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Posted: 10 years ago
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First of all pls take a bow ! ❤️U r tooo good...I loved it how direct n plain govind was n their little frndly talk was damn good ! N then when kapil enters saying "you r going sumwhere wid sumone" that made me feel as if he was listening govind n sumona' s talk...his next line "judging by her reaction that doesn't sound true" n I was like aww...he knows her well...
Coming to my favorite line was "it's illegal to look tht beautiful. You just killed"👍🏼 tht was nice...n in the end his possessive line was way too good tht " u belong to me"😳
Really loved it to the core reading it again n again ( can't get enough of you : * ) keep it up 👏 will wait for next !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kappumyfav

First of all pls take a bow ! ❤️U r tooo good...I loved it how direct n plain govind was n their little frndly talk was damn good ! N then when kapil enters saying "you r going sumwhere wid sumone" that made me feel as if he was listening govind n sumona' s talk...his next line "judging by her reaction that doesn't sound true" n I was like aww...he knows her well...

Coming to my favorite line was "it's illegal to look tht beautiful. You just killed"👍🏼 tht was nice...n in the end his possessive line was way too good tht " u belong to me"😳
Really loved it to the core reading it again n again ( can't get enough of you : * ) keep it up 👏 will wait for next !


Awww...thank u...u r too kind! This made me so happy
Hope u like the next chapter as well 😳
Edited by Naturegirl99 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey...Prakriti!!
Awesome update of awesome story on awesome people by an awesome writer!!
Have u recognized me?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: FanOfCreativity

Hey...Prakriti!!
Awesome update of awesome story on awesome people by an awesome writer!!
Have u recognized me?


Aishwarya!!! Hi!! Thanks 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i am sooo sry for the late feedback, was quite busy because of my pending assignments, it was a very hectic week for me
but after reading your update felt relieved 😃😊
ooo i love the dialogue "Nah,I'm not a dancer. But it's a good excuse to hold u close." 😳 ufff... what a dialogue, you do wonders with your one liners 👏😊 and govind to is my favorite character,😊 d way you'd explained his character, ive imagined him totally in my mind 😆 every character sounds sooo real 😃 except kapil and sumona 😛 as i don't think they'll ever fall in love with each other 😭 but that's the highlight of your ff😉 😃 o god wish they become real lyf couple 😊😃😳
ufff you've mentioned that the next will be your last update 😒 i am lil disheartened as i always wait for your chapters and always get excited when i see your pm 😔 o nooo... i'm gonna miss every character of ur ff so badly 😭
but i'm sure you gonna make next chapter memorable and obviously it will gonna be brilliant 😉

i end my feedback with a request which i always do😛😉😊 do post your next chapter soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashup

i am sooo sry for the late feedback, was quite busy because of my pending assignments, it was a very hectic week for me

but after reading your update felt relieved 😃😊
ooo i love the dialogue "Nah,I'm not a dancer. But it's a good excuse to hold u close." 😳 ufff... what a dialogue, you do wonders with your one liners 👏😊 and govind to is my favorite character,😊 d way you'd explained his character, ive imagined him totally in my mind 😆 every character sounds sooo real 😃 except kapil and sumona 😛 as i don't think they'll ever fall in love with each other 😭 but that's the highlight of your ff😉 😃 o god wish they become real lyf couple 😊😃😳
ufff you've mentioned that the next will be your last update 😒 i am lil disheartened as i always wait for your chapters and always get excited when i see your pm 😔 o nooo... i'm gonna miss every character of ur ff so badly 😭
but i'm sure you gonna make next chapter memorable and obviously it will gonna be brilliant 😉

i end my feedback with a request which i always do😛😉😊 do post your next chapter soon😃


Hey sweetie,,,thanks for the valuable feedback!! Loved it...made me truly happy...so endearing to know u will miss my characters...makes me very happy as a writer...I will make the next chapter awesome,promise...again,thank u!!😊😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys!! Im so sorry for updating late...hope this chapter makes up for it!! This is dedicated to my sweetest,most perfect and one of my bestest friends Aisha as a belated bday gift! Hope u like it,girl! And also KappuMyFav,for requesting me this chapter. And all the readers who have liked this ff.
Here we go,the last chapter
Chapter 7

