahar gaye the...???

Unnati: oh yeah...we went for a long drive...

Jay gets really mad after hearing this...and bursts out in anger...

Jay: seriously Unnati...I never thought you would something like this...

Unnati: hamein kuch samajh nahi aaraha Jay...what are you talking about...???

Jay: come on Unnati...don't act like you don't anything...hum Jaggadh ki baat kar rahe hain...

Unnati: Jaggadh...so...???

Jay: just back off okayy...tum jaanti ke hum aur jaggadh...

Unnati: tum aur Jaggadh kya jay...bolo...i think ke tumhe yaad nahi hai ke tum ne kis tarah usse insult kiya tha...aur aaj tumhein hamein uss ke saath dekh kar takleef ho rahi hai...kyun Jay...

Jay: seriously Unnati...how desperate...

Unnati's phone starts ringing and it was Jaggadh calling...Unnati excuses herself and picks up the phone...Jay was still standing there while Unnati was talking and was turning red in anger...

Unnati (to Jaggadh on the phone): cafe moonlight...perfect...I'll be there...yes it's a date...you happy now...see ya...(she disconnects the phone)

Unnati (to jay): I should get going...bye...

Unnati leaves and Jay gets super dooper mad...she was frustrated...she thought she had to stop all this...according to her Jaggadh was her option and now since she couldn't have Uday, Jaggadh was really the only option to get whatever she wanted...

Jay (to herself): Jaggadh ka option hamarey liye tha...aur woh hum kisi aur ko leney nahi deingey...Unnati tumhari choti si lovestary ka "the end" hum kareingey...(evil smirk)... (And Jay leaves...)

Komal was looking for Manyata since morning but she couldn't find her any where...she gets really worried...and asks one of the servants if she had seen her...

Komal: aap ne Rajkumari Manyata ko kahin dekha hai...

Servant: ji nahi mahrani saahib...hum ne unhein kal raat se hi nahi dekha...

Komal: acha theek hai...agar woh miley toh hamein khabar kar dijiye ga...

Komal goes to Dadi sahab to ask her if she had seen Manyata anywhere...

Dadisahab: kya hua Komal...app itni pareshaan kyun ag rahi hain...

Komal: maa sahib Manyata ko kal raat se kisi ne nahi dekha...

Dadi sahab: komal aap chinta mat kijiye...yahin kahin hongi...mil jayengi...

Uday dropped Manyata off at the Rajmahal and she was quietly sneaking into her room so that no one sees her BUT a voice from behind calls her name...and she turns around...

Vijay: padharo...JIJI...(with a cheesy smile)

Manyata turns around...

Vijay: so finally...tum apni havai chappal pehen ke flip flop karte hue wapas aahi gayi...

Manyata: please Vijay bhai...aabhi nahi...

Vijay: waisey hum jaante hain ke tum raat bhar mahal mein nahi thi...you bad girl...

Manyata: jayiye na vijay bhai...aap ja kar Jay ka dimaag khayiye na...

Vijay: hum bhi wahi karne ja rahe the...par phir hum ne dikha ke Jay gusse se laal ho kar kahin bahar chali gayi...

Manyata: kyun...???

Vijay: JAGGADH...woh jaggadh ko unnati ke saath dekh kar full LADY DEVDAS mood mein aagayi hai...and I think ke aaj raat woh bohat bada dhamaka karne wali hai...issi liye hum toh live telecast dekhne zaroor jayengey...tum chalo gi...bohat maza aaye ga...

Manyata: nahi Vijay bhai...app jayiye...hamein dhamakon mein koi interest nahi hai...

Vijay: as you wish...btw tum ne hamein bataya nahi ke tum kahan thi...I HAVE GOT MY EYES ON YOU...(and he leaves...)

Manyata gets into her room and locks the door...one of the servants inform Komal about Manyata's return and so Komal and Dadisab decide to go and ask her where was she...

Komal knocks at her door...she doesn't get any reply...she keeps on knocking and calling her name and after sometime Manyata opens the door...both Dadisahab and Komal go inside the room...

Komal: Manyata beta...kahan thien aap...aur aap theek to hain...

Manyata: jee Maa mein theek hoon...

Dadisahab: Manyata...hum ne suna aap kal raat ghar nahi aayien...

Komal: haan beta kahan thien aap...

Manyata was looking down and didn't answer those questions...Dadisahib knew something was wrong...she knew Manyata was hiding something...

Dadisabab: hum kuch pooch rahe hain Manyata...jawab dijiye...

Komal: boliye beta...

Manyata: (her voice was breaking)...Maa...Dadisahab...hum is ek galti hogayi hai...I made a MISTAKE...

TO BE CONTINUED...

So this was part 8...I really hoped that you guys liked it...suggestions are more than welcome... please do comment...also if anyone wants the PM send me buddy request...Thank you for reading ...Thanks again...

Love,

Alissa.

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