FF on Dek chapter 5 pg 6

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navyan07

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hello guys and gals.This is the first time I am writting an FF so plz plz plz support me by letting me know what you think of it and commenting.My idea here is Manyata has already married Uday and accepted herself as a princess and she is having a good laugh remembering old memories.

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Index :

Chapter 1 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/2756087/ff-on-dek-chapter-5-pg-6

Chapter 2 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/2756087/ff-on-dek-chapter-5-pg-6?pn=2

Chapter 3 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/2756087/ff-on-dek-chapter-5-pg-6?pn=3�

Chapter 4 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/2756087/ff-on-dek-chapter-5-pg-6?pn=5

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Chapter 1

Manyata-It has now been a few years since I accepted myself and acted as a royal,married Uday,became a maharani and most importantly forgot my past,my old friends,Akash,my so-called baba and my chawl.It had taken me quite a long time to realise I was meant to be a royal.When I first came to the palace I was not the same as I am now.A lot has changed and probably for good.Before I was wild and now I am a lot more sophisticated.Just as I was thinking about it,I saw my husband Uday enter the room.I had actually grown comfortable with him now.I think I am falling for him too.But We will come to that later.

Uday-So,wifey how was your day today.I hope you did'nt forget tommorow we have to attend the function.

Manyata-Fine and I remember our schedule tommorow.Anyways U day,tell me,do you remember our first date?

Uday-Yes,how can I forget?You wear wearing a beautiful purple sari.You even dumper you 'ex - majnu' for me that day and the look on J's face was worth seeing when her plan of ruining our day failed.

Oh,yes one important thing J finally forgot Uday and moved on and found the new love of her life Prince Jaggat.They got engaged a few days ago and are planning on getting married next month.Also,she FINALLY accepted me as her sister and I did the same."Manyata,are you listening?"Uday asked interuppting her thoughts."Um...yes I am"I said.Just as Uday was about to ask her what she was going to wear tommorow at the function,they both saw J and Jaggat entering their room.

To be continued...(if you want)

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I know its very short as its just a tryout.I will continue only if you guys want me to.Hope you guys at least don't hate it.I know I am not a good writter and all that but plz plz let me know how it was.Also,ignore the mistakes and plz don't throw tomatoes at me if its bad.

Edited by navyan07 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice FF

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Gr8 ff!!! Do continue soon!!:)

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A great start do c0ntinue

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waooo plzz keep writing...n finally i get to read sum FF on manveer after marriage...gr88 going gal...

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awesome ff

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navyan07

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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you guys for the lovely comments!

I wasn't expecting nice comments to tell the truth.At least I know that this FF isn't half bad! I will surely continue!

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navyan07

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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 2

Last chapter: J and Jaggat entered their room while Manyata and Uday were talking.

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J : Jiji and jiju kya chal raha hai?(jiji and jiju,Whats up?)

M : J!Tum yahan?(J!You,here?)

J : Kyu?Hum apni jiji aur apne jiju se nahi mil sakte?(Why?Can't I meet my sister?)

M : Humne aisa kab kahan?Toh, aap aur Jaggat kahi jane ka plan bane rahe ho kya?(When did I say that?So,are you and Jaggat going somewhere?)

J : Hah!In fact agar aap aur jiju humare saath chale,toh humein bahut khushi hogi.Aap dono chalenge na?(Yes!and we would be very happy if you and jiju came with us.So will you both come?)

M : Ummm...

Manyata was about to say something but was cut off by Uday.

U : Hum jaaroor chalenge!Par hum ja kahan rahe hai?(Yes,sure!But where?)

Jaggat : Uss jagah ...(The place...)

Jaggat was cut off by J

J : Woh toh ek sur-pur-ice hain*imitating Manyata's old habit*(That's a sur-per-ice)

Uday,J and Jaggat shared a laugh while Manyata blushed.

M : J!

J : Sorry jiji par ab sharmana hi hai ya chale bhi.(Sory jiji but come on there is no time for blushing we have to go.)

