MANVEER - please come back (chap 10 - pg 18) - Page 7

Nice one.. Thanks for the PM..

loved the update! loved Manveer dance!😉

it was lovly part but i want uday to c0me back:(

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by d way..its amazing part..
very well written...
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awesome cont soon n plzzz pm me on d next part

hey guys...miss lazy is back (me)..to be honest i forgot about this>>> this week i was reading all the OS SS n FFz and commenting but after reading Yaddein prt5 i wanted to write again so i wrote this about 10 minutes ago so sorry if you guys don't find it interesting and now I'll shut up (sorry, i talk a lot)

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He made you and Komal promise as well, didn't he?

He made you and Komal promise as well, didn't he?

He made you and Komal promise as well, didn't he?

The words kept playing themselves in my head, I tried to shut them out but they just kept coming back. He made them promise but regarding what? I didn't know the hidden meaning of those words but they affected me in a way that I didn't understand they made me toss and turn the whole night. I even bothered J's sleep but this time it wasn't deliberate and felt a little amount of regret for the girl sleeping next to me. Finally, I fell asleep but my dreams weren't good enough I guess. I saw a water fountain, the same waterfall where I first wished to be a princess. This time I was standing there with a coin in my hand wishing for something, I couldn't hear my wish but right after I threw that coin and opened my eyes Uday was in front of me. I saw him and a huge smile crossed my face, he had a small smile on his face and his eyes were sad I wanted to ask him why but before I could he said: Princess, I love you very much so take care of yourself with that he faded and then the clouds started crying and so did I.

J: Jiji, Jiji, wake up

Me: (startled) What happened? Where's'.

J: I would like to ask you the same thing, what happened ' why are you crying and where's what??

Me: I think I saw a bad dream and nothing

J: (not convinced) Ok and please get ready soon or else DS will scold me because of you

I got ready as quickly as I could and left with J to the dining room, I asked her why she waited for me and she just replied by saying that it was DS's order. As soon as we reached there I started getting a sickening feeling, mom was crying, Maharaj ji was trying to calm her down and Mata ji was looking worried. As for Vijay and his mom they were sitting clueless on the table. I saw J's expression change, she was very much worried for mom ' maybe she isn't that bad.

J: Mom, what happened, why are you crying? (She doesn't reply)

Me: Mom please tell us

Komal: it's all because of you (all shocked) my son'my son has left me

Brij: Komal, what are saying?

Komal: Maharaj, we both consider Uday our son, don't we?

Brij: Yes, so

Komal: He called me in the morning to inform that he was leaving

DS: Leaving, where did he go

Komal: I don't know he called me and said that he is leaving the country and not coming back any time soon. I asked him where he was going and he told me that he doesn't know.

DS: What? I don't believe this, Uday is such a responsible boy, then what was the need for this. I honestly didn't expect this from him.

Komal: is this all because of her (points to me)

Me: But mom

Komal: shut up! Can you just shut up for once! I am sick and tired of you; ever since you came back you've always created a scene in this house but I've always supported you because you are my daughter but this time I am not forgiving you Manyata. J always thought that I love you more than her but the truth is I love uday more than any of you. He isn't my son but I've raised him up, you can ask Maharaj Grijraj that even when Vasundara was alive I took care of him, he called me mom up until he was 13 years old and I always called him my son and today because of my own daughter I've lost him so Manyata I am never going to forgive you for this. So you become a perfect Rajkumari (Princess) and marry that Akash of yours but don't expect me to give you blessings. Today you've actually broken my heart and yes before you start celebrating his departure I want to tell you something: uday had asked us to get you married to Akash and made us promise to marry you to him as well so you didn't just get your happiness like that, uday gave it to you.

With that she left and I turned around only to find that everyone around me had tears in their eyes. It wasn't Komal who spoke neither a Maharani (Queen) but a heartbroken mother. A heart that I broke unintentionally but still broke it. I was the next person to run to my room, I sat on the bed, held a cushion next to my heart and started crying. I cried till I fell asleep, I didn't eat for the next two days but this time no one came to pacify me.

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Nice short update
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Jyoti

Lovely chapter ...hope M will realise her love for UV and the sacrifice he made for her happiness

good going..i hope Uday comes back soon..well written update..please continue soon..😊