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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res for ch-11. 😳
Unresed. 😃
Convo with Manohar broke Adarsh's heart. Thank god to Swa. 😳 Loved it how SwaDarsh were talking about each other's beliefs and principles to each other. 😃 Hahaa! Swa dozed off at the middle of their convo, not that it was her fault coz it was 1 AM!! 😆 😉 Adarsh thought that he would love Abhay teasing him with Swa's name and Swa also liked Asad teasing her with Adarsh's name. 😳 I loved that slowly both r realizing their feelings for each other. 😳 But oh god! Swa hurt herself by falling down the stairs! 😭 Try to update soon. 😳 And all the best for ur exam. 👍🏼 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.


glad to know you liked it...thanks for the comment...Swadarsh have come to care deeply for each other even without realizing their feelings...dont worry Swa is perfectly fine...Adarsh ko thoda daraana hai ...thats all😆😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sana_Jannat

poor adarsh,
nice bonding between swadarsh.
abhay-asad 👏
in last part poor swadheenta 🤗
thanks for PM.
Best of Luck 👍🏼


glad u liked it...n thanks...my exams were much than expected.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Idiotboxer

Wonderful update.

The tiff with Manohar broke his heart. Thank god for Swadheenta. Loved how both of them are slowly realizing their feelings.
Swadheenta fell down from the stairs
All the best for your exams.


Adarsh will always have Swa to mend his heart...they have realized their feelings...now comes the confession😉...Swa is perfectly fine
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Oh man... Swadheeta hurt herself..

But I loved the fact that you made Adarsh and Swadheenta discuss their views on such personal things. And, their realization

Waiting to see if their dynamics change now...


yes things will change soon...still working out the details of the confession...suggestions are welcome...i hope you enjoy reading
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi guys...here is a crucial chapter...henceforth the story will be very fast...hope you enjoy reading...waiting for your comments.

CHAPTER 12
His eyes looked red and puffy. Tiredness showed on his face. Adarsh looked at himself in the mirror. He had barely closed his eyes the previous night. The sudden realization of his feelings for Swadheenta had shaken him up. Once his heart made its state clear, his systematic mind took over. He knew now that his crush had developed into love. He wanted her as his life partner.

Next he analysed his options . He would have to break his engagement with Vanshika. The Bundelas weren't going to take it lightly and neither would his parents. After all it was a matter of reputation of both the families. His mom was already feeling betrayed by Abhay and he knew very well that another son doing the same would break her. No one had forced him to get engaged to Vanshika. It was his decision. He couldntjust go back on his word. That too when he had no idea what Swadheenta wanted. She obviously respected and liked him. But did she love him? Even earlier it was he who had followed her around. She had never reciprocatedhis interests. He couldnt just risk everything specially without knowing what she wanted.

So he had decided to go ahead with the marriage. He would get over Swadheenta as he had done years back. But in his heart he knew the situation had changed. Back then he had liked her, felt attracted to her but he wasn't in love with her . The past few days he had come to know her, her ideas, pronciples. He adored and respected her. But he would manage.

He would avoid her. It wasn't going to be that difficult.

Just then he saw Abhay come in.

"Everything ok bhai? " he asked seeing Adarsh looking worried.

Before Adarsh could reply their mother walked in to the room. Abhay gave her a tight hug and asked "Mom , aap kaisi ho? Naani kaisi hai? Unhone kya kaha? "

"Calm down Abhay. "Suhasini replied.

"I missed you guys. "She said and stared at her younger son for a second. Adarsh could sense a tension between them. He knew what they were thinking.He didn't want to feel this kind of tension between himself and his mother ever. She was his best friend. He hugged her.

"Naani theek hai mom? " he asked.

"Haan. She is fine. Tum logon ke baare mein poochh rahi thi. Maine vaada kiya hai ki tumhari shaadi ke baat hum sab saath mein wahaan jaayenge. "Suhasini replied.

Adarsh smiled. He would do anything to see his mother happy.

"By the way, tumhara phone kahaan hai? "She asked him.

"Here. "He said looking at his bedside table.

"Vanshika keh rahi thi switch off aa raha hai. " she said.

"Battery dead. "Adarsh said checking it. He hadn't charged it last night after talking to Swadheenta. He saw his mother and Abhay looking at him surprised.

"Anyway, Vanshika tumse milna chahti hai. Usne lunch ka plan banaaya hai aur tumse poochhne ke liye call kiya tha. Tumhari phone nahin lagi toh mujhe call kar diya. Maine kahaa tum free hoge. Agar koi problem hai toh use bata dena. "She said.

"No mom . I will meet her. " Adarsh muttered.

Breakfast was uneventful. Adarsh returned to his room and sat down to complete a book he had been reading. He had around three hours before picking up Vanshika for lunch.

