The Manveer Cheese Factory IMP. NOTE(last) - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I really liked those scenes!!! Can't wait to read more!! Plz continue soon!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update
all scenes were very good
write more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AKlover101

I really liked those scenes!!! Can't wait to read more!! Plz continue soon!:)


Originally posted by: shruti-love

lovely update

all scenes were very good
write more


I'm really glad you liked the scenes...will surely update soon 😃
Edited by akshi_t - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so guys i've got 2 more maveerlicious scenes for you...i hope you guys like these especially the tenth one 😛

9. Manyata: kya hum thodi der break nahi le sakte?
Uday: Bas ek ghanta aur princess fir araam kar lena
Manyata: kya yaar uday hum do ghante se pad rahe hain
Uday:hum jante hain princess...hum bhi thak gaye hain...par bas ek ghante ki to aur baat hai...aur tumhe hi to jaldi se ek achi rajkumari banna hai ki nahi?
Manyata: haan par...
Uday: koi par var nahi
Manyata: please uday pleaseee...
Uday: humne kaha na nahi princess
Manyata: humph
Uday: acha chalo ab ye pado
Manyata: (imitating him) acha chalo ab ye pado
Uday: ab ye kya hai princess?
Manyata: (smiling) ab ye kya hai princess?
Uday: dekho princess
Manyata: dekho princess
Uday: humari nakal karna band karo
Manyata: humari nakal karna band karo
Uday: warna hum
Manyata: warna hum
Uday: to tum nahi manogi?
Manyata: (giggling) to tum nahi manogi?
Uday: theek hai phir
Manyata: theek hai phir
Uday: humara naam manyata hai
Manyata: humara naam manyata hai
Uday: aur hum yuvraj udayveer se bahut pyaar karte hain (smirking)
Manyat: aur hum yuvraj udayveer se...kya?...halkat vede...koi mauke ka fayda uthana to tujhse seekhe...waah bachu yahan to chit bhi teri aur patt bhi..hmm??
Uday laughs: princess hum jaigarh ke yuvraj hain itni asani se nahi harte
Manyata: (pointing at him)oh..bada aaya jaigarh ka yuvraj...dekh lena uday ek din to tujhe harake rahungi main
she showed her tongue to him and went away
Uday: hum to kabse haar chuke hain aapse princess apna dil...ab baari aapki hai (and smiles)

