REEHA, finally after ages gotta see your updateTHANK YOU for pm
do i really need to say how much I like it. You rocked this update.
you know as in your earlier post you have written that JN needs a pure soul who is enough honest and caring that he can complete requirement of these things on behalf of JN also in their relationship and yash is exactly like that. initially i used to think some thing like this also happen in DEK like Manyata will take out human side of UV and some Yash will come who will turn JN from bitch to a normal happy girl. These two people will evolve in love with those people who are pure enough to redeem them. Believe me when I heard the name of aryan from jaggat's mouth ,I jump like idiot saying reeha's aryan but then our all hopes shattered in a pathetic way. I know cvs can't be trusted and i have no hopes from them regarding j's character as they are not capable enough of building out their main female lead's character. Manyata and JN's character's are destroyed brutally by cvs and these two characters had lots and lots of potential.
lets leave it my frustrations aside.
lets come to my review :
so reeha, don't kill me but in this update i am more in love with vidya and mathias love story because their story reminds me of some one who is very close to my heart. so it was like her story.
And i am in love with yash. You built up yash's character almost as much impact full as UV's . you excel in dialogue's , seriously that's the thing I love most about your chronicles.Dialogues are always fun to read. They are interesting and i can imagine it and it feels like i am watching all this on screen.I am eager to see yash's reaction. I know he will not react impulsively but I want JN to confess truth by herself before yash find out from someone else otherwise raita fail jayega😆 I don't know i am having a feeling that this is the point where Manyata and JN will bonded . Manyata will help or advice JN or something like that. May be its my wishful thinking. That kiss apart was super good and more than sexually charged up, it was pure. Great work seriously.
JN and Yash are so good at read each others expressions and in reality JN not this psycho one in DEK but your JN who is actually grey not a psycho vamp needs some one like that who understand her before letting her say something. All in All I LOVE YASH. sometimes I wish that cvs steal some ideas from your chronicles. Your Manyata, JN are so lovely and i suggest you to start write Manyata's chronicles too😆. I hope you hadn't forget oxford ball I think Yash with JN will attend and clash with UV and Manyata. IT would be so EXCITING.
I am looking forward to next update dear and eager to know what happens to vidya and mathias. This back story of yash's parents is very well thought . I wish cvs bring yash for JN rather than paring him with toyboy jaggat and wanna be UV aryan. yes Yash and JN are really very fast as Both are less stubborn the UV and Manyata.I am dying to see what will happen when jn's secret is out. update soon.
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