At about noon his phone rang. It was the guy who had got the files he had wanted for Swadheenta. He took the files from the man and returned to his room. He had to get the files to Swadheenta. He wouldn't have to go. He could tell Abhay. Abhay was probably going to meet Simmi and Swadheenta could be at Simmi's.

He went into Abhay's room and saw him getting ready.

"Kahaan jaa rahe ho Abhay? Simmi se milne jaa rahe ho? "He asked.

"No bhai. Swadheenta ke ghar jaa raha hoon. Woh stairs se ghir gayi. "Abhay told him.

Adarsh was shocked. She was hurt!!!

"What happened to her Abhay? " he asked worried.

"Dont worry bhai. Stairs par paani tha. Swadheenta ne dekha nahin. Slip ho gayi. She has a sprained ankle and one or two bruises. Thats all. " Abhay explained.

"Main tere saath chalta hoon. " Adarsh said quickly and then added "waise bhi yeh file use dena hai. "

"Main de doonga bhai. Aapko Vanshika bhabhi ke saath baahar jaana tha na? " Abhay reminded.

Adarsh knew Abhay was right but he was feeling too restless. He had to meet her one last time, he convinced himself.

"Haan Abhay . Par mujhe Swadheenta se kuch discuss karna hai. I am coming with you. " he stammered.

Abhay didn't try to stop him. As they were leaving he phoned Vanshika and told her that he had an urgent meeting to attend. Before Adarsh could apologise she hung up on him. He decided to deal with it later.

When they reached Swadheenta's home a middle aged woman opened the door. Her maami. Asad who was standing behind his mother came forward and introduced them to her.

"Yeh Simmi di ke boyfriend hai, Abhay Sinha. Aur yeh freedom ke...friend aur Abhay bhai ke bro Adarsh bhai. " he said grinning.

She welcomed them and left to get some refreshments. The brothers followed Asad into Swadheenta's room and saw Simmi trying to feed her. Swadheenta was making faces while Simmi tried to get the food intoher mouth. The brothers couldn't help laughing. Swadheenta was surprised to see them.

"How are you doing? " Abhay asked her as he sat down by her while Adarsh stood by the door.

"Theek hoon. Ek chhota sa sprain hai aur inn logon ne mujhe officially patient bana diya hai. "She replied smiling.

Adarsh smiled. She was ok. Finally he calmed down. She looked at him and as always reddened.

"Adarsh andar aao na. Wahaan kyun khade ho." She said.

Abhay got up and went to Simmi while he sat down by her. Simmi was still trying to get her to eat when Asad brought in coffee.

"Abhay, do me a favour. Apni girlfriend ko le jaao. Subah se mujhe harass kar rahi hai. " Swadheenta joked.

"Swadheenta tum toh har din mujhe aise pamper karti ho. Tumhe aaj pamper karne do na. "Simmi said.

Just then they were joined by Radhika, Asad's girlfriend. She was a very bubbly and innocent person and soon everyone was laughing and talking.

A little later Swadheenta's Maami came in with a tray of food for her.

" maami, mera yeh khaane ka bilkul mood nahin hai. Mera kuch aur khaane ka Mann kar raha hai. " Swadheenta said.

"Kya chahiye tujhe Freedom? " Asad asked.

"Garam garam chaat. "Swadheenta said smiling making a puppy face.

He wanted to give her what she wanted. He would never refuse her anything.

"Toh chaat hi khaana. Main leke aata hoon. "Adarsh said.

Everyone looked at him surprised. Asad and Abhay smiled at him. Ignoring them he was about to leave when Swadheenta spoke again .

"Nahin Adarsh. Mujhe wahaan jaa kar chaat khaana hai. I need some fresh air. Please. "She said.

"Swadheenta. No. Aaraam karo. "Her maami said.

"Aunty don't worry. Hum gaadi mein jaayenge aur safely waapas aayenge. I will take care of her. "Adarsh told her.

Maami reluctantlyagreed and they all set out.

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Suhasini was exhausted. She was suffering from jet lag and the client she had just met was tedious. She longed to get home and have a cup of strong coffee. She was looking out on the streets. So much commotion. It was a Sunday and people, mostly youngsters, were enjoying the holiday. She smiled.

She came across long lines of street food counters frequented by youngsters. She hated it. It wasn't healthy. What was wrong with these kids?

She wondered where her sons were at the moment. Jai had been telling Jaya about some lunch party they were supposed to attend. Vanshika had told her or rather complained that Adarsh had cancelled the lunch as he had a meeting. She had wanted to tell Vanshika that it was better if such things remained between her and Adarsh. She wondered where Abhay was. She was worried about him. She had no idea what he was thinking.

She went back to looking out of the window. And then she saw it. Abhay's car. Parked by one of the counters. She asked the driver to stop and looked.

