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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

loved it. so soothing yet romantic!

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KaShfan7

@KaShfan7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Gosh that was so beautiful. So romantic.

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moksha89

@moksha89

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

reallly liked how you've set it up mais! felt lost in the story- wanted to read more 😳😆

can't wait for the next part! 😊

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Samridhi

@BinKuchKahe.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

That was such an amazing OS.

So heart-wrenching & tragic yet, so beautiful.

If only, it was in our control to decide who we would fall for :(

I, especially, loved it when a tear slid down her cheek..

Edited by prc_fan1 - 13 years ago

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

The words were ethereal and the setting was surreal. And the love that glimpsed through was divine.

Beautifully written!

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Poulomi Das

@_Poulomi_

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

...and a tear slid down her cheek...

and two Tsunamis down my cheek!!!

Excuse me people ...i need to cry a lil bit!!!

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(*ahem*)

Cant control my emotions...

Keep writing...

u are awesome!!

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: poulomi12
...and a tear slid down her cheek...

and two Tsunamis down my cheek!!!
Excuse me people ...i need to cry a lil bit!!!

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(*ahem*)
Cant control my emotions...
Keep writing...
u are awesome!!

OH MY GOD!! This has to be the SWEETEST comment I ever got for an OS!! Thank you thank you thank you thank you THANK YOU so MUCH!!! You have no idea how much it means to me...!!!! 😳 And no honey, YOU are awesome for writing such a sweet comment for me! 🤗

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: jazzerette
The words were ethereal and the setting was surreal. And the love that glimpsed through was divine.

Beautifully written!

After reading this comment, my OS seems like nothing 😳 Dear, your one line is written more beautifully than my entire OS 😕 Thank you so much for liking and commenting! And also for teaching me new words! Trust me, I didn't know these words before 😆 Thanks! 🤗

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: moksha89
reallly liked how you've set it up mais! felt lost in the story- wanted to read more 😳😆
can't wait for the next part! 😊

awww! Thank you so much! But yaar, it's just an OS. Even if I want to, I know I would never continue it. There are some things which are better left incomplete 😭 😆 Thanks once again! 😳

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Somia3
when will the next update be up

Originally posted by: minizz
Wow,It's a beautiful OS. very romantic yet so emotional.loved it a lot.Please do write more😊

Originally posted by: --ANGEL--
nice os...plz contiue if u can...

Originally posted by: Brklyn_gal
Thts a really cute one plz continue and Do pm me wen u do

Originally posted by: pri01
Wow awesome OS 👏❤️ beautifully written

Plzzz do write more

Originally posted by: salekh1
Haye.. so sweet and romantic
Pleasee continue soon

and Pm me if possible!!

Thank you😃

Thank you everyone for liking my work! But it's honestly a stand-alone one-shot means I won't be continuing it. So I am sorry if you are expecting anything more to be written on this scene 😆 But InshAllah I will write another OS when I am inspired! Thanks once again! 😳

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