New FF - Hum tum - pt2.p2 'soham entry=bad boy'

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zohra

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hum Tum

Hi guys , i want to begin a FF (Fan Fiction) on Kalyani (Anisha kapoor) n soham (bhuvnesh) .
So please tell me who will participate??
Like that i will know how many members there are for my FF!!

well i will wait for your answer guys !!😳😳

this is a video which i speacially make for soham and kaliyani
PLS SEE IT

http://tinypic.com/player.php?v=1ytv29&s=4

Kaliyani: rich girl, she leaves with father, she is engaged to armaan, she lives in india. She is 21 years old

Soham:rich guy, leaves in london, he is a big flirt, he is with a new girl everyday, sometimes he spend all the night of the house and the most important thing, he can't speak hindi, he is 22 years olds 10 month older than kaliyani

I will add the rest soon..........

part1=page2
part2=page2

Edited by jalak-ji - 16 years ago

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zohra

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Posted: 17 years ago

So there is no fanzz of dahej ??😭😭😭
i am sad

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fitemoon

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Posted: 17 years ago

i will also participate
plz begin your ff

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Juhi

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Posted: 17 years ago

aww..don't be sad sweets! I'll definetly participate, can't wait to read your FF! 😳

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zohra

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Posted: 17 years ago

hey guyz thnx a lot for support me
i will begin my FF tomorrow !!😳
but it will be about 10 to 20 parts!!

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kashish

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Posted: 17 years ago

i am very excited to read it, continue soon

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Amna

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Posted: 17 years ago

i wil participate......😛luvin dahej

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zohra

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Posted: 17 years ago

thnx a lot guys for ur participation, i know u wait a lot, but ab intezar ki gariyan khatam ho chuki hai, so here comes part 1

pls guys see my entry post first I add a pic and a video (for video u have to click on the link, see it and leave ur compliments)

I add some comments in red, hope u will enjoy

PART 1

It's 7 o'clock of the night, the wind is very intense. A girl is in a park, talking with a boy, she is criying😭😕

girl😭:mein tumhe 3 saal se jaanti houn, tum mujhe dokha doge, mein kabhi soch bhi nahi sakti thi, mein tum per khud se zyada yakeen karti thi, yahan tak ke baghwan bhi zameen per mujhe akar kehte ke tum mere ilawa bhi kisi se pyar karte ho mein kabhi nahi manti, lekin apni ankhon se dekhne ke baad, mujhe is baat per yakeen kerna par raha hai ke tum kisi aur se pyar karte ho

man:mein sirf tumse pyar karta houn

girl:agar armaan tum mujhse pyar karte hote to us hotel ke room mein tum us ladki ke saath woh sab kuch na kar rahe hote

armaan:c'mon kaliyani be practical, kabhi kabhi aisa karne se insan ka carriere ban jaata hai, and see us din ki waajah se itna baara project mujhe milgaya

kaliyani:tumhe apne carriere ki pari huwi hai, meri nahi, mujhe nahi pata tha ke tum apne carriere ke liye koi bhi had par kar sakte ho

armaan:kaliyani tum samajh kyon nahi rahi ho..

kaliyani:armaan just imagine ke tum mujhe kisi aur ladke ke saath...

(😡armaan was just going to slap her, when she stops his hand)

kaliyani:maine sirf kaha aur tumhe bura laga, aur tumne to kiya, ab mein tumhe kehti houn, be practical

armaan:ladkon ki baat kuch aur hoti hai, ladkiyon ko apni had nahi par karni chahiye

kaliyani:aur ladkon ko bhi, aaj se mein tumse har rishta tod thi houn

(she remove engagement ring, and throw it)

armaan:kaliyani, kaliyani meri baat to suno, shit

(kaliyani goes to her home, she is crying🥺😭, she reach her house. She enters, she sits on the floor, her father sees her , so he goes to her)

dad:beti kiya huwa?

kaliyani:dad armaan ne mujhe dokha diya

(she tells everything, her father hugs her)

dad:i can't believe ke armaan ne aisa kiya, acha kiya ke tumne us se rishta tar diya, woh tumhare layak nahi hai, ab beti tum armaan ke baare mein nahi socho ghi, jao aur fresh ho kar neeche khane ke liye aa jao

(she goes and fresh-up, but she is still crying😭 (kyon us bewafa ke liye ro rehi ho pagal ladki), then she goes in the hall)

dad:kaliyani khana kha lo

kaliyani😲:dad mujhe bhook nahi hai

dad:beti mere liye😛

(her father fed her, then she goes to her room, she cries😭 all the night)

