The only thing-Kapil Sumona FF.(Updated and complete)

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Queenie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Thank you so much for the update. 🤗It was lovely. I knew I'd like this Govind guy. Curious to know what happens next. The Kasum part of fighting and making up was so sweet.
Looking forward to what happends next.

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khjgj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Omg ! Loved it !!!!! N yes my fav part was when kapil wraps his arms around sumona infront of govind😳...and then that kasum moment ⭐️...their hug...wow...wow this story is getting more n more fab ! Keep the good work up girl !!👏 Waiting for the next update that romantic party...hell excited...can't wait !!!!

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aashup

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

whooo😃😃 you finally posted it... i cant tell u, ive been waiting for days... and ollaaa... the wait was worth it 😃😃 i mean, it was beautiful 👏👏 the way kapil was jealous and i think the best part, he showed it to sumona, they hugged each other, they know that they both love each other but still didn't proposed😊 that shows that many more interesting and beautiful movements have to come in this story and i know u'll gonna make it more romantic, interesting and masaledaar with lots and lots of romance and yes jealousy 😉 last me just one request plzzz plzzz plzzz do post next chapter soon 😊 and yesss thank you for this brilliant story 😃

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Naturegirl99

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: queenie
Thank you so much for the update. 🤗It was lovely. I knew I'd like this Govind guy. Curious to know what happens next. The Kasum part of fighting and making up was so sweet.
Looking forward to what happends next.

Thank u!! This makes me very happy...I promise u,the next chapter is gonna be rocking as well!!

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Naturegirl99

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Kappumyfav
Omg ! Loved it !!!!! N yes my fav part was when kapil wraps his arms around sumona infront of govind😳...and then that kasum moment ⭐️...their hug...wow...wow this story is getting more n more fab ! Keep the good work up girl !!👏 Waiting for the next update that romantic party...hell excited...can't wait !!!!

Thank u!! I appreciate this..!! I will make the next chapter even better..love😳

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Naturegirl99

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: aashup
whooo😃😃 you finally posted it... i cant tell u, ive been waiting for days... and ollaaa... the wait was worth it 😃😃 i mean, it was beautiful 👏👏 the way kapil was jealous and i think the best part, he showed it to sumona, they hugged each other, they know that they both love each other but still didn't proposed😊 that shows that many more interesting and beautiful movements have to come in this story and i know u'll gonna make it more romantic, interesting and masaledaar with lots and lots of romance and yes jealousy 😉 last me just one request plzzz plzzz plzzz do post next chapter soon 😊 and yesss thank you for this brilliant story 😃

Omg...I was waiting for ur review!! And as usual it made my day 😊😊 Thank u sooo much!!! I will post the next chapter soon...and it will be rocking 😳

Lots of love to u sweetie 😊

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Naturegirl99

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Thanks for all ur reviews guys...I love u all a lot. Here is the next chapter,hope u like it. The next chapter will be the last of this ff. Enjoy!

Chapter 6

As the sunlight settled on her face,Sumona groaned. She had to wake up now. She slowly opened her eyes and when she did,she let out a shriek of horror. Govind,who was sitting comfortably and eating food on the table infront of her shrieked as well. "Govind! What the hell are u doing here???" She asked. "I'm eating breakfast!!"Why did u have to scare me like that??" He asked,agitated. "What,I scared u?" Sumona exclaimed. "Yes." He replied. "U were the one who is in my bedroom like a creep and u r saying I scared YOU?" She said,furious. He collapsed laughing. "Boy,that was fun. Ought to do it again." He said. Sumona cudnt remain angry wid him for very long and burst out laughing as well."How did u enter my bedroom btw?"

"The manager is my friend so I asked him for this room's keys,saying u needed some help. And he saw me wid ur group yesterday so he gave it to me." Sumona groaned. "What is it wid ppl sneaking into my bedroom lately? 1st Kapil and now u." He raised an eyebrow. "So Sharmaji snuck it ur room?" He asked." Don't call him sharma ji." She replied."Oh,possessive?" He said wid a grin."Shut up" She hit him. "Now,y r u here?" "Just need to ask something. Are u in love wid Kapil?" Plain,direct. That was govind. Sumona smiled. U r too direct. And I don't know the answer to ur question. I hvnt talked abt it even to myself." "U r just too stubborn to admit it." But let's leave that.' Sumona sighed wid relief. But it was short lived. "So,who r u going to the party with?" He asked. "Myself." She said wid a grin. "Do u want to go wid kapil?" He asked. "What I want has nothing to do with it. He has to ask me first." She replied. "So go wid me." He laughed. Sumona laughed back,and was just abt to reply when Kapil entered the room. "You are going somewhere with someone?" He asked,looking between her and govind, his eyes unreadable.

