~ Building Life ~ (A Swadarsh FF) ~ Note, Page 76

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

sb1234

@sb1234

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#481

Such a beautiful chapter .. I'm glad that all the misunderstandings have finished :)

Simply loved the conversation between Asad and Adarsh - spoke like a true loving brother .. And the one between Adarsh and Swadheenta was heart touching :)

Looking forward to the next part

Quote

Sarcy

@Sarcy

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#482

Such a beautiful and heart-warming update, this was!

Asad and Adarsh's heart-to-heart was a delight to read and so was the entire conversation between SwaDarsh. You have handled the dialogues very beautifully, keeping in mind both of their personalities. Not an easy feat, Pri!

Looking forward to the 3-day South Indian wedding. 😆

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

chemgirl

@chemgirl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#483

Hi dear...read the whole FF today and I really don't know how to comment for 34 parts. ...lol

I just love it. ...the characters are all so sensible. ...loved Swadarsh's confession. ...their first meeting. ...first fight. ...first misunderstanding. ...a truly realistic story. ..and a beautiful one. ..I have read almost all parts twice. ...Subah se phone dekhkar smile kar rahi hoon

Loved the part where all the Sinhas ended up at the hospital at the same time and all the bonding.

Ahuja is scary. ..poor Simmi. ..She will be shattered completely. ..I hope Abhay and the others can manage her.

Simmi ke wajah se toofaan aa gaya. ..but it isn't that bad. ..Swadarsh with their secret helpers will handle everything ...hope everything is ok soon.

I just wish Abhay tells Simmi the truth. ..but will she accept it? I can't help feel sorry for her. ..as Jaya said she feels alienated.

Please update soon. Please. Please.

Show wala Abhay toh mujhe bahut bahut pasand he hi but is Abhay se mujhe pyaar ho gaya hai 😳

Quote

olsen_124

@olsen_124

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#484

Waiting for the update priti...😊😊

Quote

Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#485

Originally posted by: olsen_124
Waiting for the update priti...😊😊

Hi Bonny! Last week was a stressful week work wise. I will try and update it this week for sure. 😊

Quote

Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: Dumpling
Adarsh so nicely explained his reactions in that situation n asad too made him.understand what freedom meant to him.nicely written.

Thanks. They are all super smart, aren't they 😆

Quote

Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: Sana_Jannat
its wonderful priti 👏
Adarsh-Asad convo 👍🏼 😆 then SwAdarsh convo ,clearing confusion is one of the things i liked here.

Thanks Sana. I am this kind of person. Don't like misunderstandings, and if I am at fault, i apologize before anyone and everyone. So, my characters are also like that (at-least most of them). 😃

Quote

Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: Stylikson
Res
Unres..

Sorry sorry for such a late reply..😭
This part was light and amazing.. Thank God Swadheenta and Adarsh cleared out there differences.. 😊
And Asad was amazing.. His love for her sister..👏
Update soon ❤️

Thank you Megs. Yes. I have said this before. I cannot write more than 2 or 3 serious updates. I feel the need to write something light in-between on my own... 😆

I am glad you enjoyed it.

Quote

Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#489

Originally posted by: kennashreign
Lovely update!! I loved the conversation between Asad and Adarsh. It was believable. I also like the part where Swadheenta talks about acceptance of the families.
Looking forward to the next update.

Cheers
Kennashreign

Thank you.

I truly missed not seeing Asad and Adarsh bond in the show. Swa was so important to the both of them. They should have been closer. I hope I can make that happen in my story 😳

About the families, it was one of our common complaints that while Swa accepted everyone as they are in Adarsh's house, he did not accept maamu and maami. The circumstances were different ofcourse, but it would be nice if he had made that effort to understand them a bit more. It will happen in my story 😃

Quote

Soapoperasrfun

@Soapoperasrfun

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#490

Originally posted by: olsen_124
Oh such a lovely update.I loved it completely.

Loved Asad and Adarsh' convo.Such a mature one and Adarsh and Swadheenta's conversation made me go completely emotional.

Fantastic update Priti.
Thanx for PM
Update Soon.

Thanks Bonny.

Asad is a bit impulsive, and he understands that Adarsh, Abhay etc are much older and much more accomplished than him. He hence goes to them for advise normally. But he knew Freedom was hurt, and no matter who hurts her, he is her brother and has to protect her. I hence wanted to write that bit where Asad talks to Adarsh and asks him to take good care of his sister 😳

I hope it made you happy emotional. 😊

Quote

1 ... 47 48 49 50 51 ... 54

~ Building Life ~ (A Swadarsh FF) ~ Note, Page 76 - Page 49

Related Topics

Explore Topics