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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: BlueRobbin

omg my friend told me a story like that shes like when she was little she used too put on bandages for no reason and once she got hurt a little and she put a bandage on her left arm but it wasn't in pain, and then she was playing and the bandage came off. so she forgot which arm she put it on, and put it on her right and when her parents were looking at her hand she pretended it hurt and they found out. truly a coincedence-cause she told me the story today.

very sweet short story-luved it to the core😉😊


lol...really?? wat a coincidence 😛 ...me sooo happy u liked it 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Hey, I just read all the 14 parts in a go and they are amazing...
Pls PM me next time...


😳...awwie...thanksss...will surely pm u the next time i'll update 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for all the appreciation everyone 🤗...i'm back with 2 more updates for you all...hope u'll like these 😃

15. ok for this one akash had already come back after 3 months of his disappearance...and he's rich...but since he has to attend some imp. business he leaves again after a week of coming back for a month...(ok i know no one likes akash...and i don't like him as well so plz don't maro me for including him...i had to...couldn't help it...just love torturing him with manveer *evil laugh* 😛 well no offense to akash fans )
Manyata was coming out of the mall...she and uday had gone shopping...uday had to attend a call so she told him that she'd be waiting in the car for him...suddenly she heard a voice calling her name...well her previous name...
Akash: Moniya!!...Moniya!!
Oh No!!...she did not want to face him...not now..not yet...she was not ready...and when did he come back??
Manyata: Akash!! (she tried to sound as happy as she much she could)...tum yahan?...matlab tum kab aaye?
Akash: bas kal hi aaya hoon
while talking to her his eyes fell on her hand...a ring adorned her ring finger...he fell silent...
Akash: moniya??...ye kya hai? (pointing towards the ring)
Manyata: Akash wo...
Akash: tum bhi jhalli ki jhalli ho...are tumne galat ungli me pehen rakhi hai...(he took her hand)...main sahi kar deta hoon
She immediately took her hand back...
Manyata: main kar lungi akash...(she changed the ring from ring finger to middle finger...not wanting to bring the topic yet)
Akash: moniya main soch raha tha tumhare parivar walo se tumhara...
Uday: princess...hum tumhe gaadi me dhund rahe hain aur tum...(he saw akash and gave him a stern look...and he looked back at manyata with a loving one) yahan ho
his eyes fell on her hand
Uday: lagta hai abhi tak aadat nahi hui
Manyata gave him a confused look...He took her hand and pointed towards the ring...
Uday: galat ungli me pehen li...ruko hum sahi kar dete hain...
He took the ring out of her miidle finger and slid it back in her ring finger...and while he did it they were lost in each other's eyes...a smile played on their lips...as this moments reminded them of the moment when he slid the ring the same way in her finger and she in his...it was like a replay with a different venue...different clothes...different people but the same feelings...
Manyata was so lost in uday that she had forgotten that akash was standing there...that he even existed...and it was burning him inside out...he was not ready to believe what his eyes just saw...and he would not believe it until he will hear her say it...so he broke the silence
Akash: moniya!!!
Both of them looked at him...uday looking as if he would break his jaw for breaking the moment they just shared...and manyata looking guilty realizing akash had been standing here all this while...
Uday: princess hume chalna chahiye...warna late ho jayenge
she gave him please i need to tell him now look
He couldn;t say no so he gestured from his eyes an ok
Uday: par sirf 5 minute...hum tumhara gaadi me wait kar rahe hain
She smiled at him and he went towards his car...
Akash: moniya ye sab kya tha...tum aur udaybeer??
She knew she had to do it today...she had to tell him...

