Two shot fiction :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Location: New Delhi

Venue - Hotel SV International

The executive suite has a small dining area. There is a big spread of Indian and Chinese food on the table. An open laptop lies on one side of the table. The food has just been touched, but the occupants have lost their appetite. Annapoorani and Karthik sit speechless with shock written all over their faces.

Annapoorani's shock slowly turns into dejection which after sometime changes into disgust and finally settles on a mix of anger and determination. Karthik does not display as many expressions as his mother, but his charming face has a tinge of sadness.

Location: Chennai

Venue - Hospital

Sathya helps Prakash to sit up comfortably on the bed as she places pillows to support his back. She places a food tray of on his lap and proceeds to feed him the soup, salad, daal and rice. After he has eaten, she removes the tray, wipes his mouth and face. Prakash looks at her gratefully as well as guiltily.

"Naan unnai ethanai kashtapadutharen, Sathya!"

"naarpatthu ettu thadavai", she replies curtly. Prakash looks hurt.

"Listen, we have both gone through this conversation umpteen number of times and shed buckets and buckets of tears. It is time to move on, now look positive and give me a smile like a good boy."

"Yes ma'am, whatever you say", he smiles slowly which turns into hearty laughter for both of them.

As she hands him over the day's newspaper, she queries, "Will you manage till I go grab some lunch from the hospital canteen?"

"Sure, get me a butterscotch ice cream when you are coming back."

"What! No way. If you catch cold and start coughing, what will happen to the stitches?"

"Please da.. please. En kannu illa, mooku illa, vaai illa...", Prakash pleads.

"pallu illa... naaku illa appadinu continue pannaadheenga, thaangalai. Ok, I will try."

"Seekiram poittu vaa", he starts reading the paper.

Sathya has her lunch. She is still not sure about the ice cream, nevertheless buys it and as an after thought buys a Bengali sweet.

She places the two packets on his bed, pulls out the icecream hands it over to him, all the time praying that it should not affect his health adversely. As she dips her hand into the other cover, Prakash gives her the icecream.

"This is for you, Sathya", she is captivated by his smile.

"Enakku kudukka ennaiye vaangittu vara sonneengala, arivu kozhundhu thaan ponga. Anyway naan mattum thaniya saapittaa enakku vaithu vali varum, so have this", she gives him his favourite sweet.

There is a twinkle in his eyes. As the two love birds enjoy their togetherness and the dessert, ofcourse, Sathya's cell phone rings. It is Annapoorani. Sathya switches on the speaker phone and places the mobile between them. Prakash listens.

"Hello Sathya, Eppadi ma irukke? How is Prakash? Operation mudinjudha?"

"Ellam nalla padiya mudinjudhu aunty."

"Romba santhosham, Sathya. Why did you not encash the cheque?"

Sathya briefly tells her what happened to the cheque and how Dharani had paid up the surgery bill. Anna poorani and Prakash are not surprised that Saroja had not parted with her money willingly.

Annapoorani - "Sathya, give me your email id, I am sending a message to you. I will be awaiting your reply. Here, Karthik wants to speak to you."

As Karthik's voice comes over the phone with a hello Sathya', Prakash's eyes suddenly turn ice cold. He disconnects the call and stares at Sathya who is puzzled to see his sudden anger.

She wants to tell Prakash that Karthik is only a friend, but before she can put her thoughts into words, he grabs her nearest arm and pulls her roughly towards him. As she begins to open her mouth to protest, he covers it with his lips. Butterscotch and rasamalai meet each other😉. Just then the door opens and in walks Vinodhini, who gets to witness their passionate intimacy with fire burning in her eyes and her stomach.


to be continued

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-KarthiK- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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En kannu illa, mooku illa, vaai illa...", Prakash pleads.

"pallu illa... naaku illa appadinu continue pannaadheenga, thaangalai

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Edited by -KarthiK- - 11 years ago
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Waitng for the next 😊
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super pa.. haha...
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super giri
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omg hahahaha I got upset ... not sure cause of vino entry or the thodarum :p

Giri love your style and if I am reading above properly ... I can see the naughtiness within you - cute naughtiness lah :p

Sighhh butterscotch ice cream... craving for it right now.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Karthik, Magesh, Visha, Sawmya and hopper ellarukkum, comments pottadhukku nanri.
Ithanai response oru iniya surprise for me😳😃.

The next part will be posted in a few minutes😊.
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Originally posted by: girivanam

Karthik, Magesh, Visha, Sawmya and hopper ellarukkum, comments pottadhukku nanri.

Ithanai response oru iniya surprise for me😳😃.

The next part will be posted in a few minutes😊.


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Originally posted by: girivanam

Karthik, Magesh, Visha, Sawmya and hopper ellarukkum, comments pottadhukku nanri.

Ithanai response oru iniya surprise for me😳😃.

The next part will be posted in a few minutes😊.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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...Continuation:

Vinodhini - "Aiyaiyo, enna idhu? Podhu idathulla konjam kooda vekkam illama...", she twists her face in disgust. Sathya is embarrassed. She pretends to arrange the medicines on the table.

