MANVEER - please come back (chap 10 - pg 18) - Page 10

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75% english & hindi spelling will be wrong so please ignore it or PM me the spelling errors.
Translation in italic

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Nishita: Bullsh*t, there's no way in hell you are in love with that Akash. (I try to interrupt but she doesn't let me). I admit ki Akash ek accha ladka hai but honey you don't love him, can't you see? Shaadi ke liye kapdo se lekar menu tak sub kuch Uday ka favorite hai, har rooz sirf usssi ki baate karti ho tum, sapne ne usssi ke, par pyaar Akash se, what a pathetic joke.

(Bullsh*t, there's no way in hell you are in love with that Akash. (I try to interrupt but she doesn't let me). I admit Akash is a nice guy and all but honey you don't love him, can't you see? From the clothes right down to the menu of this wedding ceremony it's all Uday's favorite, everyday you talk about him, everyday you dream about and you say you love Akash, what a pathetic joke)

Me: Nishi, meri baat toh suno, mein (Nishi, listen to me I)

Nishita: (interrupts) No thanks ab tumhari baato mein koi interest nahi hai Rajkumari Manyata. You know last week se pray kar rahi thee ki UV aaj wapas aa jae, hell maine toh mannat bhi mang li thee par ab soch rahi hoon ki who na aye toh accha hai. I mean wapas aakar kya kar lega tumme toh pata bhi nahi hai ki pyaar kis chidiya ka naam hai. Seriously, how can you be so dumb? Maine tumhe Uday ke liye taeyaar kiya tha par ab lag raha hai ki maine aap time waste kiya. So Rajkumari Manyata it was nice styling you, aaj ke baad mein aapko style nahi karugi kyuki aapko iski zarurat nahi padegi. Chawl mein log saj dhaj ke thodina ghumte nahi, mein chalti hoon.

((interrupts) No thanks, I am least interested in what you are going to say Princess Manyata. You know since last week I have been praying that UV comes back, hell I even asked for a mannat but now I wish he doesn't come back. I mean he do by coming, you don't even know whom you actually love.Seriously, how can you be so dumb? You know, I styled you up for Uday but it seems I wasted my time. . So Princess Manyata it was nice styling you but I won't be styling from now onwards because you won't be needing it. People living in chawls don't roam around all decked up do they'I'll take your leave)

Me: (trying hard not to break down) Kaha ja rahi to Nishi? (where are you going Nishi?)

Nishita: It's Nishita, Princess. Sirf mere friend's mujhe Nishi bula sakte hai and mujhe aapki shaadi attend karneka koi mood nahi hai isliye I am going home. Bye, Rajkumari ji hope this is the last time I meet you. (It's Nishita, Princess. Only my friends can call me that and I am not in the mood to attend your wedding. I am going home. Bye, Princess hope this is the last time I meet you.)

With that she left the room and after 15 seconds I heard something break. Typical Nishita, whenever she's extremely angry or sad she breaks the nearest glassware she can find. I just wanted to tell her that she got it all wrong instead she handed me a nice lecture and left me alone. What is it with me, really, why does this always happens with me that whenever I love someone he/she leaves me alone. I loved baba (Murari) ' betrayed me and left me alone, I loved Chikki & Soni ' now they tell I have changed too much, I loved mom ' she hates me because of Uday, I loved DS, Dad, VJ bhai and J ' they aren't happy with my decisions, I loved Unnati ' she is angry with me because of Uday, I liked Uday ' he left me and now Nishita has done the same. I wanted to tell her that I've always liked Uday but she got it all wrong and then I couldn't control my emotions any more. Why can't people believe the fact that I loved Akash? He is the only person who hasn't left me yet. I cried and cried until the door opened and without looking at the person I jumped in his arms.

Brij: Manyata beta kya hua kyu ro rahi hai aap. (Wipes my tears) rona band kijiye Manyata warna hum aapni banduk se aapko daudane lage ge. (I stop crying and we both laugh) aap muskurate hue bahut khubsurat lagti hai Manyata toh zaada muskuraya kijiye. Aaj aap bahut sundar lag rahi hai, aapko dekh kar humme aapki Maa ki yaad aya gayi.