16. It was Unnati's Mehendi ceremony...Manyata couldn't believe everything was happening this fast...her sister like best friend was getting married...it had just been a few months she'd known her...and in a few hours she'll be bidding her goodbye...well they'll surely stay in touch...but things would be so different without her...anyways since it's unnati's mehendi ceremony everyone even J who is so not interested is at their place...Manyata had just got the mehendi designs on her hands and was sitting in unnati's room...she was loving everything...she had never been to a wedding before...and a royal wedding and that too of her best friend...well second best friend..uday had managed to overtake unnati's position in the past few weeks...well she is a princess and she's got used to all the royal functions by now but this was just something else...there was just one problem...with all the mehendi on her hands she could not eat and she was hungry really really hungry...she heard the door open...it was uday...
Uday: princess hum tumhe hi dhund rahe the...kya hua ye chehra kyu utra hua hai tumhara?
Manyata: mujhe bahut bhook lag rahi hai
Uday: to kuch khalo princess...tumhara hi ghar hai...jo chahe mangwalo
Manyata: kuch bhi mangwale main nahi kha paungi...(she showed him her hands adorned by the mehendi designs...giving him a how am i supposed to look)
He gave her a nod and went away
Manyata: ab ye kahan chala gaya??
He came back with a plate contaning roti sabzi daal and chawal...
Manyata: tu sunta nahi hai kya?...bola na nahi kha sakti to kyu laya hai ise mere samne?...mujhe chidane ke liye na!...ek to waise hi mujhe itni bhook lag rahi hai aur tu hai...
While she spoke he took a peice of roti with some sabzi and put it in her mouth
Uday: nahi princess...tumhe khilane ke liye lekar aaye hain...
She froze at the spot...her eyes gazing into his...and she could see a smile in his eyes...they were so well reflecting his actions...showing the love and care he had for her...and she found it soothing...looking into his eyes...she felt like she could sit here like this for eternity and would still not find the thousands times this moment would be repeated boring or tiring in any way...instead she felt relaxed and fresh more than ever...but then he broke the eye contact gesturing another peice of roti in his hand ready to enter her mouth...all the while feeding her...he wiped the little rice that stuck at the corner of her lips...put the flicks that disturbed her every now and then back at their position...finally when the food was over he brought over a glass of water for her to drink...and wiped her mouth with a tissue...he collected the utensils and was about to leave the room when she said
Manyata: thank you Uday
Uday: princess tumhari tabiyat to kharab nahi ho gayi hai??...tum hume thank you bol rahi ho...tum hume apna dost manti ho na?...to dosti me no thank you...
She smiled at his words...
Uday: (with a smirk) par agar tum hume thank you bolna hi chahti ho to humare paas kuch hai jo tum humare liye kar sakti ho...
She gave him a confused look and said...kya?
Uday: humne tumhe khana khilaya hai to tum bhi hume khana khila do...
Manyata: matlab?
Uday: are princess humara matlab hai hum...tum...aur ek date??
Manyata: date??...tere sath??...um...theek hai..
Komal: Manyata beta?
Manyata: aayi ma!!
Uday: to chale princess??
Manyata: abhi??...aur date pe??...yuvraj udayveer singh thodi der me teri behen ki shadi hai...aur abhi gaye to tujhe fir se mujhe khana khilana pad jayega
Uday: (coming closer to her) hume to koi problem nahi hai princess...par humara wo matlab nahi tha...hum to keh rahe the hume bahar chalna chahiye...sab tumhe dhund rahe honge
She was feeling embarrased...that she had thought he was speaking about the date...
He helped her stand up and they walked out of the room
Uday: hume pata nahi tha princess humari first date itni achi jayegi...
Manyata: huh?
Uday: (coming closer to her while she kept stepping backwards) abhi...andar...humari first date
She saw komal passing by...she quickly turned towards her
Manyata: Ma!...apne mujhe bulaya tha?

Note: since this is not a ff so i know it doesn't really matter but i might not be able to update more scenes at this speed from now on...i'm not even sure if i'll be able to update any more...since i'll be getting super busy in the coming days...but if i'll write more...i'll surely update more...i hope no one will mind the inconvinience...😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
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take your time the scenes were very cute!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really very cute!!:) Eager to read more!!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ohh...Really lovely updates... 😊
Thank you so much for the PM

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

take your time the scenes were very cute!


😳...thanks a lot...glad u liked them 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AKlover101

Really very cute!!:) Eager to read more!!:)


awwie...thanks fizza 😃...well even m eager to write more...but let's see 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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glad u found them so... 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Ohh...Really lovely updates... 😊
Thank you so much for the PM


thanxieee...really happy u liked them...😃
and u'r welcome 😛

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