10. The lines in blue are songs
I couldn't believe i've slept till so late today...i feel like today is something special...well today is special...uday is coming back...after 2 days...even though 2 days is not a long time but after all these days we've spent together these 2 days felt like 2 years...i stood up to get ready when i saw an envelope on my side table...i opened it...i unfolded the letter...it said
Haan vo na na karti hai...haan bada akadti hai...haan thodi si ziddi hai...haan akkal se piddi hai...par gusse me jab aaye aur aankhein vo dikhlaye...ladte ladte galti se muskaye...my dil goes mmm...my dil goes mmm...princess i need your help...i'm lost (in your love)...so find the place where we first met and maybe you will find me...
tumhara,
halkat veda
find him??...so this is like a clue...ok fine...if he wants to play i'm ready to play this...where did we first meet??...ummm...ya the beach...
so i got ready and headed towards the beach
I looked everywhere and tried to find him...but he seemed to be nowhere...suddenly my eyes fell on a guy who was throwing pebbles in the sea standing at the same place where me and uday had our first fight...i headed towards the guy to see if it was him...and then i saw a girl sitting on the rocks where i was during our first meet...and one pebble just missed her...i almost shouted at the guy..."tumhe dikhta nahi hai kya...abhi us ladki ko lag jaati!!!"...He faced me...it was not uday...and before i could speak further he asked.."kya aapka naam manyata hai?"..."haan...aapko kaise pata?"..."aapke liye ye letter"
I took the letter from the guy...the envelope was the same as before...i opened it and took out the letter...i read
Ek ajnabee haseena se yoon mulakat ho gayi...phir kya hua ye na pucho...kuch aisi baat ho gayi...
your next clue is waiting for you where we had our fortunate next meet...i knew even then that you had something in you and the scar on your back confirmed it...you'll get one step closer to me where i found "you" my princess...
tumhara,
halkat veda
one more clue??...next meet??...where he knew I was manyata coz he saw my scar??...he did tell me about it...oh yes! the club at his hotel...
I entered the club...at this time of day it was empty...just two three people...who used to work here i guess...
I stopped one guy and asked..."aapko pata hai uday kaha hai??"..."sorry ma'am sir to yahan aaye nahi"..."oh"...he started to walk away when i realized and asked..."usne mere liye koi letter diya hai kya?"..."letter??...haan ma'am ek minute...ye raha ma'am"...he walked away...i opened the letter...
Tum mile to mil gaya hhumsafar...tum mile to khud ki hai khabar...tum mile to rishta sa ban gaya...
Just a few more clues and you'll reach me princess...your next clue will meet you where my doubt of your being my princess was confirmed...the place where i got you back for forever...
tumhara,
halkat veda
next clue??...now he's really testing my patience...ugh...the place where he was certain that i was the princess of devgarh??...ok...i think we met again at the police station...police station???
so i headed towards the police station...this time i knew i had to ask for the letter and not him coz he wasn't here...i asked a lot of people...and no one seemed to have it but finally i did get his letter...even though i was really tired of his clues...but i couldn't help but feel excitement and curiosity rush through me whenever i got any of his letters in my hands...they were so sweet...they told what he felt and what he feels now about our meetings...so i quickly opened this one...
Pucho na yaar kya hua...dil ka karar kya hua...tumpe to hum mar mite the tabhi se...jaanlo humara aage kya hua hai
I'll be waiting for you princess...where you see me everyday
tumhara,
halkat veda
I was grinning after reading this letter...finally the wait is over...i headed as fast as I could towards the rajmahal where i see him everyday
I almost ran inside the rajmahal...I looked here and there went towards the dining table...but he was not there...where was he??...just then I heard a female voice behind me..."rajkumari manyata...ye letter aapke liye hai"..."shukriya anjali"...one more letter??...but wasn't he supposed to be here??...he's got me really confused confused...so i just opened the letter
Tu jahan main waha...sang sang yoon chalu tere...jaise tera asmaan...
hi princess...welcome home...i guess you know where i am...i can't wait to see you...come soon...
tumhara,
halkat veda
I instantly knew where he would be...my room!!!...
I slowly opened the door...and he was there standing near the window...his back towards me...he must have heard me coming because as I opened the door he turned around and smiled at me...and I was just about to say something but he started singing...
Forever is a long time...but I wouldn't mind spending it by your side...tell me everyday I get to see that smile...and I woudn't mind it...at all...
and as he sang he walked towards me and bent on his knees...
"pata hai princess hume kabhi bhi nahi laga tha ki hum kabhi kisi se pyaar karenge...par jab aap humari zindagi me wapis aayi...hume to pata bhi nahi hum tumse tumhari in aankhon se tumhare is chehre se tumhari is muskurahat se tumhari har baat se kab pyaar karne lag gaye...hum tumse bahut pyaar karte hai princess...aur hum humari zindagi ka har ek pal tumhare saath bitana chahte hain...tum humari dhadkan ban chuki ho princess aur hum apni dhadkan ke bina jee nahi sakte...so princess Marry Me. Today and Everyday...will you princess?...will you marry me?"
Tears rolled down my cheeks...but these were tears of happiness...i wiped them and answered..."haan uday...main tumse shadi karungi..."
He had a wide smile on his face. He got up and hugged me tightly...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww that was sooo cute!! I especially liked the 10th one!! Gr8 jo n keep em comin!!;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful update
10 part was really touching,i loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AKlover101

Awww that was sooo cute!! I especially liked the 10th one!! Gr8 jo n keep em comin!!;)


thanks a lot...😃 glad u liked these...will update more soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruti-love

beautiful update

10 part was really touching,i loved it


really happy u found it touching...☺️
thanks a lot for your appreciation 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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More than 1000 views ki khushi mein i have 2 more scenes for you guys 😛...enjoy the ❤️ MANVEERNESS ❤️