She saw him leaning on the car. The girl was with him. She was leaning onto him . His hands were around her waist. Suhasini was furious to say the least. She hadn't expected this. Hadn't she made herself clear? She had known Abhay wouldn't be able to let go of the girl easily. He was too emotional. But she had thought he would end it for sure. Looking at them it was clear he had know idea of breaking up with her.

She looked closer to see the rest of the group. A younger girl and guy were with them. She had no idea who they were. Someone was sitting on the bench in front of the counters too but the couple blocked her view.

A minute or two later the guy and the girl went towards the counter to get something and Suhasini got to see the person sitting on the bench. Adarsh. A woman was sitting next to him too but Suhasini couldnt see her. What was Adarsh doing here? He had told Vanshika he had a meeting and here he was checking out street food with his brother and his girlfriend. Wow. She wondered who the woman was. Surely not Vanshika.

The young woman was having some difficultygetting up and Adarsh and Simmi seemed to help her. They were making her sit down and as the girl tucked her loose hair behind her ear Suhasini saw her face. She was dumbfounded. This was probably a nightmare.

It couldnt be Swadheenta.

"Driver , ghar chalo. Fast. "She said quietly.

What was happening? What was Adarsh doing with Swadheenta?

She still remembered her son running behind the girl like a lovestruck teenager. Fortunately before things could go any further a small misunderstanding had ended things. She knew Swadheenta was a brilliant lawyer. She was often compared to Suhasini herself and Suhasini knew she deserved it. But she didnt want the girl back in Adarsh' s life right now when he was getting married.

Were they in love? Wouldn't Adarsh tell her if so? But Abhay hadn't. Why else would he lie to Vanshika?

Calm down, she told herself.

She would handle everything. But first she had to get home.

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My university exams have been announced out of the blue...will try to update asap.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow! Boys r roaming around with GF & mom saw them,what a luck !
1st it was Poor adarsh now poor couples Swadarsh Abhay-simmi
Edited by Sana_Jannat - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow
Fate has something else in store for adarsh n swa
Now suh has seen them
Twist n turns r on the way i think
Cont soon n all d best fr ur exams
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Posted: 8 years ago
wonderful update, loved it.
Adarsh got so anxious knowing about swadheenta's fall. But even after rrealization he wants to marry Vanshika. Now that Mommy dear knows about them, things are going to get more interesting hopefully.
All the best for ur exams
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Posted: 8 years ago
Poor Adarsh had up his mind on forgetting her but one mention of her name he just can't ignore or forget. He is so deeply in love.

Omg Suha saw them together wonder what she will do next

Best of luck for your exams
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi guys...hope you enjoy reading...don't know when I will update again...but most probably I will update 2 chapters before xmas...provided by exams dont turn out bad.

CHAPTER 13
Suhasini stormed into her house. She had noticed that Manohar's car wasn't outside. She was glad he wasn't home at the moment. She didn't want to be bothered.

"Mumma" she heard Jaya call.

"Mumma aaj shaam Vanshika ke yahaan jo gifts le jaana tha woh maine decide kar liya hai. Aap bas dekh leejiye. "She said.

"Jaya, can't you handle such things. " she said raising her voice and then seeing Jaya' s sad face she said "I am sorry. I have a really bad headache. "

"Mumma aap aaram keejiye. Main aapke liye coffee bejti hoon. " Jaya said.

Suhasini smiled " Jaya, I am lucky to have you. Main bas yeh chahti hoon ki iss Adarsh aur Abhay ki patniyon se bhi yeh baat kabhi keh sakoon. Bas yahin chahti hoon main. "

Jaya looked at her surprised. Something was up with her. But before she could ask Suhasini asked " Tumne toh tayaaariyaan kar liya par jiske liye jaa rahe hain woh kahaan hai? "

Jayashook her head.

"Apne donon devar ko phone karo aur jaldi ghar aa jaanejaane ko kaho." Suhasini told her as she left the room.

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" Mujhe aur ek plate chahiye. " Swadheenta said trying to stand.

Adarsh stopped her.

"Come on Swadheenta. Ek din ke liye hum sab par dependent hone mein kya problem hai. I will get it for you. " Adarsh said smiling talking her plate from her .

Swadheenta blushed as she saw Asad grinning from ear to ear. Just then Adarsh's phone rang. Adarsh tried to balance the plates in his hand. Seeing this Abhay took the phone from his pocket.

"Bhabhi ka phone hai. " Abhay said.

"Speaker on kar de Chottu. " Adarsh said.

