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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: magicalworld

very nice thanks for pm navya


Thnx and welcome di
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi all, here's chapter 5:
Chapter 5
Last part - Manyata fainted, Uday brought her home and Unnati is very upset.
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Unnati - Yes dada.
Uday - Good!Good night choti.
Unnati - Good night dada.
Saying that Unnati left the room.Uday and Manyata who was unconsious were alone now.
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Uday decided to call dadi sahab to inform her that they had reached home safely.He took out his cell phone and dialed the numbers.
Dadi Sahab - Hello?
Uday - DS?Hum bol rahe hain.Hum sahee salamat ghar pahooch gaye hain.(DS?It's me.We have reached home safely.)
Dadi Sahab - Good!Aur Manyata?(Good! and Manyata?)
Uday - Wo abhi bhi behosh hain.(She is still unconscious.)
Dadi Sahab - Unka dhyan rakhna Uday beta.(Take care of her Uday Beta.)
Uday - Ji dadisa.Aur Aap?(Yes daidisa.And you?
Dadi Sahab - Hum sab bhi ghar pahooch gaye hain.(We have also reached home)
Uday - *lets out a sigh of relief*Good night DS.
Dadi Sahab - Good night Uday beta.
With the small conversation Uday ends the call and sits beside Manyata.Soon, he falls asleep.
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He wakes up in the morning to find that Manyata is now conscious and has changed.
Manyata - Aap uth gaye?(You woke up?)
Uday - Haan.Aur aapko ab kaisa lag raha hai?(Yes.and how are you feeling now?)
Manyata - Hum ab theek hai.(I am fine now.)
Uday - Yeh sun kar acha laga ki aap theek hai.(Nice to hear you are feeling better.)
Manyata - Iske piche we dono hi hain na?(Those two are behind it aren't they?)
Uday - *frowns*Woh sab ke bare mein baad mein baat karenge.(We'll talk about this later)
Manyata - *sighs*Aur aaj ka function?(and what about the function today?)
Uday - Filhaal toh hum kuch nahi keh sakte.(I can't tell for now)
Manyata - *sighs again*Abhi breakfast par chale?(Shall we go for breakfast now?)
Uday - Chalte hain.(Let's go.)
Manyata - Good!
The couple make their way to the dining table.
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At the dining table -
Maharaj Giriraj - Manyata beta, ab aapki tabat kaisi hai?(Manyata dear, are you fine now?)
Manyata - Hum ab theek hai.(I am fine now)
Maharaj Giriraj - Aur Uday beta aap?(and Uday?)
Uday - Hum bhi theek hai dad.(I am also fine dad.)
Unnati - *whispers*Psst Manyata...
Manyata - *whispers* bolo Unnati.
Unnati - *whispers*meet me after breakfast.
Manyata - *whispers* Theek hai.(Okay.)
Saying this Manyata,Uday,Unnati and Maharaj Giriraj start eating their breakfast.
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After breakfast in Unnati's room -
Unnati - *tensed voice*Manyata!Yaha ayiye(Manyata!Come here.)
Manyata - *Sits down near Unnati*Han bolo Unnati.(Yes Unnati,tell)
Unnati - Yeh un dono ka kaam hai.(Its the two of them again)
Manyata - *frowns*Aisa kab tak chalega Unnati?Pehle bar humne unhe maaf kar diya tha par is bar...(How long will this go Unnati?The first time we forgave them but this time ...)
Unnati - *sighs*Akash aur Yaman hamare life ki sabse badi galtiya thi.(Akash and Yaman were our life's biggest mistakes.)
Manyata - Kash hum dono ne yeh galti nahi ki hoti.(I wish we would have not made this mistake)
Unnati - Sahi kaha aapne.(You are right)
Manyata - Sahi kaha*flashback(will show it in later updates)*(You said it)
Unnati - Par ab hum prarthna karne ke alawa kuch kar bhi toh nahi sakte.(But now we can't do anything except pray)
Manyata - *sighs*Ab toh ghar se bahar bhi nahi nikal sakte.(We can't even go out of the house now)
Unnati - *crying* Hu...Humari wajah s...seh dada musibat m...meh hai.(*criying and stammering* because of me dada is in trouble)
Manyata - Ro mat Unnati, sab thik ho jayega.(Don't cry Unnati, everything will be fine)
Unnati - par ...(but...)
Manyata - Par war kuch nahi.Abhi rona dhona band kijiye aur uske jagah rest kijiye.(No but wuts.Don't cry only rest.)
Unnati - Ji bhaabi sa!(Yes Bhaabi sa)
Manyata - Kitne baar kaha hai Unnati aap hume Manyata kahiye.(I have told you so many times Unnati, call me Manyata.)
Unnati - *smiles mischievously*Toh ek aur bar kahe dijiye.(Then tell me once again)
Manyata - *laughs*Acha baba jo kahna hai so kaho.(Ok ok call me whatever you want)
Unnati - hahaha
Manyata - toh mein chalu?(Then shall I go?)
Unnati - Yes.
Manyata - See you later.
Unnati - same here.
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Manyata gets up and walks towards her and Uday's room.She finds Uday there.
Uday - Toh Manyata, Unnati ab kaisi hai?
Manyata - wo theek hai.
Uday - Manyata...
Manyata - Haan Uday?
Uday - Humare saath ayiye.Hume aapko kuch dikhana hai.
To Be Continued...
XXX
Hope this update's nice.Will send the PM's later
TILL THEN,
Navya











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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Glad you liked it di

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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
I'm sooo excited to read the next chapter!! Plz update asap!!;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
superb hayee bechare uday ke kitnay dushman hain...another superb piece of writing..keep going...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
awesome update loved it ok i know akash so yaman is the guy who unnati like and maanyta is pregnant well written beautifully done thanks for the pm and the translation you rock
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: dumas

awesome update loved it ok i know akash so yaman is the guy who unnati like and maanyta is pregnant well written beautifully done thanks for the pm and the translation you rock

I really think you're too good at figuring things out! You guess things so easily.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sirjee

superb hayee bechare uday ke kitnay dushman hain...another superb piece of writing..keep going...

Thnx I will continue ASAP
and BTW,I don't write that nice
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AKlover101

I'm sooo excited to read the next chapter!! Plz update asap!!;)

I will update as soon as I can
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
hey i just read the five parts and they are awesome really love it please update soon and can u pm me the next time u update please

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