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Posted: 13 years ago

#901

WOW!👏👏👏

What a great update Reeha! You write so magnificently.

I LOVE to read UVC's. This is the first time I'm posting in your thread. I had been a silent reader ever since you started UVC's.

They have been getting better every single time.

Do update your JNC's.😊

Love those as well. You portray the emotions of every character whether it'd be a minor or a major so well. I'm left amazed at how well you write in every update. You should really consider writing a book or something!😃

Can't wait to read the next part and see what happens between Mina,UV,& Manyata.

P.S. : Thank you Mais for writing the Special Update. You both are VERY talented.

P.S.S.: I realized that Andy was Uday's son when they first met at the airport especially when you said something about his smile.

Love,

Piggies😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#902

Originally posted by: sweetshab
OMG!!!
Wat a fantastic update...correction updates;)
u actually did it...
Manyat n UV were actually getting knw each other..manyata accepted his proposal just mins /hours back nd u threw a bomb at us..ahan it isnt inny minny bomb but missile..
Awww :O andy is his son o_O

fantabulous update dont keep us waiting
Did i mention i loveddd the updates :)
Cont soon

Thank you! LOL! Yes, it's kind of a missile isn't it? especially in Uday's perfectly planned out life.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#903

Originally posted by: Inkpen4877

Honestly? I didn't see that coming until the washroom bit- Mina being gone for a year after their break up? Yeah I just thought she was in an asylum because she tried to kill herself...Your idea was much better 😊

btw- I actually think the forum wouldn't close down even after DEK ended, I mean Shubh Vivah's forum is still up- and running- granted its pretty empty...but I think you just can't hit the Chaska meter anymore...

Asylum, hmm. Makes sense. You'll be getting more Mina's side of things later on. It's part of the bigger picture.

Thank you! I'll have to keep that in mind! That means I can post everything here ! Perfect, if worst comes to worst I could just keep a spare thread in the FF section for future references!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#904

Originally posted by: mahi0809
Stupendous work Reeha... just finished reading all of the chapters of this wonderful FF... it truly ROCKS!!

Do update soon, I wanna see if Manyata still wants to be with him or not and what happens to Mina cause she would never give up her son to anyone

LOL! Wow, that was some serious reading! All 23 Parts?!

Manyata and Uday are always the end game- I'd never make them separate. Trust me.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: DEK_girl
ohhh!!! no no no no no!!!! this is so sad and complicated😔 i wonder what will happen now!!! LOL! just like everyone else 😉i guess mina will want to marry uv for her son though she will not love him or sumthng No. Let's scratch that off the list completely. Mina HATES Uday. She'd rather cut off her right hand than marry Uday. Not even for Aditya. AND Let's not forget Giri. Giri makes things really interesting., manyata will support this..nd start moving away from uv and even uv will chose his son and thus mina than manyata Sort of. Manyata will always try to put Aditiya before herself when it comes to spending time with Uday....though he loves manyata becoz he loves his son more...and ultimately even mina will realize uv-manyata are meant to be together and its not right to seperate them and they will be excellent parents...we have already seen manyata-andy bonding...so mina will leave andy under their care...or get married to sum1 who will accept her nd andy randhwa or...this is wat i m hoping happens...though i know it is unlikely..that mina is lying!!!plz let andy not be uv's son !!
till now all parts were like a fairy tale...all happy,happy but now i m sad😔 Don't worry! Trust me, this is just a bump in the road! :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#906

Originally posted by: wendy25
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you are really really evil reeha. Now i am craving for next part even more and you are saying to not demand next part soon!

really felt so bad for manyata and mina. both deserves a good life!

will come back with my long comment, don't have much time right now

Whenever you have time is fine to comment! I understand life is busy! <3

I'll have the next part up next week FOR SURE! Because I only have one essay left 😃 Which is due this week :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#907

PLsss update update !!!!!😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#908

Originally posted by: robbir
PLsss update update !!!!!😆

I see what you did there! LOL!

Picking on my pet peeve! 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#909

Originally posted by: reeha...k

LOL! Wow, that was some serious reading! All 23 Parts?!

Manyata and Uday are always the end game- I'd never make them separate. Trust me.

Yup... when some good reading material hits me, I have no senses left for anything else and can't leave it till I've read it completely and that is what happened with your FF. Its truly worth every minute. Plus, can we have a guy from M's past like a best friend or someone totally into her (NOT AKASH) so Uday could also realize the extent of M's pain/ gravity when she sees a living being out of Uday's s-excapades. Would like to see an extremely bindaas/ full of life 15 or 16 year old Manyata with the magic of attracting guys without even trying

Uday should also feel how bad/ weird M would've felt thinking of his flings when he experiences those emotions.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: mahi0809

Yup... when some good reading material hits me, I have no senses left for anything else and can't leave it till I've read it completely and that is what happened with your FF. Its truly worth every minute. Plus, can we have a guy from M's past like a best friend or someone totally into her (NOT AKASH) so Uday could also realize the extent of M's pain/ gravity when she sees a living being out of Uday's s-excapades. Would like to see an extremely bindaas/ full of life 15 or 16 year old Manyata with the magic of attracting guys without even trying

Uday should also feel how bad/ weird M would've felt thinking of his flings when he experiences those emotions.

I hadn't considered that Mahi, it's a good idea, and possibly when there is less going on I'd love to do something like that. It would be interesting for sure! LOL!

Thank you for the compliment! I hope you'll be one of my regular critics who keeps me in line!😉