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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello gals and gals!!!!!! I am back with chapter 4.

Chapter 4

Last Chapter - Unnati sounds very worried while telling Uday his life is in danger and calling him home along with Manyata.

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Manyata : Kya hua Uday?Tumhare chare ka rang kyu ur gaya?(What happened Uday?You are looking very scared.)

Uday was in a shock.He did'nt he told reply.

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Uday

I was very scared and upset.I felt like crying but royals are not supposed to do so in front of everyone.I was scared, not because my life was in danger but because Uday me being in danger meant having the people closest too my heart in danger too.I was not thinking about myself but of the people around me.I broke out of my trance when I saw Manyata staring at me as if I had grown two heads.Somehow I finnaly answered her question.

Me : Nothing Manyata(I didn't want her to know this)!

Manyata : Don't lie Uday.I can totally tell it when you are doing so.

Me : Really Manyata, everything's fine!

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Manyata

I finally suceeded in breaking him out of his trance but I knew he was lying to me when he told "everything is fine".Something was bothering him and whatever it was I didn't like it.So to know the truth, I decided to use some emotional atyachar.

Me : Come on Uday!*makes a puppy face*Pleeeaaassseee.

Uday : Ok Ok!You know properly I can never say no to you.My life's in danger but that's not the main concern.The main concern is that to kill me they can do anything including kidnapping or murdering the people closest to me.

Me : Whaaat!

It was all I could manage to say when I heard Uday mention his life was in danger.Before I could tell anyathing else everything blacked out.

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Manyata had fainted right into Uday's arms.Uday looked very scared.He carried Manyata to their room,placed her on the bed and told a servant to call the elders.

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The servant went down and told the elders that yuvraj had called them upstairs.All the elders went upstairs to know the reason why the yuvraj had called them.

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When they entered the room the sight before them totally shocked them.

Dadi Sahab - Manyata!Uday manyata ko kya huya?

But the most terrified one in the room was(any guesses)Maharani Komal.

She rushed towards Manyata,tears in her eyes.

Uday - Dadi Sahab, Manyata behoz ho gayi hai(DS, Manyata has fainted)

Dadi Sahab - Aise achanak?(How?)

Uday - Dadi Sahab, darasal baat ye hai ki ...*Explains the situation*(Ds Actually , ...*Explains the situation*)

Dadi Sahab -Kya!*sound like a mixture of anger and tense*.Aap dono abhi ghar jaiye.Hum ek aur risk nahi le sakte. she tells as a flashback plays in her mind(Will show the falshback in later updates).Hume Poora yakin hai ki ye unhi dono ka kaam hai!(What!*sound like a mixture of anger and tense*.You both should leave for home now.We can't take another risk. she tells as a flashback plays in her mind(Will show the falshback in later updates).I am sure that its the two of them again.)

Uday - DS,Hum abhi toh chale jayenge par baad mein humein unka samnan toh karna hi padega na.(DS,Till when will we just dodge them we will have to face them one day.)

DS - Filhalal toh aap dono please jayiye.(for now,you both go.)

Uday - par aap sab...(but what about about you all?)

DS - Hum kuch upay nikal lenge par abhi aap dono please jayiye.(We will think of something for us but for now please go.)

Uday - *Giving up*Thike, argue karke koi faida nahi,(Ok!No point in arguing)

DS - Waha phoochte hi humein call karna ok?(Call me as soon as you get there ok?)

Uday - Ji DS.(Yes DS)

Saying this Uday left carrying Manyata in his arms.

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As soon as they entered the Jaigarh palace Unnati rushed towards them and hugged them tightly.

Unnati - Dada!I was very worried.What happened to bhabhi sa?

Uday - Don't worry, she just fainted.

Unnati - But how?

After a quick update.

Uday - Those two are behind it aren't they.

Unnati - Yes dada,you guessed correct.It's those two.

Uday - I hope they don't do anything to you all.

Unnati - Dada, don't worry about us.You are the one in danger.

Uday - That's NOT the main concern choti.

Unnati - *In between sobs*It's all my fault.I should have thought twice before doing the big mistake.

Uday quickly hugged Unnati as by now they had reached Manveer's bedroom and Uday had placed Manyata on the bed.

Uday - *in a soothing voice*Shush choti.Aapki koi galti nahi hai, jiski galti hai use sajaa jaroor milegi.(Shush choti.Its not your fault the ones who are doing it will get a big punishment)

Unnati - Par dada ...(But dada ...)

Before Unnati could say anything else Uday put a finger on her lip.

Uday - Bas choti, ab aap so jayiye aur tension bilkur mat lijiye(Shush Unnati, now sleep and have no fear)

To be continued ...

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Guys, is this update long enough?I can't really type anymore right now.I am totally pooped and I still have to send out those PM's.Hope this is at least larger than before.

Till then,

Navya

Edited by navyan07 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice one again pm me weneva u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: manveerlover


Nice one again pm me weneva u update

Thnx but I am not that nice and I will surely PM you.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice part,waiting to see next part
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gr8 update!!! Can't wait to read more!!!:) Gr8 job once again!!:)<33
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG u r making me think in a wild manner...i hope manyata is ok...n even uday dont get anytype of prob...or damage...n yy not calling dos 4 manyata...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome updates loved it uday is so romantic maanyata does not realize the locket opens the diary that was so cute uday in danger hope they don't get hurt , some thing else is happening here who is those two maanyata fainted loved it update can't wait for the flashbacks thanks for the pm and the translation you rock

Edited by dumas - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: dumas

awesome updates loved it uday is so romantic maanyata does not realize the locket opens the diary that was so cute uday in danger hope they don't get hurt , some thing else is happening here who is those two maanyata fainted loved it update can't wait for the flashbacks thanks for the pm and the translation you rock


Thanks!One of the two is very obvious(hint) in this story.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sirjee

OMG u r making me think in a wild manner...i hope manyata is ok...n even uday dont get anytype of prob...or damage...n yy not calling dos 4 manyata...

I haven't actually thought about it that much right now but I will try my best to think up something nice and thnx for commenting.

Originally posted by: AKlover101

Gr8 update!!! Can't wait to read more!!!:) Gr8 job once again!!:)<33

Thnx! I will update as soon as I can

Originally posted by: shruti-love

nice part,waiting to see next part

thanks for pm

Thanks and I will update ASAP.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice thanks for pm navya

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