ManVeer Short Scenes - *Short Update - page 25**

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Troll Master Gogo!

@S.H.I.E.L.D.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Aww! I certainly hope you start feeling better! A virtual hug just to cheer you up! 🤗 (Hope it works - I give like massive ones in real life 😆).

Part 13: Intense! And it was amazing! 😍

Part 14: Er- Your angst-y writing skills shows up here pretty well. 😳 It would be heartbreaking to watch this scene if it ever does play out on TV. 😭

Part 15: Eh. Romeo and Juliet is becoming an overused idea, anyways. 😆

Great job!! 😃

TC.

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Anahita Bisht

@anahitabisht

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

loved it...👏...Manveer short scenes...at its best...👏...do write more...👏

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Ziva01

@Ziva01

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

You have done a fantastic good Mais ...love them👏👏❤️❤️

Thxs for the pm🤗

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salekh1

@salekh1

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Loveeed it

Awesomeee

loooveee it

Please contuinuie soon

Thank you for the PM😳

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Muskaan.C

@Muskaan.C

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Awesome work! I love how you can capture the essence of the characters within such a short piece of work. I loved the short pieces.

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

very interesting update..continue soon..😊

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Jyoti

@bl.drama.lover

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

firstly thnks 4 the PM gal!!!😉

secondly u did a wonderful job loved it!!!👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 5 stars 4 such a great writing it was filled with emotion yet made me feel those emotions i did cry a little especially on the part where M is left alone n she cant cry since no tears would fall really loved tht piece...😳

u r jus too good i could imagine most of this happenin with Manveer 😍 really hope u continue n keep me connected with ur short scenes would love to read more!!!😉

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Megha

@IndigoBlues

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

hope everything gets alright for you because your one shot was totally..intense. 😳

of course, i'm in a weird la-la mood right now 😆 perhaps in some earlier time i would have actually empathized with all the angst and darkness in your short scenes..

but woah girl, you said so much in so less! 👏

the 14th part: this is ACTUALLY what i'm expecting him to do in the show to get back at her. 😆 i mean on one hand i felt pleased because he got his cruel revenge, and on the other hand could totally feel maanyata's grief.

and my favourite line was the one about her smiling like an angel and looking like an enchantress...i think that's actually the way he sees her and loves her in the show. 😳😃

looking forward to your next update,

megz.😳

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
great job Mais!

Originally posted by: manveerlover
very nice loved it n thnkx for da pm:)

Originally posted by: anahitabisht
loved it...👏...Manveer short scenes...at its best...👏...do write more...👏

Originally posted by: pri01
You have done a fantastic good Mais ...love them❤️

Thxs for the pm🤗

Originally posted by: salekh1
Loveeed it
Awesomeee
loooveee it
Please contuinuie soon
Thank you for the PM😳

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi
very interesting update..continue soon..😊

Originally posted by: Muskaan.C
Awesome work! I love how you can capture the essence of the characters within such a short piece of work. I loved the short pieces.

Thank you everyone for your kind words!

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: tvlover92
Aww! I certainly hope you start feeling better! A virtual hug just to cheer you up! 🤗 (Hope it works - I give like massive ones in real life 😆).

Part 13: Intense! And it was amazing! 😍

Part 14: Er- Your angst-y writing skills shows up here pretty well. 😳 It would be heartbreaking to watch this scene if it ever does play out on TV. 😭

Part 15: Eh. Romeo and Juliet is becoming an overused idea, anyways. 😆

Great job!! 😃

TC.

Awww! Thank you so much! 😳 I really needed some hugs 😆 But I am feeling fine now, thanks for your concern!

Part 13 - snow is awesome! 😉

Part 14 - Would really love to see something like this dude. I have a feeling that they'd just NAIL it! Lolz, i just wanted to see her cry that's why I wrote it.

Part 15 - I had super big doubts regarding it! R&J is over-used I know but I wanted to give it a different feel. But rest assured, they don't end up together in my version. 😛 I'm sorry you didn't like it much 😊

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