(Manyata dear, what happened, why are you crying (Wipes my tears) Manyata, stop crying or else I'll chase you with my gun (I stop crying and we both laugh) you look very nice when you smile Manyata so smile a lot. You know, you are looking very beautiful today and by looking at you I remember your mom)

Me: (jokingly) Matlab humari Maa koi aur kya (why? Is my Mom someone else)

Brij: Humara matlab tha ki aaj aap mei humme Komal ki chavi dikh rahi hai. Aap waise hi lag rahi hai jaise Komal humari shaadi de din lag rahi hai.(I meant I can see Komal in you. Today you are looking exactly like Komal did on our wedding)

Me: Dad hum iss jawab jante hai phir bhi kya hum pooch sakte hai (I know the answer to this question but can I ask you something)

Brij: Shoot'waise bhi shayad aaj ke baad hum dono ko baate karne ka time na mille (shoot'either ways I don't think we'll get time to talk to each other after this)

Me: Aapki aur Mom ki shaadi arranged the ya (your and Mom's marriage ' was it arranged or)

Brij: (interrupts) of course love, no it was mixture love & arranged.

Me:(shocked) Love, no way

Brij: Actually it's true. Aap toh jaanti hai ki kabhi kabhi ke Rajwado wali lifestyle kitni boring ho jaati hai. (Actually it's true. You do know that this Royal lifestyle can sometimes be very boring )

Me: Hum nahi mante, Dad, it's too much fun. (I disagree, Dad, it's too much fun)

Brij: (gives a light smile) aapke liye maybe par humare liye nahi. (turns serious)Humme bachpan ye rules, regulations, responsibility se bahut nafrat thee, haan kabhi kabhi I did feel privileged but mostly I hated it. Humare birthday har saal ek badi se party hoti thee, hum jo chahate the who humme milta tha par hum humesha se Maa Saheb aur Baba Saheb ka time chahate the. Woh dono hardly ghar par rahete thee and phir Baba Saheb chal basse toh hum Maa Saheb ka attention pane ke liye hum kuch bhi karte thee (gives a light smile again) aur aesa hi kuch humne aapne 24^th birthday kiya. Aap toh jaanti hai ki Giriraj aur hum bachpan ke dost hai and uss saal GR ki shaadi Shritijgard ki Rajkumari Vasundra ke saath tae kiya gaya tha aur pahele mulakat mei GR ko Vasundra se pyaar ho gaya tha. Shaadi mei do mahine baki the aur GR Vasundra se milne ke liye paagal ho rahe thee toh humne un dono ke milne ka plan banaya. Humne Vasundra ki best friend ko iss plan mei include kiya aur GR ke saath Shritijgard bhag gaye.

((gives a light smile)for you maybe but not for me. (Turns serious)Since childhood I've always hated these rules, regulations, responsibility that come with the royal life, yes, at times I do feel privileged but mostly I hate it. Every year their used to be a big party at my birthday, I was always given what I wanted but I always wanted I little of Mom & Dad's time. They were hardly at home and then Dad passed away that's why I did everything possible to get Mom's attention (gives a light smile again) and I did something like that on my 24^th birthday. You know that Giriraj and I have been childhood buddies, don't you and that year GR wedding was fixed with the Princess of Shritijgard, Princess Vasundra and GR fell in love with her in the first meeting. 2 months were left for the wedding and GR wanted to meet Vasundra so I made the plan to unite them. I also included Vasundra's best friend and ran off to Shritijgard along with GR)

Me: Really, toh DS ne kya kiya aur Dad issme aapki aur Mom ki love story kaha hai? (Really, then what did DS do and where is yours and Mom's love story in this)

Brij: Patience beta. Toh humne Vasundra aur GR to successfully milaya and jab hum make sure kar rahe the ki koi andar na aye toh guess hum kisse takraye. (Patience, dear, so I successfully united Vasundra and GR and when I was trying to make sure we don't get caught, guess whom I ran into)

Me: (excited) Mom se (Mom)

Brij: ji haan, aapki mom se. Komal aur humari peheli mulakat kuch ajeeb si thi, unhe laga ki hum servant hai issliye humme order pe order de ja rahi thi aur hum kisi ka order mante todina hai, humme bhi Komal par chilla diya and usske baad toh hum dono ke beech janghi chid gayi humari awaz sun kar GR aur Vasu bahar aye par tab tak hum ek dusre ke dusman bangaye the. Yes, hum dono ko kae baar cooperate karna pada un dono ke liye but we hated each other. Do mahine humare best friends ki shaadi ho gayi par unke saath humari bhi shaadi ho gayi.