Sumona started to shake her head but govind cheerfully replied "Oh yes,I wanted her to go to the dance with me. She said that that she will,as u haven't asked her yet." Sumona groaned and smacked her head. Kapil laughed. "Judging By her reaction,that doesn't sound true." He said. Sumona smiled slightly and he reached over to put an arm around her shoulders. At that moment,the rest of their group i.e preeti,Ginni,Ali,Chandan and kiku entered the room. "Kapil we have been searching for u all over! And here u are!" They said. They made themselves comfortable. "So,who is going with whom to the party tonite?" Preeti said,getting straight to the point. Ali,Kiku and chandan spoke up "We three are going together as friends. Preeto u can join us." Preeti replied-"Oh that's perfect! Now Ginni,Kapil,Sumona and govind are left. What r u guys gonna do?" "U know,this seems deliberate to me." Kapil said,and everyone laughed. "It was." Preeti said with a mischievous grin. Ginni was looking at Kapil expectedly. He looked at her too and was just abt to say something when Sumona saw that and said "I think Kapil shud go wid Ginni. Govind and I can go together." Kapil looked at her,surprise and disappointment visible on his face.

But govind spoke up. "If I am seen with u and Kapil is see with Ginni,they r gonna link me up wid u and Kapil with Ginni,again. That won't help with anything." Kapil immediately agreed. He didn't want Sumona linked wid anyone else. "U r going with me. He said,running his hand up and down her arm,causing electric sparks. Sumona sighed and nodded. Then she said "Wait,what do u mean, 'again?' U follow gossip abt Kapil?" Govind blushed. "Umm..No!! But u have to pretend to listen to ur mother when she is like "Sadda Punjab da Munda Punjabi ladki nu bhya kar ra hai aur ek tu hai jo Sirf ghumda firda rehta hai? Dekh kitne sone lag rahe hain dono -Kapil aur Ginni. Kabhi apni bhi shadi ki baat soch!!" Kapil laughed,hard. "Ur mother actually said that? Omg!!" Everyone laughed as well. Ginni said "Well,I guess I and govind will go wid u guys as a group then?" There was no malice in her voice,and yet Kapil reached out,squeezed her head once and smiled at her. She smiled back. Sumona looked hurt and govind immediately gave her a look of reassurance. She relaxed. Preeti ordered everyone back into their rooms,to get ready for the rest of the day.

The rest of the day went by in a whirl,and then it was evening and time for the party. Everyone was getting ready. Sumona was just putting on her earrings when Kapil knocked on the door.

And when she opened it,his breath got knocked out and he almost choked. Standing in front of him in all her glory,dressed in a black gown that flattered her body and clung to all the right places,with the back open,hair pulled up in an elaborate style and jewellery adorning her,was Sumona. Even Sumona was shocked. Kapil was dressed in a navy blue blazer and trousers which fitted him like a dream. She cudnt help drooling. They both stared at each other for a long time. Finally Kapil said,grinning. "It's got to be illegal to look that beautiful. U almost killed me."

Sumona blushed. "I cud say the same thing abt u." He chuckled and offered her his arm. "Shall we?" Smiling,she nodded and hooked her arm through his. Together they walked down to the party hall,where the others were waiting for them. All of them looked terrific. The Dj,was set,the food was ready and the lights dimmed. The party began.

