MANVEER - please come back (chap 10 - pg 18)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys, this is the first time I am writing something so sorry in advance,u can't blame a girl 4 trying however pathetic...i know most of u r hating manyata that's y the story is from her point of view...
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MANYATA'S POV (1 year later)

It was the day I was eagerly waiting for. The day when I will finally get the guy I love. The day I'll finally become his despite the pressure placed upon me. It's Saturday 9th February. I am sitting in my room in front of my dressing table getting ready especially for him. 1 year ago I would've gotten ready in 10 minutes and today I am taking 4 hours (that's a lot) but it's worth it. For the first time I like what I see in the mirror. Eyes lined with brown eyeliner, silver-blue mix eye shadow, baby pink lipstick and just a hint of blusher. 4 diamond sets adorned in my neck, a huge set of matching earrings, 2 dozen bangle in each hand, anklets (that's way too much for me) and hair tied in a tidy chignon but it's worth it ' that's what Unnati said. I am wearing a heavy red lehnga with sky blue border, matching red blouse and an extremely heavy red dupatta with sky blue borders too with silver work on it but something is still amiss; aren't brides supposed to be excited or nervous? I am neither; I don't feel a damn thing maybe because I am thinking about him again. He was the one who made it all possible but he isn't here. He, made me choose this outfit but he isn't here to see it. Sky blue and white are his favorite colors. (Hey, I substituted white for the silver work or else DS would've killed me). I hated him but now I just want to see him once. JUST ONCE'once, before I get married. I want to ask him 1 single question ' "WHY UDAY". He wanted my kingdom, we both know he did then why the change of heart. Why he (out of all the people) ask DS, mom and dad to get me married to Akash. After that, he left Mumbai without meeting anyone and didn't come back. I silently prayed to god -

"Bhagwaan ji, please Uday ko wapas bhej do, mujhe mere sawalo ke jawab chahiye, PLEASSEEE"

(God, please send Uday back, I really want the answers to my questions)

and Akash calls.

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Don't worry guys'I am not a MONASH fan

It was a stupid attempt and if u all forgive me then I'll post the next 1in which MONASH fight

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part 1 - page 1 Please Come Back

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/2756005/manveer-please-come-back-chap-10-pg-18

part 2 - page 2 Tension

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/2756005/manveer-please-come-back-chap-10-pg-18?pn=2

part 3 - page 4 How It Happened
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/52707973

part 4 - page 5 Flashback Continues
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/52752619
part 5 - page 7 Flashback: Breaking A Relationship
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/52795679
part 6 - page 9 A Promise
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/2756005/manveer-please-come-back-chap-10-pg-18?pn=9
part 7 - page 11 Drama
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/dekha-ek-khwaab/2756005/manveer-please-come-back-chap-10-pg-18?pn=11
part 8 - page 13 Admit it
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/54175334
part 9 - page 15 A Love Story
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/54868198
part 10 - page 18 Is it a good bye
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Posted: 13 years ago
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the fact that you're writing with Manyata wanting to see Uday we all know you're NOT Moniya/Akash fan

i really liked your little bit please post more =D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sexyheels

the fact that you're writing with Manyata wanting to see Uday we all know you're NOT Moniya/Akash fan


i really liked your little bit please post more =D



thanks a lot😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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reallly good... yeah, plz continuee!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome start - indeed Manyata did cry to meet her Uday. We all know one day Manyata would cry for Uday and only Uday.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Woah... i love were this is heading
Pleassseee conitnue thiss.please
and if possible PM me the next part😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice...please pm me when you update..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Go on go on hun!... That was terrific. Atleast somewhere we are getting Manyata restless and desiring to meet Udayveer... its too far fetched in the show...

So I really enjoyed your piece!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi, once again...my school's starting tomorrow so thought i'll update this...
thanks a lot guys 4 liking the 1st part😊
and sorry in advance - my hindi is bad😭

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Akash: Moniya kaisi ho, jaanti ho mein bahut excited hoon aaj humari shaadi hai. God, I can't wait to see u (Moniya how are you? I am very excited, it's our wedding today)

Manyata: Akash, mein tumse baad me baat karti hu, OKAY (Akash, I will talk to you later, OKAY)

A: Kyu (why)'Uss paagal Uday ke phone ka intezaar kar rahi ho (are you waiting for that idiot Uday's call)'Moniya maine tumse kaha tha ki who wapas humari zindagi barbaad karne nahi ayega (Moniya, I've told you before he is not coming back to ruin our life). Tum' (You)

M: (cuts him off) Bas'bahut bol liya ab tum suno, (Enough, u have said enough now listen to me)

1stly, Uday paagal nahi hai (1stly, Uday is not mad)

2ndly, usske kaaran humari shaadi ho rahi hai, ussne sab ko manaya tha, ya who bhi bhool gaye (2ndly, we are getting married because of him, he had persuaded everyone or you have forgotten that already). Tumhe saach mein lagta hai ki DS aur DAD shaadi ke liye aise hi haan bol denge (do you really think that DS & Dad would've readily accepted our alliance)

A: Moniya, tum mujhse aise baat kyu kar rahi ho? (Moniya, why are you talking to me like this)
M: jab tum mere dost ke bare mein aisa bol sakte ho toh mein tumse aise baat kyu nahi kar sakti (when you can speak ill of my friend then why can't I do the same with you)

A: Really, jab tak who yaha tha, tum ussse nafarat kiya karti thi (Really, when he was here you used to hate him)

M: I agree'par jo ussne kiya who ek dost hi kar sakta tha (I agree but only a friend can do what he did for me)

A: Woh dur ho kar bhi humare rishte ko tod raha hai, kya tumhe dikhai nahi deta, Moniya? (He is breaking our relation even though he is far away from us, can't you see, Moniya)

M: Dikhai deta hai Akash'ache tarah dikhai deta hai ki tum insecure ho rahe ho. Ab mein phone rakti hoon (cuts the call) (I do Akash'I do see that you are getting insecure. I'll talk to you later)

Oh no!!! She fought with Akash again but sometimes she just couldn't help it. His behavior sometimes made her blood boil. Truth was she was fed up with the daily drama. There used to be a time when they rarely fought now it's the exact opposite. There wasn't a day when she didn't scream at him and the reason for their fights were UV, Akash insecurity, my family, responsibilities and so on.


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crossing my fingers...hope u'll like it
Edited by Sheetal.Shalini - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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good update..😊
Edited by Surya.Ravi - 13 years ago

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