FF:'Tera Hone Laga Hoon'-Part 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Loved both parts continue please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
wow loved your update. just a quick request, plz lengthen your updates 😳
glad to know that u like my ff, will try to update soon.
Hope Uday is OK. Manyata will prob realise how important Uday is to her now 😊
Can't wait to read what happens next.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wish this happens in the show because it is very boring now and confusing. what is cv doing?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Part 3
third person POV
Don't worry he'll be fine, He has a mild concussion but he will recover soon. As for know he will need to stay here for 2-3 days in till we can be sure that there is no need for any other worry. There has also been a lot of blood loss, so we do have him attached to a bottle for now.

Everyone gave a sigh of relief.

Manyata asked "if they can go in to see him"

Doctor: "Of course, but be careful not to wake him, he needs his rest right know.

He paid his respects to Dadisa and headed towards his office

Everyone went into udayveers room.

Udayveer just lay there on the bed he had pattia (bandages) on his forehead and right arm.

Seeing him like like that komal began having tears fall down her eyes. And Jai just gave Manyata a cold stare and left the room, not being able to see UV like that.

And Unati began crying uncontrolablely seeing her brother in such a state and had to be taken home.

Manyata said she would stay there, b/c someone needed too, and she didn't mind. Everyone tried telling No, and that someone else would stay instead with UV. But she insisted.

Manyata:

I couldn't let anyone else stay with UV, after all this was my fault; he didn't deserve any of this. Then why did this happen to him. It should have been me hurt in that accident not him.

And these stupid tears, why do I keep crying. What's wrong with me!

Third person POV:

Suddenly he phone rang, and she went into a fit of rage. She didn't want to anyone right now. She turned off her phone and threw it too the other side of the room hitting the wall, without even checking you was calling (it was akash :P).

She began crying, holding on to Udayveers hand in a firm grip.

(Flash back of all the good moments they spent together ex. first hug, date at uday hotel, drive together, when she was standing in the sun and uday came etc. ***Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai (Female) Song played in back ground ***)

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I know I don't post very long updates but since I post every day I hope that makes up for it, its just I don't want to give all the good stuff in one update :P hope u understand.

And pls check out the song I mentioned Tujh Mein Rab Dikhta Hai (Female),: here is the link itis a really good song. And you will probably see me giving a lot of manveer moments with songs I like. LOL just a heads up.

So I hope you liked the post and pls comment, and give advice for improvments :)

Here is the link to the song pls cheak it out , its the female version :) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n-TSp90883s&feature=BFa&list=PLEFF153A56926820A&lf=mh_lolz
Edited by luvuday - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
short sweet and to the point love it this accident will bring them together loved it thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
M is finally realizing UV's importance in her life...continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
Beautiful Update
Really wel written
Aweoms job
Please conitue soon😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

Loved it small updates are acceptable if you give us everyday dose of manveer;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
really like it...update more soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
WOW Manyata realizing the significance of Uday in her life, nice wish happen in the serial for real, anyways, keep the updates coming😊, with the show going to the gutter day by day, only these ff and OS's keep me going :)

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