Everyone sat at a combined table and ate the delicious cuisines served to them. After finishing,Ali, chandan,kiku and preeti hit the dance floor. Awkwardness surrounded the table as Kapil,govind,Sumona and Ginni were left there. Govind said to break it down "Sumona u look magnificent." She blushed and said "U too. As always." Kapil glared at govind. He sighed and thought-so much for breaking the tension! Kapil held out his hand for Sumona. "Care to dance with me?" He asked with a lazy smile. She coloured and whispered "Yes",placing her hand on his. He led her to the dance floor and a slow song began to play. He wrapped his arms around her waist and she placed hers around his neck. Together they swayed to the music. "Since when are u a dancer?" She asked him,her eyes twinkling. "Nah,I'm not a dancer. But it's a good excuse to hold u close." He laughed,nuzzling her neck. Sumona sighed in contentment. They stayed like that for a while. On the other side,the rest of the gang were also dancing their hearts out. The party had just started. At some point of time,govind asked Kapil if he cud step in and dance wid Sumona. He shook his head and said "No." "What?" Sumona gasped. "I said no,no one else can dance with u. U belong with me." Kapil clarified. Sumona blushed deep and govind just laughed and gave her a teasing look. Thus, the evening progressed.

Suddenly,the DJ stopped the music and declared "Next,we have a game of truth and dare coming up. Be prepared to be exposed,all of u." With a laugh. Everyone was excited. A select few of them,however were nervous. This was going to result in a lot of secrets being spilled and a storm was going to head in their direction,changing many things.

Thanks for reading. Plz leave ur review :)

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MyAnastasia18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Maaarvelous...

Hav no words... I can only tell you tht even when I am finished reading this update I can still hear my heart thumping...

I really hav nooo idea were I should start wheather with the funny part or romantic part...

I jst loved Govind...right frm the beginning how he was comfirtably sitting in her room nd eating till his punjabi...totally amazing nd funny...loved it...not everyone manages to write a funny scene which one can imagine nd enjoy...

And now comes my fav KaSum... loved it tht he always came into her room..so cute... nd how u described their looks...ahh dil le liya mera...hats off yaar this was the best...

Aur unka dance...cherry on top..was blushing while reading it.. One thing I hav to say u r amazing in writing dialoges..they r never over the top jd suite every character... you hav tht unique style of writing, where u let every character express their feelings naturally without much idhar udhar ki baatein..this makes ur stories different frm others.

Aur akhri I really like it how u show the internal conflict of Ginni, Govind, Sumona and Kapil...too good nd natural

Last lines ne sari excitments ki boundries tor di...can't wait for more..sadly it will be the last bt really looking forward to it :-)

Till thn will re-read this

Aur bhi kuch tha bt bhool gayi..hahaha

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Naturegirl99

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: MyAnastasia18
Maaarvelous...
Hav no words... I can only tell you tht even when I am finished reading this update I can still hear my heart thumping...
I really hav nooo idea were I should start wheather with the funny part or romantic part...

I jst loved Govind...right frm the beginning how he was comfirtably sitting in her room nd eating till his punjabi...totally amazing nd funny...loved it...not everyone manages to write a funny scene which one can imagine nd enjoy...
And now comes my fav KaSum... loved it tht he always came into her room..so cute... nd how u described their looks...ahh dil le liya mera...hats off yaar this was the best...
Aur unka dance...cherry on top..was blushing while reading it.. One thing I hav to say u r amazing in writing dialoges..they r never over the top jd suite every character... you hav tht unique style of writing, where u let every character express their feelings naturally without much idhar udhar ki baatein..this makes ur stories different frm others.
Aur akhri I really like it how u show the internal conflict of Ginni, Govind, Sumona and Kapil...too good nd natural

Last lines ne sari excitments ki boundries tor di...can't wait for more..sadly it will be the last bt really looking forward to it :-)
Till thn will re-read this

Aur bhi kuch tha bt bhool gayi..hahaha

Uff...itna bada review aaj tak nai mila!! I'm really grateful to u!!! Thank u doesn't even begin to cover it...but there is no other word in the dictionary...so thank u!!! I read and reread ur review atleast ten times...with a stupid smile on my face...makes me feel sooo happy!!! Love u lots :)))

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MyAnastasia18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Naturegirl99

Uff...itna bada review aaj tak nai mila!! I'm really grateful to u!!! Thank u doesn't even begin to cover it...but there is no other word in the dictionary...so thank u!!! I read and reread ur review atleast ten times...with a stupid smile on my face...makes me feel sooo happy!!! Love u lots :)))

As I always say you truely deserve all the praise dear :-)

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