FF:'Tera Hone Laga Hoon'-Part 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Niha-

Welcome to IF. Hope you like it. 🤗


Loved your OS, its brilliant. I wonder what happens to Manyata, hopefully Uday will take care of her. Plz PM me when you update next, and plz read my FF called Kidnapped if you have time.😳

Niha x

OHHH thxx, and I do read your FF;Kidnapped...and I just love it , pls update ur as well :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
awesome start loved it can't wait for more please pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
Part 2
Third peron POV
They went crashing right into the trees and stone wall, and rocks. UV tried to halt to a stop, when turned to see they were about to drive right into a tree, but it was too late. They car went turning right into the rocks and trees. With his side of the car, facing towards the tree and rocks.

Glass went flying everywhere as all the passenger windows broke, cause of crash

Manyata: "Udayveerrr!!!" she screamed.

Udayveer was unconscious. "Udayveer", she whispered, almost a plead.

People were stopping their cars and beginning to crowd around there car. They were whispering, to each other. And many were dialing there phone for an ambulance.

The ambulances came they took udayveer into the beds and rolled him into the ambulance. Manyata wasn't hurt very much, but she went along with them, she just couldn't stop worry about whether he would be alright.

They were driving down the road to the hospital.

Manyata held onto one of UV's hands, with a tight grip as if to keep him alive.

"Manyataa…ughhh" whispered Udayveer.

"Udayveer, don't worry you'll be alright, just keep your eyes open" said manyata, as if trying to reassure herself, rather than him.

She felt a few tears roll down her cheek, but she quickly wiped them away with her other hand, not giving them much thought.

(in the Back Ground "Kyun" song from kammbakkt ishq played )

They finally arrived at the hospital and everyone took them in. Udayveer had to go into the ICU, since he had a lot of blood loss. While M only a few scraps from the glass shattering, only had to get a few pattia (bandages).

All the family had already arrived at the hospital, as soon as they heard the news they left everything and ehaded for the hospital. DS, BRijraj, Komal, J, Vijay and his mother were all worried for them.

They kept on asking M, what had happended and why. They were asking her question after question. But manyata didn't answer any of them. She jus sat there in her thoughts about UV.

"Leave her alone, she has already had enough to deal with today, she needs to rest right now" said komal to all the family. And sat right beside manyata.

The doctor came out, they all waited for him to say something anything. None of them said the courage to ask him if UV was alright.

TO be continued:

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Okay i know u guys r gong to hate me for hurting U, but this going some where I swear :) so pls comment, and give advice on how to improv and stuff and keep on reading
Edited by luvuday - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Gr8 update hope Uday is fine!:) Can't wait for the next update!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
what happen next and can't wait
pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
awesome update uday is hurt know her real feeling for him will come out loved it maanyata might turn nurse to take care of him love it thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
just read both parts and must say that i like how the story is progressing so far!
continue soon and do pm me when u update again :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
😳AMMAZZZING
LOVED IT
awesomeee
love the concept!
Please continue son
Please PM me is possible.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
shaaabaaash beta ur doin gr8 pls continue!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
poor UV...hope he will be alright😔...manyata is feeling for Uday😳
continue it dr!!!

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