The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 - Page 90

Stupendous work Reeha... just finished reading all of the chapters of this wonderful FF... it truly ROCKS!!

Do update soon, I wanna see if Manyata still wants to be with him or not and what happens to Mina cause she would never give up her son to anyone

OMG!! AWESOME UPDATES REEHA!! Loved them:D

ohhh!!! no no no no no!!!! this is so sad and complicated😔 i wonder what will happen now!!! i guess mina will want to marry uv for her son though she will not love him or sumthng, manyata will support this..nd start moving away from uv and even uv will chose his son and thus mina than manyata...though he loves manyata becoz he loves his son more...and ultimately even mina will realize uv-manyata are meant to be together and its not right to seperate them and they will be excellent parents...we have already seen manyata-andy bonding...so mina will leave andy under their care...or get married to sum1 who will accept her nd andy randhwa or...this is wat i m hoping happens...though i know it is unlikely..that mina is lying!!!plz let andy not be uv's son !!

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Hey Reeha, I have read all the parts, and wanna let u know that ur fab writer and fantastic story teller, once ur done writing ur essays maybe u should think about writing a book lol and u can't blame us for asking u write the next part soon when u leave us hanging like this at such a crucial moment, now I always keep thinking about how will manyata react and how will their relationship develop, so yes update soon lol :)

btw i usually am good at guessing the storyline, but this was sooo unexpected for me, i didn't guess until they saw the kid lol then i'm like "oh he's his son"lol don't know if i should be happy or sad about it, but the way storyline developed after this bomb is sooo veryyy interesting and it has gotten very deeper and raises many questions, like M was ready to move on with UV after knowing about his affairs but can u move on with him now when there's living symbol of his past? your fairytale has gotten very real, let's see what happens, and again when r u updating lol good luck on ur essay, definitely more important :)

Hey Reeha, please continue with The Udayveer Chronicles. Haven't tried the TJC yet but will do too later on... and the forum will be opened as long as we keep it active. So plzz keep on updating.

Hope your essays go well and you update soon.

Uday is gonna pay for all his past distractions...all came back to haunt him when he's @ place with Manya...

hey a very shocking update😲...keep updating !

OMFG!!! THAT WAS AWESOME BUT I
HOPE THERE'S NO BARRIER BETWEEN MANVEER CAUSE OF MINA.

Re: Special Update on Page 114

I don't know if you all saw or read it, and if you haven't please give it a look and read over!

-Mais- was kind enough to give you guys a special treat- or teaser- while I was busy with my school work (One Essay down, One Presentation down: And one essay Left -_- )
So, our resident Hacker- Here is my take:

I loved it. Even when I knew that this Udayveer was not the Udayveer I had created with my words: They are still two sides of the same coin.

At the same time, I can see this transition you made: It's true. Udayveer has fallen for Manyata and didn't heed Aura's advice (not a fan of the name: Makes me think of ghosts! LOL!)

One thing that did surprise me was your articulate description of Sex: or post Sex. I didn't expect that from you- it was done gracefully and with extreme taste. I LOVED it!
You're a fantastic writer, and I've never understood why you haven't ever pursued to COMPLETE and FF.

Another thing I love about your writing is the Use of these : " "
I can't use quotation marks, I never get the flow right or the transitions. Hence why I have a script text:
[b] Name [/ b]: Dialogue

I personally, prefer your method- it's much more clean and succinct.

Overall: I rate it a 10/10. You've captured Uday at the perfect age and in the perfect mood.

<3

PS: Sorry about the late response L