Create Scenes (UPDATED NEW pg6) - Page 9

awwwww poorr poorr daya....yaar baicharey per itna zulam to matt karo...i cannot bear to see/imagine tearz in his eyez
once again suchi awesummmmmmm update...
i got so into it...i wish to continue reading it forever,,,,
its reele suspence ful....cant waitttt to read wat'll happen next...
OMG suchi yaar ur on fire!!!!!!!!!
brilliant and mind blowing update...
thankssss soo much suchi for taking ur time n writing all this for us....i lubbbbb readin it more than anything else...
luvvv u
Daisy!!

Mind blowing, Marvellous, Brilliant, excellent 👏
totally blown away with your work Suchi 😃
Love it so muxh *mauh*, but plz sweetie Daya par itna zulm mat karo, ab bardasht naih hota 😭

Originally posted by: suchi_dev2006

Friends, I've come with the next part, yes, ika u r defintely very much talented and quite brilliant not just writing skill but also in other skills,U have posted so many nice photoes and video clipings,I will be so grateful daisy if one day have a chance to wrok with Ika. Thanksssssssss for all of your constant support for which I able to write a full story about CID. 😃 😃

Awww..Thankyou so much appericiating so much😳😃
Chalo, I'll give you and myself a wonderful chace, after this story U and ME will work together on Fan-Fic ok?😃 I'll be so happy to work with someone telanted as you😃

Originally posted by: Daisy!!

awwwww poorr poorr daya....yaar baicharey per itna zulam to matt karo...i cannot bear to see/imagine tearz in his eyez
once again suchi awesummmmmmm update...
i got so into it...i wish to continue reading it forever,,,,
its reele suspence ful....cant waitttt to read wat'll happen next...
OMG suchi yaar ur on fire!!!!!!!!!
brilliant and mind blowing update...
thankssss soo much suchi for taking ur time n writing all this for us....i lubbbbb readin it more than anything else...
luvvv u
Daisy!!

Daisy, I think Daya pe itna zulm karna bohot tough hain, u know when I was writing all these scenes, I was in tears, lekin ek hero wohi hote hain jo aag me jalkar bhi haste rahe haina??

Thanksssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo muchhhh that all of u r enjoying & not only enjoying but giving me tremendous inspiration & support, tum logo ko achchha lag raha hain isse barkar khushi mere liye aur kuchh ho hi nehi sakta, I am just overwhelemd by all of your comments. will post the next as soon as possible, o.k

Love u sooooooooooooooooooooooooo much🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Day_Dreamer

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Awww..Thankyou so much appericiating so much😳😃
Chalo, I'll give you and myself a wonderful chace, after this story U and ME will work together on Fan-Fic ok?😃 I'll be so happy to work with someone telanted as you😃

Wow😕😕 I just can't believe this ika!!! is it true??? when I first came into this forum since then I was quite impressed the way u invented the idea to write stories & scenes about this CID peoples, but never thought ever that I will have a chance to work with u!!! this is just awesome Ika, thank u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for giving me this opportunity. & defintely I wouldn't able to write a single line if u all wouldn't give me such support, Love u sooooooooooooooo mcuh 🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: suchi_dev2006

Wow😕😕 I just can't believe this ika!!! is it true??? when I first came into this forum since then I was quite impressed the way u invented the idea to write stories & scenes about this CID peoples, but never thought ever that I will have a chance to work with u!!! this is just awesome Ika, thank u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for giving me this opportunity. & defintely I wouldn't able to write a single line if u all wouldn't give me such support, Love u sooooooooooooooo mcuh 🤗🤗🤗

arre bas bas, itni tareef mat karo you make me embarrras😳😳😳 I'm so falltered...😳😳😳thankyou so much for appriciating my work😃
I'm getting so exciting to think that we'll be worknig together😃so looking forward to it.
Please continue soon....
love you too🤗

aree kahan bhaag gayi ho suchi jaanu
continue sooon na plzzz
me waitingggg hardly for ittt

Originally posted by: Daisy!!

aree kahan bhaag gayi ho suchi jaanu
continue sooon na plzzz
me waitingggg hardly for ittt

sooooooooooory daisy,I wasn't well for the past three four days , so couldn't post, here is the next part.

