ManVeer OS - If I Could... - Page 2

loved it. so soothing yet romantic!

reallly liked how you've set it up mais! felt lost in the story- wanted to read more 😳😆

That was such an amazing OS.

...and a tear slid down her cheek...

Originally posted by: poulomi12

...and a tear slid down her cheek...

and two Tsunamis down my cheek!!!

Excuse me people ...i need to cry a lil bit!!!

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(*ahem*)

Cant control my emotions...

Keep writing...

u are awesome!!

OH MY GOD!! This has to be the SWEETEST comment I ever got for an OS!! Thank you thank you thank you thank you THANK YOU so MUCH!!! You have no idea how much it means to me...!!!! 😳 And no honey, YOU are awesome for writing such a sweet comment for me! 🤗

Originally posted by: jazzerette

The words were ethereal and the setting was surreal. And the love that glimpsed through was divine.

Beautifully written!

After reading this comment, my OS seems like nothing 😳 Dear, your one line is written more beautifully than my entire OS 😕 Thank you so much for liking and commenting! And also for teaching me new words! Trust me, I didn't know these words before 😆 Thanks! 🤗

Originally posted by: moksha89

reallly liked how you've set it up mais! felt lost in the story- wanted to read more 😳😆

can't wait for the next part! 😊

awww! Thank you so much! But yaar, it's just an OS. Even if I want to, I know I would never continue it. There are some things which are better left incomplete 😭 😆 Thanks once again! 😳

Originally posted by: Somia3

when will the next update be up

Originally posted by: minizz

Wow,It's a beautiful OS. very romantic yet so emotional.loved it a lot.Please do write more😊

Originally posted by: --ANGEL--

nice os...plz contiue if u can...

Originally posted by: Brklyn_gal

Thts a really cute one plz continue and Do pm me wen u do

Originally posted by: pri01

Wow awesome OS 👏❤️ beautifully written

Plzzz do write more

Originally posted by: salekh1

Haye.. so sweet and romantic

Pleasee continue soon

and Pm me if possible!!

Thank you😃

Thank you everyone for liking my work! But it's honestly a stand-alone one-shot means I won't be continuing it. So I am sorry if you are expecting anything more to be written on this scene 😆 But InshAllah I will write another OS when I am inspired! Thanks once again! 😳