NEXT DAY, 9am

(kaliyani wakes up and do the pooja, then she goes in her room, kaliyani mobile rings, she sees appearing "armaan", she switchs off the phone😕)

armaan:yeh phone kyon nahi utha rahi, mana ke maine ghalti ki lekin itni baari bhi ghalti nahi ke woh mujhe maaf bhi nahi kar rehi, she is like all tipycal indian girl, nahi baat kerni to na sahi

(armaan mobiles ring)

armaan(😡angry):hi

girl:hi armaan, mein ishita bol rehi houn, tum itne ghusse mein kyon ho

armaan😃:kuch nahi ishita, bas ek ladki tang ker rahi hai, lekin tumhari awaaz sun ker ghussa tanda ho gaya (khud us ladki ko tang ker raha hai aur uper se jht bol raha hai 😡)

ishita:oh to woh ladki kaun hai jo mujhse mera armaan churana chah rehi hai

armaan:pata nahi, anyways yeh sab chodo yeh batao ke aaj sham ko kahan milna hai

ishita:woh mein meeting ke baad bataoun ghi

armaan:meeting?

ishita:yes meeting, tum bhool gaye

armaan:thank you ishita tumne mujhe yaad kara diya I forget that completely

ishita:so meet u at 1 pm, ok, bye

armaan:ok bye (thinks) kaliyani tum nahi to ishita hi sahi, khubsoorat hai, tum se zyada amir baap ki beti hai (kitna gatiya insaane hai 😡)

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dad:kaliyani beti, chalo office ka time ho gaya

kaliyani😔:dad mein ghar rehna chahti houn

dad:beti ghar rehne se tum woh sab kuch bhool jayo ghi kya ?, nahi na, bahar chalo, office chalo tumhe armaan ke baare mein sochne ke liye time hi nahi milega

kaliyani;dad shayad aap thik keh rahe hain, aur mein kyon uske liye apne aap ko taqleef de rahi houn, mein aaj ke baad uske baare mein nahi sochoun ghi, i promise u

dad:meri bahadur beti, jaldi se tayar ho jayo mein tumhara neeche gaadi mein intezar ker raha houn

kaliyani(😊smiles) :ok dad

(she gets ready and go, she goes and sits in the car, her dad is talking to someone)

dad:to phir thik hai bye

kaliyani:dad kaun tha?

dad:mera bachpan ka dost, 20 saal pehle woh london gaye the, uske baad woh india nahi aaye

kaliyani:woh kyon dad?

dad:jab unki wife ka accident huwa to unka dil uth sa gaya tha india se to woh london chale gaye, tum tab sirf 1 saal aur kuch mahinon ki thi, aur unka beta 2 saal aur kuch mahinon ka tha

kaliyani:un ke bete ka kiya naam hai?

dad:soham kapoor, aur woh apne bete ko india bejh raha hai, friday ki flight se, yanin kal aa raha hai, darsal bin maa ka bacha, woh bhi london mein reh kar bilkool angrez ban gaya hai,ab mera dost pachta raha hai, ke woh london kyon gaya, uska beta smoke karta hai😕,drink karta hai😲, flirt karta hai, puri puri raat ghar se bahir guzarta hai😳

kaliyani:dad to uncle ne pehle hi kyon nahi soham ko wapis bejh diya?

dad:kyon ki 1saal pehle tak sab normal, normal matlab uske dad ko kuch nahi pata tha, kyon ki woh jo kuch bhi karta tha ghar ke 8 baje thak wapis aa jata tha, lekin peechle ek saal se woh har roz ek nayi ladki ke saath hota hai, aur raat baar ghar nahi aata, tab uske dad ko pata chala ke unka beta kiya kiya gul khila raha hai,ab woh chahta hai, ke soham yahaan aker indian culture sikhe, ladkiyon ki respect karna seekhe aur ek baat usse hindi nahi aati, he only speak english😕😲

kaliyani:dad, soham maan gaya,yahan per aane ke liye?

dad:han kyon ki uske dad ne usse kaha ke india ja ker ghum ao, to woh man gaya, aur beti ab yeh tumhari responsability usse seedhe raste per lane ki, mujhe pata hai ke tum usse thik kardogi, promise me

kaliyani(fake smile😊):yes dad, i promise u (now i am happy 😃)

(they reach at office)

Everybody, who loved this part pls leave ur comments, it will help me to know if i am good or if i need to progress, so after every part i will wait for ur comments, thnx in advance

Jalak

Edited by jalak-ji - 16 years ago