FF:'Tera Hone Laga Hoon'-Part 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys this is my first post, so pls be nice. leave comments and give me feed back. PS. this is based off a dream i had of the 2 (UV and M) but i had to chnage alot of it b/c it kind of didn't make sense when i tried writing/typeing it down 😕, but it was a really good dream :P. Anyway enjoy :)
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Manyata: "come on Udayveer, drive faster! I don't want Akash to reach there before us"

Manyata was full of joy; she still couldn't believe UV was taking her to meet Akash at their farm house. It just didn't seem right, "WHY WAS HE DOING THIS?" she kept on asking herself. But she was just so happy that she really didn't care. She kept looking in the side-view mirror of the car to check if she looked all right.

Udayveer

Udayveer: "She looked so happy, I so wish that happiness of hers was for me, but it wasn't. It was a sad truth that the reason for all her joy after all these days of hard training wasn't me. It was that majnu.

But she had been so sad these couple of days I just couldn't, bear to see it. So I made plans for her to see him, at our old farm.

During the drive I just couldn't stop thinking about what it was going to be like when we finally got there. How I was going to watch them together laughing and hugging. My blood boiled at just the thought of it now. "Damn I wish I hadn't gotten the idea to bring her here" I kept on thinking to myself.

Third person

They finally arrived at the farm house. They were driving up on to the the house when they saw akash.

Udayveers blood boiled at the sight of him. He parked the car and before he could even open the door to let manyata out, she dashed right towards the majnu. Screaming "AKASH, AKASH!"

Only for the two to grab each other in a hug ( But it wasn't the like the hug of a lover, passionate and overwhelming. It was like a really good friend, she hadn't seen in years).

Udayveer had the erg to trash him right there and then, but he controlled himself.

He went inside to get a drink or more like a bottle. While manyata and akash kept on talking out in the lawn.

It had been a couple hours now.

Manyata: "BYEE akash. She have him a him a wave . (And bine tere played in the BG.)

She walked in to see Udayveer drinking from a glass.

Manyata: "Udayveer ! tumeh koi sharum neh ati, ladki keh kota sharab pi re ho. She yelled frantickly

But UV tried to lighten the mood. "what can I do princess, when ur not with me I have to settle for this. He said with his signature smirk.

"Halkat veda, now let's go, before people from the rahmahal start asking" she tried to say as sweetly as she could.

"Okay let's go than" he said. They both got into the car. And UV began driving; it was a pretty good drive back so far.

Udayveer

We kept on driving on the road. It really quite busy than usual. There were car zooming past each other everywhere you looked.

"She looks so happy" he thought to himself." I know why, and it might not be me, but at least he's gone now". He thought to himself.

"She looks so beautiful," I said to myself as I looked at her while driving. The wind was blowing at her hair. And she looked absolutely angelic. As the sunlight hit her dark tresses, reveling the streaks of light brown hidden within.

By know she would probably have said something to me if it hadn't been for the fact that she had her head stuck out the window, with her eyes closed.

"UDAYVEEERRR !!!," manyata screamed.

I turned to face the road to only be to late.

To be continued'

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Table of Contents:

Part 1 - Page 1
Part 2 - Page 2
Part 3 - Page 4
Part4 - Page 6
Part 5 - Page 6
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That's gr8!!! Good job!!! Can't wait for part 2!!!:)<33
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beautifully written...continue soon❤️
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OMG OMG OMG OMG
PLEASEEE please continue soon
realll yinteresting
Please PM me if possible!
awesome job😳😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting...please pm me when you update..😊
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ab kya hoga? gosh hope things aren't too bad!
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omg omg plzzz continue😭 awesome job👍🏼
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Good start ...OMG hope they are safe and sound plzzz do continue soon
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Welcome to IF. Hope you like it. 🤗

Loved your OS, its brilliant. I wonder what happens to Manyata, hopefully Uday will take care of her. Plz PM me when you update next, and plz read my FF called Kidnapped if you have time.😳

Niha x

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