PART VIII


Today Muskan joined duty after her injury, everyone was happy, but still a stifling atmosphere, a bitter rankled feeling remained within the bureau.
ACP: hello Muskan, welcome back,
Abhijeet: are you all right?
Muskan:(smiling lightly) yes sir.
ACP: fantastic, now ek kam karo, tumhari desk me ek bohot important file hain, sanjay kumar ka extorsion file, jaldi jake check karo, o.k? jaldi karna,malad me ek murder huya hain, hum log waha par hi ja rahe hain, zarurat pare to tumhe bula lunga, o.k? ACP along with Abhijeet & other team member went in hurry.
Muskan came nearer to her desk & as she looked at the opposite desk of her she saw Daya was working with a file very minutely.She kept staring at him, but Daya was so much absorbed with the file he didn't notice Muskan.
Suddenly ACP came back with Abhijeet and said to Daya-- Daya,ye mashoor actress mitu nayyar ka file haina?
Daya: ha sir.
ACP: fine, tum ek kam karo, ye file Muskan ko de do,
Daya was surprised ..
ACP:... aur yaad hain tumhe 2001 me ek case huya tha, bombing ka, jaha par hamari finance minister pe hamla huya tha? abhijeet ne hath pakar ke use nikalke bacha diya tha? lekin ye pata nehi chala tha ke kisne bomb minister ki car me rakha tha. tum us case ki tehkikat karo, samjhe?
Daya: lekin sir..
ACP: Daayaaaa, jo bata raha hu wohi karo, aise hi aajkal tumhara dhyan kam me nehi rehte hain, upar se mere order ko nazar andaz karne ki koshish mat karo, samjhe?
Daya twigged that ACP sir didn't want to give him much work as he now a days couldn't trust him fully, he was only giving the work which didn't affect the current recognition & reputation of CID.He had even ordered Daya not to come to any crime scene. Daya swallowed every harsh words and pain & told---yes sir.
Abhijeet was feeling very sad for Daya to see him forbearing every scold of ACP sir, this time he couldn't remain silent-- sir, Mitu nayyar ki case ke bare me Daya bohot kuchh pata kiya hain, aur..
before ending his words ACP glowered at Abhijeet and went away from there.
Abhijeet stared at Daya with sad & dejected eyes.
Daya: jao Abhijeet, ACP sir tumhara intezaar kar rahe hain.
Abhijeet quickly turned back & went away from there.
Daya slowly came just infront of Muskan & with a very dolorous smile he gave the file to her.though Muskan took it but a sharp pang of agony was disturbing her, she couldn't concentrate on any file, neither on Sanjay kumar nor on Mitu nayyar.only & only Daya's dolorous smile was coming into her mind--- Daya sir kitna dubla hogaye hain,kitni dukhi dikh rahe hain woh,lag raha hai kitne din hasa nehi usne,Muskan's eyes filled with tears,kya yehi dikhne ka irada tha mujhe?
Daya went to archieve library room & was searching for the file.It was a tedious job as the file was enough old. Muskan came slowly and asked -- sir,main aapka madat karu?
with a smile Daya answered---nehi, main khud hi dhun lunga.
Muskan went back to her desk & sat & tried to concentrate on the files,but...... she couldn't. As she looked at Daya she saw he was working with the utmost concentration.
At 10.00 p.m the phone rang loudly.
Daya: hello, CID bureau.
ACP:ha Daya, suno, tum ab ghar chale jao, aur Muskan ko bhi drop kar dena, o.k?
Daya: o.k sir.