11. Uday: Princess humne tumhe kahan kahan nahi dhunda aur tum yahan chhat pe baithi ho?...tum bhi na
Manyata: pagal hoon jhalli hoon...kisiko batana chahiye tha..lekin mera hi toh ghar hai..ab main har jagah kisiko bata ke thodi na jaungi apne ghar me
Uday: humne aisa thodi na kaha princess...
Manyata: waise tu abhi tak ghar nahin gaya?
Uday: (sitting beside her) kya kare princess tumhara chehra dekhe bina ghar jaane dil nahin karta hai...isliye to hum tumhe dhundte dhundte yahan aa gaye
Manyata: tu bhi na kabhi nahin...
Uday: sudhar sakta?...agar hum sudhar gaye princess toh tumhara...
Manyata: kya hoga?...bahut bhala ho jayega teri in chichorapantiyon se chutkara paakar...
Uday: aapka hukum sar aankhon par
Manyata gives him a confused look
Uday: bahut der ho gayi hai...hume ab chalna chahiye...tum bhi jakar so jao...goodnight princess
He gets up and starts to leave when a hand stops him from moving further
He turned around to face her while her hand was still wrapped around his fingers
Manyata: Are yaar main to mazak kar rahi thi...mera ye matlab nahi tha
Uday: princess apne aap ko itna credit bhi mat diya karo...hum to bas tumhe goodnight kehne aaye the...aur vo humne keh diya...
Manyata: agar ye baat hai to fir mere saath kuch aur der baith ja
Uday: par princess...
Manyata: waise bhi mujhe abhi neend nahi aa rahi hai...aur tu pure time to mujhe apna dost kehta phirta hai aur mere kiye itna bhi nahin kar sakta
Uday: theek hai princess jaisi tumhari ichha
Manyata: waise uday mujhe nahin lagta tha tu is type ka hai...matlab itne se mazak ki wajah se
Uday: princess humne kaha na hum sirf goodnight kehne aaye the...ab tumhe manna hai to mano...aur ye galatfehmi apne dil se nikal lo ki hum tumhe itni asani se chod ke chale jayenge kabhi bhi
Manyata: haan vo to main abhi dekh hi chuki hoon...aur waise bhi tu jana bhi chahega na to bhi nahi ja payega
Uday: aur aisa kyu princess??
Manyata: pata nahi sab tujhe itna samajhdar kyu mante hain? ekdum bewakoof hai...gadhe ke bache main tujhe itni asani se jaane thodi na dungi...(she let out a small laugh and then stared at the stars above)
He didn't know if she realized what she had just said and how much it meant to him...if she knew the smile that she just gifted him when she confessed that she didn't want to lose him was going to stay with him for much more longer than just tonight...

12. Uday: princess kya hum aapke sath dance kar sakte hain?
Manyata: tu janta hai na uday mujhe ye dance wance nahi aata
Uday: princess aaj ke din to hume mana mat karo
Manyata: are main janti hu ki aaj tera b'day hai par jab mujhe aata hi nahi hai to main kaise haan kar du...faltu hi tamasha ho jayega aur fir mataji ki daant khani padegi
Uday: bas yehi baat hai na ki tumhe aisa wala dance nahi aata...hum promise karte hai tumhe kuch nahi karna padega aur koi tamasha nahi banega...ab to maan jao princess (he gestures for her hand)
Manyata: par uday
Uday: hum pe bharosa hai na?
Manyata nods her head and gives her hand in his...they head towards the dance floor...Uday signals for the music to change...and a slow song starts to play...
Uday: princess apni heels utar do
Manyata: par kyu?...theek hai
She takes her heels off
Uday: apne pao humare pao ke upar rakho
Manyata: dekh uday agar tujhe mere sath mazak karna hai to...
Uday: hum aisa kuch nahi kar rahe princess..hum jaisa keh rahe hai bas waisa karo...tum khud samajh jaogi
She did as he said...he then took one of her hands in his and placed her other one on his shoulder and his around her waist...and just swayed with the music
Uday: dekha princess itna mushkil bhi nahi hai
Manyata: waise tu teacher to kamal ka hai...ekdum fatt se sikha deta hai
Uday: tum bhi buri student nahi ho princess...haan zyada better hota humare pao ke liye agar aaj tumne thoda kum khaya hota
Manyata looked at him with eyes wide open in disbelief
Manyata: acha bachu
she hit his leg
Uday: ouch...are princess hum to sirf mazak kar rahe the...prrof ke liye baaki ka dance tutmhe utha ke kar lete hain
Manyata: koi zarurat nahi hai uski
They had been dancing for half an hour now...unnati was looking for them...she finally found them and was just going to interupt but she saw manyata and uday dancing together...well they were just swaying more than dancing...manyata's feet were on uday's...her hands around his neck...his around her waist...and her face laid on his chest...they looked so cute...so perfect...so she decided it was better if they were left together for a while...
Edited by akshi_t - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was tooo cute!! Gr8 job!! Do continue soon!:)

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