Prakash - "Correction, chinna aniiyare!!! Idhu podhu idam illa, thani room. Ulla varum podhu kadhavai thattitu vara vendiyadhu unga manners. Andha podhu arivu kooda ungitta illai."

Vinodhini storms out of the room angrily to report to her sister. As Sathya fumbles around the room, Prakash grins looking at her flushed cheeks. Unable to concentrate, Sathya leaves the room. Prakash wipes out the smile from his face, takes her mobile phone and pushes Karthik's number.

One day later.

Venue: Devaraj's office

Devaraj walks into his office canteen and is met by Sathya. He had been surprised when Sathya had called earlier. Over a cup of coffee, they discuss briefly before Sujatha and Dharani join them. Sujatha has still not got over her failed engagement to Karthik.

"Vaa Sujatha, eppadi irukke?"

"mm.. irukken.. Prakash eppadi irukkaaru, Sathya?"

"He is recovering, thanks to mama and Dharani."

"Suja, tell me why did you call off the wedding?"

"Karthik doesn't want this wedding. That is why he gave me a new illness, I couldn't digest it."

Sathya - "How do you say he doesn't want the wedding?"

Sujatha -"Then why did he give me a thief- status'?

Sathya -"If that is his intention, why wait until a big ceremony? He could have backed off before the function, right? Could have prevented his own humiliation atleast, not to say anything about the expenses."

Sujatha thinks. Dharani and Devaraj exchange glances.

"Didn't he take you to the doctor? He could have called off the wedding even at that point. He did not do that instead wanted to help you if you had some medical problem. Doesn't that show he is genuinely concerned for your well being?"

Sujatha is still not able to make up her mind.

Sathya continues - "There is so much status difference between you and him; I am sorry to say this, but there are girls more beautiful and richer than you available for him. Can't you see he has fallen for you? The least you could have done is have a clear conversation and clarify all the issues."

Sujatha looks like she has a change of heart.

Sathya shows her a presentation from the laptop. As Sujatha , Devaraj and Dharani watch it, Sathya's mind rewinds to the previous evening.

Venue: Hospital, previous evening

There had been silence in the room since the afternoon incident. Prakash having failed to evoke any verbal response from Sathya, had promptly gone off to sleep. It was after seven, Ragini had come with her laptop.

"Anna, annapoorni aunty has sent a mail with some pictures to show the two of you."

The three see the pictures to find Saroja sabotaging the ceremony with the mobile phone.

Sathya - "Aiyo enna aniyayama irukku?"

Prakash declares "mmm...I knew about this already."

Sathya -"Eppadi?"

Prakash - "Remember the afternoon call from Annapoorani amma? Nee speaker phone la pottuta. She was asking for your email id and all. Just then I saw Vinodhini standing outside eaves dropping on this. I had no idea what Karthik's mother was talking about, but I was so sure about one thing - Vinodhini and Gayathri hacking your email id. Thillalangadi pombalainga. Adhan chinna drama potten, Vinodhiniyum padhari adichittu poittaa."

Sathya gets angry and spits the words- "Ennadhu, appo nadandhadhu ellam dramava?"

Prakash realizes his mistake - "Vinodhinikku nijam.. namakku drama... aiyo aiyo illai, Vinokku drama ... namakku ... aahh ammmaa..." he holds his chest in pain. Sister and wife panic.

As Ragini runs to the door to call the nurse and Sathya rushes to Prakash and gently massages his arms, he winks at her and whispers,

"Drama illadi..nijam... kidaiccha chance sariya use panna mudiyalai.. buy another rasamalai and icecream, I will prove it to you."

"Chey ippadiya seiveenga?Oru nimishathula enakku mooche ninnudum pola irundhadhu."

Ragini hears the word 'icecream' alone. She does not understand what her brother and sister in law found funny when she also asked for an icecream, because they laughed till tears ran down their cheeks.

Sathya -"Ragini! onnum illada, naan onakku icecream vaangi tharen. Neenga sollunga, appuram ennacchu?"

Prakash - "I spoke to Karthik after the two of you left the room. I gave him Ragini's id. Andha rendum bhoothangalum kaanju poi irukkum."

Sathya comes back to the present.

Sujatha is speechless. Then she cries, "I think I have taken a hasty decision. Yeah, naan avarukku chance kudukkave illai... Aiyo naan ippo enna pannuven?"

Just then an MMS comes and Sujatha cries, "Karthik ennai manikkave illai. See this picture."

Karthik is dancing with a foreign girl and they have garlands around their necks. Dharani swipes the screen, takes one look at the picture and then shows to Sathya and Devaraj. They all burst out laughing.

"Sujatha, picture ai ozhunga paaru. Annapoorani amma kooda kazhthula maalaiyoda aadittu irukkaanga, koodave 5, 6 thatha paati aadittu irukkaanga. This looks like some Hawaii theme party."

Sujatha once again looks at her phone and smiles. She looks up at her father and her cousins happily.

Dharani -"Karthikoda pesu, Sujatha."

Sujatha nods her head and dials Karthik's number😊.


Subham

Edited by girivanam - 11 years ago

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