Daya came to Muskan and told very slowly---ACP sir ka phone aya tha, woh tumhe chhor dene ke liye bola hain.
Muskan abashed a bit, she was trying to say something, but Daya told-- main niche intezaar kar raha hu, tum jaldi ajana, then he soon stomped out of the bureau.
Muskan kept the files with care and then came to downstair but she was reluctant, a bit hesistant & disconcerted. Daya was on his bike and waiting for Muskan.As Muskan reached he told --utho, par samhalke,o.k?
Muskan replied hesitantly--yes sir.
The bike was speeding past & Muskan was feeling dizzy, at a time she thought of grasping Daya for support, but whenever she thought about it some unseen force kept her away and stormed at her---tumhe sharm nehi ate hain? jiske zindegi tumne ujad diya usi se hi madat lene ki koshish kar rahi ho? Chhi: Muskan.at a time she thought of leaning herself over Daya & told him every truth she knew,but....
They rode along the short cut lanes smoothly and reached at Muskan's sky high "Shantiban" apartment by 11p.m.
Muskan got off the bike and spluttered-- thanks sir,....as daya was going to start his bike she again told with a very feeble voice--- sir,apna khayal rakhna.
Daya smiled lightly and skedaddled quickly.
Muskan didn't go but kept staring at the road on which Daya was going far away from her, she looked into the road and saw an auto was coming towards her,she got it and said--us bike ka peechhe chalo.lots of questions were wandering through her mind--- kya Daya Tarika ki ghar ja raha hain? kya abhi bhi woh... dono... milte hain? kya isliye hi ACP sir Daya se itna khaffa the? lekin .... main ye sab kyu soch rahi hu? ...... Muskan was quite astonished to see that Daya was going towards Virar.
--- madam, ye saab to lag raha hai bohot dur tak chalenge. the driver asked Muskan.
Muskan: dekho, tumhe chalne ke liye bola hain, tum chalo, samjhe?
After half & hour Daya's bike entered into the Kalamb beach.
The beach is silent & serene & very different from the other messy & crowded beaches of Mumbai.Daya got off the bike and shuffled towards the sea.Muskan was frightened but she didn't show it & left the auto entering just into the beach.
Daya plodded through the shallow water on the beach & getting a rock he finally sat there. Rumbustious roar of the sea,howl of the breeze,profound darkness of the night & the seclusion from the city all he was craving to feel through his heart.Moonlight was shimmering on the sea, Daya gazed at the sea and thought when one wave was coming another was crushing onto the beach,the waves were rising up & down & bobbing up & down like an wayward young man,this taught us everything,the life & death, the failure & success, the sorrow & happiness.Some hazy pictures were splashing infront of his eyes--he was about three & half and went to a shingly beach with his parents. from childhood those storming, roistering waves attracted him a lot,he was running gustily towards a wave but... mom disrrupted him snatching his one hand. She clutched him in her lap and dandled with affection & then told-- kyu samundar ki taraf daur raha tha? agar woh tujhe mujhse dur le jate.... to... her voice choked with pain.Daya reminisced the scene & then staring at the sky he muttered--ma,aaj phir se tumhari kami bohot mehsus.... he couldn't finish,a stark pain was billowing inside him,his face suffused with tears unconciously.small waves drenched him partially but he wasn't aware about that.
Muskan was squirming within her in unbearable pain. A stab of guilt was splintering her happiness, hope & love into pieces.She slwoly trudged towards Daya & called him--sir.
Daya couldn't listen to and didn't answer her.
Muskan again called him but this time by his name & more gently---Dayaaa
Daya was silent.
Now she went nearer to him and tapped him on his shoulder---Daya.
Daya was awakened from the deep cogitation--ha
--arrey Muskan, tum ....yaha pe...?? Daya asked very slowly
Muskan sat within the shallow water on the beach and cowered at the beach with ......severe torments of remorse.
Daya scrub out his face with the cold sea water & then again told---Muskan, tum itni raat me yaha pe kyu ayi ho?
Muskan: sir, mujhe aap se kuchh kehna hain.
Daya said very calmly--kaho.
Muskan: sir,..... meri waja se aap ko.......... aap ko...... itna bara saza...... mila.... sir main kabhi bhi......though she tried a lot, but couldn't speak out the full truth.
Daya consoled her with an elegiac smile---nehi muskan,tumne kuchh bhi nehi kiya hain, ye to mera naseeb hain..... jo mere sath khelte rehte hain,He became much ruminative and speaked out as if speaking under the deep ocean---yehi dost hai mera, yehi dushman hain,yehi pyaar aur yehi nafrat,yehi..suddenly he came back into the reality and saw that Muskan was wiping her eyes out. He iterated again--Muskan,chalo, main tumhe chhor deta hun
Muskan said with a doleful voice--nehi sir, main chali jaungi, aap chinta maat ..
Daya: nehi muskan,itni bari accident se abhi abhi recover kiya hain,tum akeli nehi jaoge.
Muskan soon turned her face opposite Daya to hide her tears & thought--aap itna caring kyu hain Daya sir? zindegi ne to aap ke liye kabhi mehsus nehi kiya hain, to aap sabke liye kahase aise mehsus karna sikha?
Daya waded towards his bike, Muskan wasn't being able to control herself,tears were spouting from her eyes and.... she tried to hide it by splashing her face with the sea water again & again.
Finally when she reached at Daya keeping a curb on her spurting emotion she saw Daya was about to start the bike.
---sir ,main auto pakarke... she couldn't finish as Daya stared at her with a mild reproof in his eyes. Muskan didn't say much after it and got up into the bike, as the bike was running on the smooth road, brisky breeze was ruffling her inside,normally she liked it, but today.....everything was giving her tremendous gyp.
After one hour they reached at "Shantiban" apartment, muskan got off and was trying to say something but before that Daya also got off the bike and told-- chalo, tumhe upar chhorke ata hun
Muskan was astounded and said being very much abashed--nehi sir, aap jaiye, main..
Daya was obstinate, he didn't listen to Muskan & headed towards the lift.Both reached at Muskan's flat and then Daya said-- good bye.
Muskan: sir, aap ... ander nehi...she was hesitant
--nehi, aur kabhi. Daya smiled and went away.
Muskan ran into the window to see Daya at a glance & saw Daya got up into the bike & then vanished away from her sight.
Muskan was floundered & dumbfounded to see Daya's altruistic & philanthropic nature,how much she was watching him,her heart was teeming with sneaking love, respect & reverence for him, at the same time a twinge of guilt was becoming unbearable,she squawked loudly to reduce her pain,but.... it aggravated the pain more,she spluttered by herself--Daya sir, kya hain aapke dil me? kaunsi kimti hire aap chhupake rakhe hain waha pe? kitna gehra hain woh dil ye mehsus karne ka bari irada hota hain,kya asman ki tarha vishal hain aapka mann? ya pher........ ya pher.... samundar ki tarha? dub jana hain mujhe waha pe,....... ha Daya.... aapne aapko tumhare andar mita dena hain,..... ..mit jaungi main waha pe jaha tumhare dil me asman aur samundar mil gaye hain. kitni bebaquf thi main,..... itna samjhi nehi ke jab tumhe koyi taqleef hoga,to woh mujhe aur bhi zada taqleef dega,yehi to pyar hai,kitni bad naseeb hu main,jise pyar kiya uska sari khushi chhin liya... maine....tumhe to maloom hain... kya sach aur kya jhut.... aur sab kuchh jante huye bhi tum....tum.......tumne mujhe kuchh kaha kyu nehi Daya,tum .. to... us zahar ko ......... akele .. pi rahe ho........she squealed with pain & then tried to stray her mind & switched the radio on.but her lips started to quiver to listen to the song with....

