Swadarsh SS : Falling in love Chapter 16 page 30 24th Jan

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Hi guys. ..I am writing a new story. ..it is not related to the shows storyline at all...its just a idea i got. ...it is lighthearted. ...I haven't thought out the whole story unlike my other SS ...so I have no idea what it will be like. ..hope you like it. ..plz buddy me for pms. ..n all suggestions are welcome.

PROLOGUE

"Yes sir. Mr Abhay Sinha ne ek table reserve kiya hai. " The receptionist told Adarsh and then called one of the staff .

"Sir please come with me. "The attendant said leading the way and added " the young lady who was supposed to join you arrived a few minutes earlier. "

Great, Adarsh thought to himself. Both he and the 'friend ' who was going to help Abhay had reached on time and his dear little brother had left the station only a few minutes ago. He would have to meet the woman himself. The attendant pointed to the table. With a quick thank you to him Adarsh walked to the table.

She was seated at the table but he couldn't see her face. She was reading something seriously and her hair pouring over her face hid it. It reminded him of someone but he quickly brushed away the thought.

"Hi." He said standing a few feet away from her.

She looked up . He couldn't believe his eyes. Swadheenta Ramakrishnan? ?

"Hi Adarsh. I hope you remember me. " she said and extended her hand.

"Of course Swadheenta. "he said shaking hands with her.

I can never forget you, he thought as they sat down opposite each other.

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Guys did you like it? Should I go on?

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting.. Waiting for next ..
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Ya seems really interesting waiting eagerly for the next update dear
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Hi guys. ..hope you like this story. ..thanks for commenting. ..no Swadarsh here. ...next update will have lots of Swadarsh to compensate

CHAPTER 1

Suhasini Sinha was waiting for her family at the table. She was just back from office after a tedious day . She would have liked to take some rest but it was time for dinner and it was a practice that the whole family had dinner together.And then she had to make some announcements. She smiled looking at the family photo on the wall . This was the best part of her life. She took more pride in being a good mother and wife than in her success as a lawyer. She had brought her sons really well despite being busy in her professional life. Her friends always praised her for that.

Her sons were all very different individuals. Jaidev, the eldest and most obedient, but short tempered and reserved. He had always liked being in his father's shadow. Adarsh, her middle son was the most mature and responsible of the three. He loved his family and was her peacekeeper. He had always been her friend. True to his name, he was a man of ideals. His father thought he wouldn't be able to survive in the real world but she was sure he could hold his own. He was dedicated to helping people and she felt proud every time she heard someone praise him. Then there was her youngest and favourite son Abhay. He had always been the baby boy of the family . He was brave and loyal but a bit too romantic at heart. He was the life of the family

It wasn't just her sons ' achievements she was proud of. Despite everything they had never disappointed her. They trusted her decisions. Four years ago she had brought home her eldest bahu Jaya. Jaya was her choice. Perfect in every aspect. For Adarsh too she had found the perfect woman - Vanshika Bundela. A girl of royal lineage. They were going to be married soon. She was positive she would find as good a bride for Abhay too.

Her thoughts were interrupted when Manohar and Jai came down to dinner. They were followed by Adarsh and Abhay. Jaya started serving. Adarsh took a seat near Jai and Jaya while Abhay sat down next to her.

Dinner was uneventful as usual. As everyone was about to leave the table Suhasini said

"Mujhe aap sab se kuch baat karni hai . "

Everyone looked surprised.

" Pehli baat, Vanshika ka bhai ek do hafte mein aa raha hai. Vanshika ke parents jaanna chaahte hai if the wedding can be held next month. Date Yash ke aate hi fix karenge. Is that ok? "Suhasini asked.

Adarsh looked at her not sure what to say. This happened every time something related to the wedding came up. It wasn't that he was unhappy about it but he wasn't excited either . He just felt nothing. He saw Abhay look at him with a warning look
His little brother felt it wasn't good for him to marry Vanshika. According to him Adarsh was giving in to a marriage of convenience and would end up being unhappy. But according to Adarsh himself this was what most arranged marriages were like. Anyway this was this was the best for everyone.