(Yep, I ran into Komal. Mine and Komal's first meeting was quite strange, she thought I was a servant and she started giving an order after another and me being me shouted at Komal that I don't take orders and after that it was like a war had started between us, GR and Vasu came out of the room after hearing our loud voices but by that time we were sworn enemies. Yes, we had to cooperate with each other for GR & Vasu's sake but we hated each other. After 2 months, our best friends got married to each our but we also got married with them)

Me: (shocked) Par DS ne kaha tha ki aap dono ki shaadi Uday ke parents ki shaadi ke do saal baad hue hai. (but DS said you and mom got married 2 years after Uday's parents did)

Brij: Yes but technically incorrect. GR ko Vasu ko sindor lagana tha and sindoor ek GR ke side se tha aur ek Vasu ki side se. GR ke side ka sindoor mandap kar tha and Vasu ke side ka Komal ke paas. Komal steps se niche uteri sindor ki plate lekar, panditji mantra bol rahe the, GR Vasundra ki mang bharne hi wale the, Komal mandap par pahuchi, hum peeche turn to gaye, hum dono takraye and hindi films ka scene repeat hua.

(Yes but technically incorrect. GR had to apply sindoor to Vasu and the sindor came from both sides. GR's side sindor was in the mandap and Komal had Vasu's sides one. Komal rushed down the stairs with the plate of sindor, the pandit was chanting the mantras, GR was about to put sindor in Vasu's forehead, Komal reached the mandap, I turned around, we bumped into each other and a hindi film scene was repeated)

Me: Matlab? (Meaning?)

Brij: Komal giri, humne unke samhala, hum dono ek dusre ki aakho mei kho gaye aur sindor hum dono par gir gaya (Komal fell, I held her, we shared an eye lock and the sindoor fell on us). Komal broke the eye lock and we both got uncomfortable, I helped her stand and

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FLASHBACK [BRIJ POV]

Brij: Sorry

Komal: You should be, humare kapde kharab kar diye (you should be, you've spoiled my clothes)

Me: I said I am sorry, humne jaan bhuj kar kuch nahi kiya (I saw sindor in her forehead) (I said I am sorry, I didn't do it purposefully)

Komal: Okay, sorry Vasu, hum aapne kapade change kar ke aate hai (gives me a disgusted look) (okay, sorry Vasu, I'll just go and change my clothes)

Me: Komal, rukiye (Komal, wait)

Komal: Ab kya hua (what happened now)

Me: Aapki mang mei sindoor hai (there's sindor in your fore head)

Komal: Thanks (she wipes at the wrong spot) Is it still there?

Me: Yes (she tries again) hum madat karte (she shakes her head) (I'll help)

I took it as a yes and grabbed the handkerchief out of her hands and was about to use when it fell from my hand to the floor so I used my hand, I was really concentrating on wiping the thing off that I didn't notice that all eyes were on us.

Pandit: Rukiye Yuvraaj (wait, your highness)

Me: Kya hua pandit ji (what happened pandit ji)

Pandit: Yuvraaj, aap Rajkumari ka sindor nahi mita sakte, ab aap dono ki shaadi ho gaye hai. (Your Highness you can't rub off the sindoor from Rajkumari's forehead, you two are now married)

Me: Ye aap kay keh rahe hai pandit ji, ke sab ek accident ka (what are you saying pandit ji, this was an accident)

Pandit: Maaf kiyeYuvraaj par dono ki shaadi ho gaye hai, agar aap rumal istemal karte toh ye shaadi nahi mani jaati par' (Forgive me your highness but if you had used the handkerchief it wouldn't have been considered as a marriage but')

FLASHBACK ENDS

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Me: OMG'.phir kya hua? (OMG'.what happened then)

Komal: (comes into the room) Maa Saheb ne maha sabha se do saal ki muhulat mangi kyuki Maharaj ki shaadi unki 25^th birthday se pahele nahi ho sakti thee, ye Devgard ki parampara thee jo sirf beto par lago thee.

(mom asked for 2 years time from the maha sabha to get us officially wedded as it is Devgard's tradition that boys of the family cannot get married before their 25^th birthday)

Brij(looks at mom lovingly) Haan par aaj hum grateful hai ki maha sabha ne ye request accept kar liya (yes but today I am grateful that the maha sabha accepted this request)

Me: (puzzled) Kyu (why)

Brij: (holds mom's hand) Kyuki un do saalo mein humme Komal se pyaar ho gaya (because I fell in love with Komal in those 2 years)

Komal: (gives a light smile) Aur humme aapse (and so did I)

Mom and Dad share an eye lock and I smile, man...no matter how much they fight with each other their love surpasses it. Today, I heard their love story, saw their chemistry but most of all I saw their love for each other which screams at me that this is true love; they have battled themselves and others around them and still managed to keep their torch for each other alive. Is this what I feel for Akash? After 20 years of marriage will this remain between us? NO, what I felt for Akash is obsession not love but do I feel like this for anyone? I guess yes so please come back or else'

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