Tumse Kahen Ya Hum Na Kahen
Kiske Liye Yeh Aansun Bahen
Kyon Hum Aise Pachtaye, Kaise Gham Hai Chupaye
Tumse Kahen Ya Hum Na Kahen
Tumse Kahen Ya Hum Na Kahen

Kisko Fursat, Koi Kab Sunta Hai
Kyon Humse Har Khushi Kho Gayi
Kis Se Kahen, Kya Hai Ab Kami
Armaan Jaage, To Kya Jaane
Kyon So Gaye Naseeb

Tumse Kahen Ya Hum Na Kahen
Kiske Liye Yeh Aansun Bahen
Roshni To Kho Gayi Hai
Reh Gaye Ab Sirf Saaye
Tumse Kahen Ya Hum Na Kahen


wah Muskan wah,bohot achchha pyar nibhayi tune...... Muskan was confused.
sirf ansu bahane se aur pachhtane se kya Daya khush ho payega?? ha? swarthi hain tu aur sath sath gunegarh bhi hain.
Muskan was scared and she screamed-- nehi , main ...main...
dono zindegi ko tune bikhar diya, dikhai nehi deta tujhe?? someone shrieked out in anger & hatred.
--kaun ...hain... Muskan was feeling dizzy & confused
arrey main hu main, teri parchhaiya,
Muskan quickly turned her face towards the mirror & saw .... indeed her reflection.
mita degi tu aapne aapko? ha? kaise muskan? bolna asan hain, magar kar dikhana??? agar tera pyar sachcha hain to pher sirf ansu mat baha muskan, Daya ko bacha le.
--magar
The reflection faded away within a moment.
Muskan was riveted there for sometime,tears rained down her cheeks but this time the tears were of relief & tranquail heart.
[To be continued]

Beautiful..simply beautiful indeed suchi 👏 itni emotional....I felt like tears forming in my eyes aswell 😭
I've no words to say...*speechless* 👏
well done shuchi, are are simply the best 😃