Vanshika was his mom's choice. Sophisticated and suitable for the family. Vanshika was his schoolmate. They had got engaged a few months ago. Vanshika ' s brother Yash was an army man and was posted at Pune. They had been waiting for him to come home for the holidays to conduct the wedding.

"Ab Adarsh ki shaadi honewali hai toh Abhay ki baari hai next " Jaya said smiling at her mother in law.

"Exactly. Abhay ke liye ek accha rishta aaya hai. Kal ladki ki parents se main aur Jaya ek function mein mile the. " Suhasini said and continued to tell Manohar about the family.

Adarsh looked at Abhay . He intended to tease Abhay but he saw that Abhay looked worried. Before he could try to get Abhay ' s attention his mom continued

" Ek aur baat karni hai mujhe aap logon se. Yeh hamari family se related nahin hai. Its about a case. Ek builder kuch gareeb kisanon ke sameen chheene ki koshish kar raha hai. Illegal kaam kar raha hai. Woh kisaan mere paas aaye the apni case ki baat karne. Main toh busy hoon ek do zaroori case mein. Isliye main unhe mana karne ki soch rahi thi par woh aadmi seede mere office aaya aur indirectly dhamki de gaya ki case lena mere liye theek nahin hoga. So I have decided not to let go of this easily. Main un kisaanon ki case le rahi hoon. "

"Mom woh kaun hai? How dare he threaten you! " Adarsh asked angrily.

" As such threaten nahin kiya but indirectly keh gaya Kaur ki woh hi jeetega. I hate him. You all probably know him. Naveen Ahuja. " Suhasini said.

Adarsh saw AAbhay tensed and shocked as his mother took the name. He looked very worried.
Adarsh decided to talk to him later.

Soon they all left the table. Adarsh had just finished working on a presentation when Jaidev came to him asking for some file. They were talking when Abhay entered the room. He quickly closed the door.

"Chottu tu soya nahin? " Jai asked looking at the clock.

" Accha hua aap donon yahaan ho. Kuch zaroori baat karni hai mujhe aapse. " Abhay said looking worried.

" Dekha tha maine tujhe dinner ke waqt. Main tumse milne aa raha tha. " Adarsh said.

" Main shaadi nahin kar sakta hoon. " Abhay declared.

" Everyone says that. " Jai said.

" No. Meri puri baat suniye na Bhai. Main mom ki pasand ki ladki se shaadi nahin kar sakta kyunki I love someone. " Abhay said

The brothers looked at him surprised.

" Kab se chal raha hai yeh sab? " Adarsh asked him.

" Around 6 months. "Abhay said.

" Aur kisi ko pata bhi nahin chala? Tu mom ko bata de. " Adarsh told him .

While his mom wasn't exactly a fan of love marriages she would listen to what Abhay had to say at least .

" There is more. Mom kabhi nahin maanegi. " Abhay said .

" Kyun?ladki hai kaun " Adarsh asked remembering Abhay ' s reaction at the table.

"Simmi Ahuja. " Abhay replied.

Then it struck Adarsh. He looked at Jaidev who looked just as much shocked.

" Naveen Ahuja ki beti?" Jai asked.

Abhay nodded.

" Tu pagal hai Kya Chottu? Uss aadmi ke baare mein nahin suna hai tu ne? Aaj ki baat nahin hoti toh bhi mom iss rishte ke liye kabhi nahin maanti. Poori Delhi mein ek wohi mili tujhe? " Jai asked angrily.

" Bhai I know everything. I love Simmi not her Papa. I know shaadi do families ko involve karta hai par main Simmi se bahot pyaar karta hoon. " Abhay said.

" Go tell mom that. " Jai said.

" Tell me about Simmi. " Adarsh said seeing his Chottu sad.