As the group and the rest of the ppl in the party huddled closer in a circle with the DJ at the centre of it, the DJ announced that the game of truth and dare will begin shortly. "Be prepared to have ur socks knocked off,all of u. The rules r simple. U hv to fulfil every dare adequately,if not u will be given a worse punishment. The questions asked will be of different types,and we all expect honest answers. Ready,guys?" "Ready!!!!" They all chorused. And so began the game of truth and dare. Although,a certain onscreen couple weren't sure how much truth they cud dare to say :P

"And the first turn goes to...that lady over there!" The DJ announced,pointing at preeti. "Don't u have a bottle or something? She asked the DJ authoritatively. He grinned. "Looks like U r used to ordering people around! He said. They all laughed. Actually we r going clockwise,to be fair. A bottle can't be enough for so many ppl! So,what do u want? Truth or dare?"
"Dare,obviously." She said. "Ok...i dare u to..dance with the ugliest man here!" Everyone gasped..this 'choice' Wud hurt someone's feelings.. :P but preeti promptly went up to the DJ and asked for a dance. Everyone shook with laughter,while the DJ realised too late who he had messed with! Anyway,they both danced to "Dance Basanti". preeti and the DJ were skilled dancers,and they sizzled on the dance floor. Kapil and the entire group hooted and cheered for them. Afterwards,the DJ gave turns to other ppl in the party,which resulted in the revelation of a few exes,leading to some bickering between the couples present. And a few unique dares,which were cheered for loudly. Finally,he returned towards kapil and the group,and pointing at ginni,he asked "Truth or dare?" "Truth!" She replied. "Alright. So,Ginni,tell me. Of all the ppl in ur friends group...is there someone ur in love with?" Ginni smiled. "Yes,there is. I just hope he feels the same way abt me." She said,smiling at kapil,who smiled back. Sumona's heart sank. The wound cut deep.But she decided to put up a brave front and carry on. Govind gave her hand a squeeze in support.

Seeing them holding hands,the DJ turned to them. "Well,well..looks like we hv a couple here!" He said. At this statement, Kapil fumed. The DJ decided to ask them a combined question. "So guys,truth or dare?" He said. "Dare!" They said simultaneously and and laughed. "Very well...I dare u both to sing a romantic song for each other while dancing in each other's arms." The DJ said. Kapil glared at him,but before he could say something,Govind and Sumona had reached the dance floor. He burned,seeing them stand so close to each other. Govind started singing,in a really melodious voice "Mera Dil Bhi,kitna pagal hai,yeh pyar to Tumse karta hai" . While singing,his eyes seemed to be trying to send a silent message to sumona.. She sang the song back,while govind expertly twirled her in his arms. She understood the message. "Tell him,don't be afraid." Was what he was trying to tell her. Finally,the song ended and they returned to their seats. The audience gave a thundering applause. Kapil gave govind a death look,which almost made him laugh. Almost. The look was pretty scary too! Next,the DJ came to Kapil. "And we have a star here. So,Mr sharma,truth or dare?" He asked. "Dare!" Kapil replied. "Very well. I dare u to propose to ur onscreen wife,who is present here." Several gasps shot out from the audience,followed by whistles. Sumona looked shocked. Kapil calmly got up,took her frozen hand and gently led her to the centre. Kneeling down on one knee,he gazed into her eyes with burning intensity. "Sumona, u r the purest,most beautiful,loveliest,cutest,and the most perfect person I have ever met or seen. U r the only thing I have ever wanted. I love you. Will u be mine forever?" He said smoothly. Sumona cud see the genuineness shinning in his eyes,even though this was a dare. She choked on her next words,barely above a whisper. "I love u too. Ur my world." Everyone started clapping,as Kapil picked her up in his arms in the tightest hug in the world. They sat back at their seats. There was silence between them,and shock at what had just happened. They needed to clear all this soon,but for now they just enjoyed the blissful feelings coursing through them.The rest of the game progressed and ended,although they barely noticed,so engrossed they were in each other's eyes.

