MANVEER - please come back (chap 10 - pg 18) - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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waooo...plzz do continue a bit faster...coz i always wait 4 ur posts...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow finaly k0mal sp0ke i wish this happens on sh0w as wel plx write m0re update s0on lovd ths part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really nice update...even though it was short.
Worth the wait though.Thanks for the pm
cant wait to read the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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felt sorry for manyata mother poor woman has lost her son because of stubbornness thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
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😃WOAHHH
what happens next Pleaseee conintue soon
Awesomeee
Pleasee comintue soon
Thank you for the PM😳
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THIS IS SO GOOD

SUPEB WORK

I AM NEW READER

LOVE THIS HOPE

UV WILL COME BACK

SOON.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Someone tell Udayveer about Manyata and I want him to come back to her
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ Anjalika13 - thanks
@ Abha
karan - thanks
@ pri01 -
thanks, i honestly hope so because I really don't where this is going
@ Surya.Ravi
- thanks, he might come back in 9 (still not sure)
@ sirjee
- thanks & sorry for being late then
@ manveerlover
- thanks, I wish for the same thing
@ Peda
- thanks
@ dumas
- ya me too but this maybe the last time I am feeling sorry for her
@ salekh1
- thanks
@ zigzagway_sadi
- thanks
@ simm28 -
thanks
@ adventure_gurl
- me 2

Extremely sorry for being 2 weeks late, chap 8 will be up in the next 15 mins
hope you guys will like it

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am back with my super bad hindi...please ignore or PM me the spelling errors
hope this will meet your expectations and if it doesn't then the only option i have is 2 😭

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Hours passed, days then finally months, everyday took me closer to my destiny – Manyata. I really don't know when I became her actually when I really became the real me. It's like the day Uday left, he left her for me. She made me feel stronger when all I wanted was to break down and cry and that was everyday in the past year. Sometimes because of my failure, sometimes because of Akash and there was always Uday. Uday again – want to know where he is, right? Well so do I…could someone please tell me where he is, honestly, I'll do anything to bring him back. Uday is the only person I know, who can manage to generate several emotions in me at the same time and the first one is ANGER. 1 year is a hell lot of time; I really don't understand how he can stay away from his loved ones. He knows how much everyone loves him but still he is hurting them by staying away. I do know that he does call mom & Unnati but never said a thing about him especially to me. For the first 2 months I asked both of them about him every single day and they just told that he was fine and I should concentrate on my studies so I stopped asking altogether. He maybe far away from he but I always feel that he is with me 24/7, asking me to stay strong. Okay, Shut Up Manyata, enough about Uday let's talk about something else. VJ bhai- he's great, he just returned from his world tour. (He went on a world tour 4 months ago…god it was so boring without him) Seriously, Jai and I went half mad without him. No matter what happens, VJ bhai ke bina din adhura adhura sa lagta hai, but he brought a very cute girl named Laila with him and man that girl has completely changed him (You have to see him). Okay moving on to meri pyaari behen Jai (ji haan pyaari) she stays extremely happy nowadays; she is over her infatuation and has found the love of her life (or so she claims) KARAN…he is definitely not a prince but then who cares, as long as she is happy we all are fine. When did this happen? Well 5 months after Uday's departure. She broke the news about Karan and hell broke loose but I somehow convinced all my family members and this didn't go unnoticed by Jai. At first she came into the room, accused me, screamed, fought, cried and then she shocked me (literally); she said sorry and hugged me and I did the same. I was the first one to meet Karan – tall, fair, handsome, sweet, a business tycoon but most of all in love with Jai. I liked him a lot, he is perfect for Jai and so you may have guessed our relationship is extremely strong. DS and Dad are extremely happy for Jai but they are disappointed with my relationship with Akash, though I know they have come to terms with it. Unnati – good sometimes, she has changed so much that it's hard to define. We are still friends but we keep avoiding each other at parties because if the topic named UDAY comes up then we both don't know how we will react. I know somewhere in her heart she blames me for her brother's departure. Mom – well she doesn't consider me her daughter at all, she hardly looks at me, she is happy for Jai and as for me her anger overpowers her love for me. Akash – well what do I say about him…he's he's well…my chain of thoughts were broken by a knock on the door by my new and closest friend turned stylist – Nishita. I met her in Uday's club and we hit off instantly, she is also Uday's ex-girlfriend and my latest stylist, she was born and brought up in London but has been living here since the past 2 years.

Nishita: (chirps excitedly) Can I come in…Of course I can. Waise bhi mujhe kaun bahar nikal sakta hai mein Rajkumari Manyata ki stylist jo hoon. OMG, Maana (she always calls me that) you look drop dead gorgeous, all the Rajkumari's will be full of envy because that dress and jewelry are truly amazing and all the hot Yuvraaj's will have a hard time in getting their eyes of you, jeez I hope Akash zaada gussa na ho aur unhe maar de (my face falls) on 2nd thoughts ye toh sirf Uday kar sakta hai(she notices my face) Hey, I forgive you for snatching him, okay, chill (serious tone) Admit it, you love him (Either ways, who can throw me out, after all I am Rajkumari Manyata's stylist. OMG, Maana (she always calls me that) you look drop dead gorgeous. All the princesses will envy you because of the dress and jewelry are truly amazing and all the hot Yuvraaj's will have a hard time in getting their eyes of you, jeez I hope Akash doesn't get too angry and beat them up(my face falls), 2nd thoughts only Uday can do that(she notices my face), Hey, I forgive you for snatching him, okay, chill.(serious tone) Admit it, you love him)

Me: Paagal ho gaye hai kya! I don't love him, I love Akash (have you gone nuts! I don't love him, I love Akash)

Nishita: Mujhe samjha rahi ho ya kud ko (whom are you trying to convince – me or you)

Me: Of course, tujhe (of course, you)

N: Oh really, theek hai toh apni aakhey baand karo (oh really, then close your eyes)

Me: Kyu (why)

N: Purani hindi filmme dekna baand kar diya hai kya? Idiot, remember that close your eyes, take a deep breath, place your hand on your heart, listen to your heartbeat technique. Tum jiska chera dekhogi tum ussse pyaar karti ho (have you stopped watching old hindi movies? Idiot, remember that close your eyes, take a deep breath, place your hand on your heart, listen to your heartbeat technique. You love the person whose face flashes before you)

Me: Tumne try kiya (have you tried this)

N: Hell no, iss liye toh tujhe try karne ke liye bol rahi hu and anyways mujhe iss sab ki koi zarurat nahi thi, mujhe day 1 se pata tha ki mein Taylor se pyaar karti hu ab try toh kar (Hell no,that's why I am asking you and anyways I didn't need this technique because I always knew that I loved Taylor and please try it,)

Me: Fine

So I closed my eyes and the moments that we've spent together flashed before me one by one and then suddenly he disappeared, all I could do was to open my eyes.

N: Toh Akash ya Uday? (so Akash or Uday?)

Me: Wohi jo hamesha se tha (the one who I've always loved)

N: Seriously?

Me: Seroiusly, ab chal tere kaaran mein aapni shaadi mein late hogi (Seroiusly, now let's go or else I'll be late on my wedding day)

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thankfully, you've reached the end 😊


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