" Accha hua tum donon saath ho. " Jaya said as Abhay spoke to her "Tum donon jaldi ghar aa jaana. Mumma poochh rahi hai aur woh bahot buri mood mein hai. Adarsh tumhe toh baahar jaana hi nahin chahiye tha. Aaj tumhari Vanshika ke ghar jaana hai na humein. "

"Yes Bhabhi. "Abhay muttered looking at his brother who was clearly uncomfortable with the reference.

Adarsh turned to see Swadheenta who looked confused.

"Vanshika kaun hai? " She asked.

"Tumhe nahin pata? Adarsh bhaiyya ki fiancee hai Vanshika. " Simmi told her naively.

Swadheenta was shocked beyond words. Asad was looking at her equally shocked. Adarsh was engaged and he hadn't even told her.

"Tumne kabhi kuch kaha nahin iss baare mein. " she asked Adarsh trying to remain calm and indifferent.

Adarsh looked at her not knowing how to react. She looked a little pale. For the first time in his life he felt unable to look someone in the eye.

"It never came up. " he said looking away.

Abhay was looking at him and Swadheenta worried. A minute or two of awkward silence followed. Simmi and Radhika unaware of the situation had returned with another plate of chaat.

"Swadheenta kya hua? "Adarsh heard Simmi ask her and looked in her direction.

She looked extremely pale and her eyes were filled with tears. Adarsh felt his heart break.

" woh painkillers ka asar khatam ho gaya hai shaayad. Mujhe bahut dard ho raha hai. I wanna go home. " she replied.

"Chalo. Hum tumhe ghar chhod dete hain. " Abhay said.

"No Abhay. Main Simmi ki car mein chali jaaongi. Tum logon ko ghar jaana chahiye. Your mom is waiting. " Swadheenta said sternly.

"Abhay bhai main apne Freedom ka khayal rakh sakta hoon. " asad said in a matching tone as he and Simmi helped Swadheenta into the car.

The trip back home was very difficult for Swadheenta. She was finding it hard to control herself. Simmi and Radhika were engrossed in talking about some new designer. So she didnt have to pretend much. As they reached home she convinced Simmi to return home stating that she herself might fall sick. Radhika too left with her.

Swadheenta entered the house with Asad. Her maami was worried seeingher condition. Asad told her that it was because of the medicines. They walked silently to Maami' s room which Swadheenta was occupying for the day.

"Asad tu jaa. I am alright. Mujhe akela chhod do." She said looking out of the window.

"No. Tu theek nahin hai Freedom. Get it out. "Asad said holding her by the shoulder ammaking her face him.

"I love him Asad. I want him. And he belongs to another woman. " she said and then broke down in Asad's arm.

He held her silently as she cried.

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Abhay looked at his brother from time to time. He had never seen him so worried. Adarsh was a very straightforward and truthful man and Abhay knew that the look of betrayal on Swadheenta's face was killing him. He would have to talk to his brother but not at the moment. Adarsh first needed to get a hold on himself.

In the past few days Abhay had learned that things could go terribly wrong in a moment. He had a gut feeling that Adarsh was going to get himself in a situation. He had thought of convincing Adarsh to reconsider his decision to marry Vanshika or atleast to tell Swadheenta about his engagement . But before he could do anything that call had ruined things . But maybe it was destiny. Maybe his brother would never have said anything otherwise

"Thank god, tum log aa gaye. Abhay, yeh gifts wrap karne mein meri help kar doge?" Jaya said as they entered the house.

Adarsh quietly walked ahead.

"Adarsh are you ok ?" Jaya asked worried.

"Headache. "Adarsh said and left the room.

"Mom aur Adarsh donon ko headache? Must be the stresstress. "Jaya said as she and Abhay set to work.

"Mom ko kya hua?" Abhay asked her.

"Headache. Bahot pareshan lag rahi thi. Mood bhi kharaab hai. I just hope ki donon theek ho jaaye" Jaya told him.

"Me too. "Abhay said thoughfully.

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Suhasini Sinha stood in her balcony. She loved the place. She felt relaxed and in control there. It was here she always came when somethingwas bothering her. Today too it helped.

She had never interfered in her sons' life. It had never been required before. But today Abhay had made it necessary. She wasn't going to let his foolishness spoil his life.

With Abhay she had time to deal. She was worried about Adarsh. She wasn't sure he was seeing Swadheenta. She was judging what she had seen considering her son's infatuation with Swadheenta years ago . But even then Adarsh hadn't acted on it. He hadn't even kept in touch with the girl. Maybe they were friends. After all both of them wanted to help the oppressed. Maybe she was overreacting.

But if she was right, then it meant serious trouble. The Bundelas weren't going to let go of it easily. After all it was Vanshika'sVanshika' s future. And Adarsh was a man of determination. He wouldn't do what he felt was wrong. In that case she would have to do something.

She had to find out soon.

And experience told her she wouldn't have to wait long. That evening was going to tell her a lot of things.

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