This was the last night of their stay,so the group decided to spend it in Kapil's farmhouse,including govind. When they reached there,as soon as the door opened,everyone rushed and settled themselves into the rooms they liked,not even asking Kapil for permission! "U know,that's kinda insulting!" Kapil said to Sumona when they were the only ones left in the room. "They didn't even ask me anything! Just captured the rooms!" Sumona burst into fits of laughter. "They must hv been tired." She said in between giggles. Kapil's expression made her laugh harder. When she finally stopped,Kapil slowly made his way towards her,until they were barely inches apart. Sumona's breath got caught in her throat,and she stared at him,waiting. "I meant what I said before.All of it." He stated. "Oh,really? Then what was it about Ginni loving someone in her friend's group? And she was looking at u when she said it...and u smiled back. Also,her coming to mumbai,ur flirting,everything...how can u be so sure that u love ME and not HER?" She said,a challenging look in her eyes. "She is in love with one of her friends,and no it's not me. His name is mohit,and he wasn't committing to her..so she came to mumbai,asked me for help to make him jealous,posting us together on social media. It worked,and now they r committed. But looks like it has driven u far from me.."He said I a defeated and sad tone. Sumona immediately put her hand on his mouth to shut him up. "Shhh..I'm so sorry Kapil..I love you. More than my life. And before u ask,govind is a friend and only a friend..and today by that song he was encouraging me to admit my feelings to u. Love u,Kapil."

Kapil' face lit up like the world lights up when the sunrises early morning. Crushing her into his arms,he kissed her face softly. "I love u too" he said,and slowly captured her lips in a deep,passionate kiss,his hands holding her waist possesively. Sumona's hands formed a chain around his neck. He poured all his feelings,love and soul in the kiss. She kissed back with equal force,love and tenderness. They pulled back and looked at each other's eyes,and cud see the love that lingered there. He smiled and pecked her lips again. Suddenly,they felt a spotlight shining on them. They looked up,and at that exact moment a song began to play, "Do dil mil rahe hain..chup ke chupke!" Govind,preeti,chandan,Ginni,Ali and Kiku emerged from their hiding places.whislting,clapping and shouting "Woohoo! Finally!" Sumona and Kapil laughed. "Seriously guys,are we 12 years old or something?" Kapil asked. Everyone joined on the laughter that followed. However,Preeti and govind were not amused. "Hey!! How dare u call us kids!! We had to plan a lot to get this all together" they both said in unison and pouted. Everyone just laughed harder,and they both joined in. Finally Sumona said "Thank u,guys. This has sure been one hell of a trip!" She said. Everyone agreed. Kapil said "But we still hv this night left! Let's do a marathon!" Everyone glared at him. Marathon at this time of the night? Kapil grinned."I meant a Cnwk marathon!" "That's more like it! We r in." Everyone said,and went to freshen up,to prepare for the night again,purposely leaving Sumona and Kapil alone again,who just laughed at their friends antics. Looking at Sumona,Kapil took her hand,kissed it and pressed it to his heart. "Hear that? It beats only for u. Ur my life. Don't u ever leave me." Sumona said "Bahut filmy dialogue tha,par accha tha. And no,I'm never ever planning to leave u,even if u try to get rid of me! How can I? Ur my perfection." He smiled and put his arm around her waist,made them both sit on the sofa as they waited for their friends to rejoin them for the marathon. Sumona cuddled as close to him as she cud on the couch. They were both content.She was his now for all of eternity. Their friends joined them,and they started watching the Cnwk marathon. It was a night filled with fun,smiles,laughter,passion,and,most importantly,love. They couldn't have asked for a better night.

The end.

Thanks for reading,love u all. Plzz review!
Edited by Naturegirl99 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Wow that's the only I said after I read Your creativity.
KApils public confession to Sumona was awesome and their jealousy parts was done very beautifully

Good work
Its sad that ur FF is ending but I hope to see new FF on KaSum may be in future.
Thanks a lot for beautiful and awesome KaSum FF

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