Abhay smiled and said " Woh bhi problem hai bhai. Simmi is a sweet person but short tempered, stubborn aur childish hai. She dropped out of college last year kyunki use course pasand nahin aaya. Mom ki type ki bilkul nahin hai Simmi. "

Jai and Adarsh looked at each other .

"Chottu, iss rishte ka koi future nahin hai. Mom kabhi nahin maanegi. Accha hoga agar tu yeh sab bhool jaa. " Adarsh said.

" No way bhai. I am not leaving Simmi. Uski dil kamzor hai. She won't be able to bear it . I can't kill her. Aise condition nahin hota toh bhi use chhod kar kisi aur ladki se shaadi nahin karoonga. That will be unfair to the girl I marry. Main uss se pyaar nahin kar paaonga. Uski life bina kisi galti ki barbaad ho jayegi. "Abhay said.

Adarsh noticed Jaidev looking hurt at Abhay ' s words. Before he could ask anything Jai left. Abhay too left looking sad.
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Adarsh couldn't stop worrying about Abhay. He had expected his brother's help and they had disappointed him. Adarsh couldn't see him miserable. He had to do something. Abhay seemed determined . He had to ensure that Abhay wouldn't do anything that could hurt the family. He had to find a solution.

The next morning he walked into Abhay ' s bedroom. Abhay was getting ready.

" Chottu. Sorry yaar. Tu pareshan mat hona. We will find a way to convince mom. " Adarsh said.

" I knew you will help me bhai. Mujhe aapko pehle hi bata dena chahiye tha . I love mom but I love Simmi too. Aur aise haalat mein main use hurt nahin karoonga. Waise koi aur bhi mera help kar rahi hai. " Abhay said smiling.

" Kaun? " Adarsh asked curiously.

" Simmi ki friend hai. Bachpan ki saheli. Best friend. Woh bilkul aap jaisi hai. You will make a good couple. " Abhay told him.

Adarsh laughed and said " Kahin Teri problem solve karte karte main usi problem mein pad toh nahin jaaonga na? "

Before Abhay could reply his phone rang.

" Bhai, main chalta hoon. Zaroori kaam hai. I am meeting her for lunch. Aap bhi aa jaana. Jagah main message kar doonga. " Abhay sai in a hurry as he left.

And so a few hours later Adarsh stood a few feet away from the friend Abhay wanted him to meet. Swadheenta Ramakrishnan.

" Chottu ki time sach mein karaab hai. Use laga use help milegi mom ko manaane mein. I am not so sure about that. " Adarsh thought as he sat down opposite her.

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Next part will have lots of Swadarsh. Keep reading.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I like where the story is going... and needless to say, Adarsh predicted his future for himself 😆. he will put himself in the same problem that Abhay is in... although Suhasini may not have as much problem with Swadheenta as she will with Simmi 😉.

So, is Swa in lawyer in this story? That will make things more interesting 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res for part 1.😳
Unresed.😃
Prologue was very interesting.😉
Are waah!! I loved ch-1.😃 Oh so Simmi's childhood friend is our Swa.😳 Kahi Adarsh Abhay ki help karte waqt khud same problem mein na par jaye. (I wont mind it coz it will make my SwAdarsh together.)😆 So Adarsh is already engaged to Vanshikha!😕😭 Accha, do SwAdarsh know each other from past coz in the prologue, there was a line by Swa asking Adarsh that if he remembered her?😕 And is Swa a layer here too??😳 I'm loving the storyline.😉 Update soon and thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago
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Thanks for the update dear really enjoyed it will wait eagerly for your next update dear pls update soon dear
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Hmm.. Luks lyk these two have an interesting past. Great update 👍🏼
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👏 last line 😆 both r going to face problem but abhay-simmi will face more ,good to know Simmi-Swa's friendship 👍🏼 ..is swa lawyer in this story !
Thanks for PM..
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Thanx for pm.loving ths different take n adarsh n abhay love story gov together...

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