Uday : chalo chalte hain.(come,lets go)

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Uday,J,Jaggat and Manyata come outside the palace and get into the car.Manyata and Uday sit at the back while J and Jaggat sit at the front.Jaggat is driving.

M : *whispering to UV*aapko kya lagta hai,hum kaha ja rahe hain?(Where do you think we are going?)

U : *whispering to Manyata*pata nahin!Shayad 'ex - majnu' se milane le ja rahi hogi J taki wo humein pa sake.(I don't know! Perhaps we will be meeting 'ex - majnu' so that J can have me to herself)

M :*still whispering*I am serious uday!

U :*also whispering*toh humnein kab kahan ab serious nahin.(so when did I say you weren't serious)

M :*whispers*waise serious se yaad aaya Papa(she started calling Brijraj papa after her and Uday's marriage) ne hum logo aaj raat diner per bulaya hain.(Serious reminds me papa has invited us over for dinner tonight)

U :*whispers*par aapne promise kiya that ke hum aur aap akele dinner per jayenge.(but you promised that you and I will go to dinner alone today)

M :*whispers*come on Uday!Please!

U :*whispers*OK OK princess par...(Ok princess,but...)

M :*whispers*par...(but...)

U :*whispers*par apko humein ek kiss dena hoga.(but you will have to give me a kiss)

Manyata blushes.

M :*whispers*abhi!(now?)

U :*whispers*haan abhi!(yes, now?)

M :*whispers*Ok!

UV bends down and Manyata kisses him on his cheek.UV indicates to his lips and Manyata blushes even more than before.Manyata slowy moves her lips near his and right when they are about to meet J turns back and says:

J : Jiji,jiju chup chup kar kya chal raha hai,huh?(Jiji,jiju What's going on silently in the back seat?)

Jaggat :J!let's not disturb their private moment right?

Uv and Manyata are very embarassed.

U : J!Jaggat!Its nothing like that

M : Yes!We were just...

J : just...

M : Ummm... Uday,please tell J what we were doing.

U : Ummm... why don't you tell her Manyata

Jaggat : Admit it!You both were about to kiss.

M : No!We weren't.

U : Yes,Manyata is telling the truth.We were just discussing about what we should wear tonight to the devgarh palace for dinner.

J : Yeah!Right!(sarcastically)

Jaggat : Anyways,we're there!

Manyata and UV let out a sigh of relief.

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They arrived at UV's restro - bar(the place of their second meeting).The lights were off and the place was empty or so it seemed.

M : J!Yahan itna sannata kyo hai(J!Why is it so quiet in here)

J : Woh hum Uday ko kahene dete hain.Uday...(I'll let Uday say that.Uday...)

Suddenly the lights turned on and she could see both the royal families and many guests gathered there).Uday got on his knees.

U : Happy anniversary Manyata!😳

M : Aapko yaad tha!Mujhe umid toh nahi thi par aapne humein surprise kar diya.(You remembered!I didn't expect you to remeber but you really surprised me)

U : *teasingly*Aapko hum par itna bhi bharosa nahi tha!*tries to make a sad face*(*teasingly*You don't even trust me that much*tries making a sad face*)

M : Hum sirf mazaak kar rahe the!(I was just joking!)

Uday still has the artificial sad face and to make him happy Manyata kisses him on the cheek and says:

M : Aap iss duniya ke sabse ache pati hain!Happy Anniversary mere Udayveer.(You are the best husband in the world!Happy Anniversary,my Udayveer.)

Uday turned happy and handed Manyata a gift.

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To be continued

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Thanks for commenting and liking guys!I know that even this update is short but just because I usually post short ones I will try to update a new chapter everyday.If you guys want larger updates please let me know.Comments,Criticisms,likes and dislikes are welcome.

Edited by navyan07 - 13 years ago

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

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awesome update that was so cute loved it maanyata and uday sneaking a kiss but was interrupted j again loved how he planned a surprise anniversary party for he loved it that was very beautiful thanks for the pm and the translations

Edited by dumas - 13 years ago

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