OS: abhirika- a unique proposal

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Posted: 9 years ago
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So friends our abhirika also have a story..how they were tied into a knot...

All team (with saluke and tarika) was investing a case...⭐️⭐️

They went into jungle in a rainy season to find a aatma who murdered all visitors.🤡

Abhijeet:sab sath me chalege to rat bhar yeah kam khatam nahi hoga... Aisa karte team banake alag alag Dundte hai us aatma ko

Daya: ha ye thik rahega. To aisa karte Sachin tum fready, pankaj purvi ke sath nikal jao

Sachin:sir ye dono aatma se Darne Wale mere sath nahi please.. Aap in dono me se kisi ek ko apne sath le jao

Daya:thik hai me pankaj Jaywanti or Nikhil ke sath chala jata hu. shreya tumhare sath jayegi to ab chale..

Abhijeet: ek min Dr saluke mujhe nahi chalege unhe bhi apne sath leja

Daya: are abhijeet.. Dr saluke inturrpted them.. Kyu mujhse koi problem hai. Abhi to me tumhare sath hi jaega.. Vo acp nahi hai to mujhe Tarka rahe hoge tum log.. Abhijeet stared them..

Daya: to done... tu ishita, tarika or tere lost love Dr. Saluke💔 ke sath ja raha

Abhijeet:daya tumhe me batata hu bad me..

Sachin silently move toward his way.. Purvi and shreya as usual started talking and followed Sachin... Fready was scared and with a fear he silently follow them..❤️

On the other way daya move toward ahead.. Nikhil and Jayanti scold pankaj again and again..and pankaj was also feel just like fready was feeling ..

And their our lovebirds tried to walk together but again and again saluke was became "kabab me haddi"🥺. Ishita as usual with a sweet smile, Follow them..

Abhijeet (to tarika): aaj mausam kitna accha hi raha hai na

Saluke: itna bhi accha nahi hai pure jute kichad me bhar rahe.. Or jungle me kide makodo ka katne ka dar rahta hai.. Or yad hai na pichle bar jungle ki ser ke waqt kya hua tha.. Tarika ke andar kese virus ghusa or vo tumhe Marne ke liye taiyar ho gayi thi.. Or aise mausam me sardi jukam bhi ho jate hai

Abhijeet: jab bhi muh khologe kuch ulta hi bologe... Pure mood ke kachre kar dete hai.. Tarika and ishita smiled...😊

After some time again: vese tarikaji aap khana khake to aayi thi na

Tarika: ha abh..

Saluke: are bina khana khaye is jungle me aake Marna hai kya ise.. Bhookhe pet bhala kisi ka dimag kam karta hai.. Kese sawal puchte ho abhijeet..🤣

Abhijeet in mind: isko mere sath hi Karna tha.. Inse accha to me fready pankaj Jaywanti in teeno ko sath me le aata... Kuch to karna padega Dr saluke ka

After some time again: vese tarika ji...

Dr. saluke: 1 bat batao har bat tarikaji se hi karni jarur hai, me ore ishita bhi hai yaha pe hai.. Again Ishita smiled..😃

Abhijeet joint her teeth with anger😡... And he thought something..🤢

After sometime abhijeet: Dr. Saluke ye dekhiye.. Yaha pe khoon hai🤪

Dr. Saluke: are wah ab meri yad aa gayi..😆

And he bent toward land... And focused land by his torch.

Abhijeet held tarika's hand and hide behind a rock..

Ishita saw that with wide eyes.. 😳Abhijeet said her from his eyes to move forward with saluke... Ishita nodded with a smile

Dr. Saluke: abhijeet ye to koi Keeda Mara hua hai.. Tum cid Wale har jagah khoon ka ek hi matlab nikalte ho.. And he stood

Dr. Saluke.: ye dono kaha Gaye..

Ishita: pata nahi sir

Dr. Saluke.. Sab mili Bhagat hai tum logo ki.. Janti ho na vo kaha gaye

Ishita: no sir. Me to khud aapke sath yaha neeche khoon ko dekh rahi thi... Uthi to vo log gayab the

Dr. Saluke stared her.. She bent her eyes.. Chalo aage Dundte hai unhe.. Mujhse Bachkar kaha tak bhagega ye abhijeet

They went. And abhijeet and tarika came again that location

Tarika: wah abhijeet manna padega tumne saluke sir ko bhaga diya

Abhijeet: aapko nahi malum tarika ji unko baghane ke liye mujhe katil banna pada

Tarika. Matlab

Abhijeet: ek nirdosh kide ka khoon Karna pada mujhe

Tarika: itni daring kyu dikhayi vese abhijeet

Abhijeet: bus Dr. saluke se picha chudane ke liye

Tarika: bus isi liye

Abhijeet.. Nahi.. Vo..

Tarika: bechari ishita ko to saluke sir ke sath Phasa diya tumne

Abhijeet: samajhdar hai vo.. Bura nahi manegi

Tarika: accha.. To hum log bhi aage chale

Abhijeet ha chalo..

After some time rain started

Purvi and shreya enjoyed the rain.. Sachin saw both of them.. : tum logo ka yaha pe case ke liye aaye ho na ki barish me masti karne

Fready: mujhe to lag raha ab aatma aane wali hai.. Bizliya kitni kadak rahi

Sachin: in sabko mere sath hi bhejna tha..

Purvi: sir vo vaha dekhiye..

Sachin: hold her gun: Kya

Shreya: wow kitna pyara puppy hai itne Sunsan jungle me kya kar raha

Sachin: are yar tum log is kutte ke bacche ki Dundne aaye ho kya.. Kya ho gaya Purvi tumhe... Tum dono kab se case ke waqt aisi bate karne lag gayi

Purvi: sir me case ke bare me hi bat kar rahi hu... Is puppy ke gale me patta Bandha hua hai.. Or is Ghane jungle me kon puppy ko palte Bethega...

Sachin and shreya think..sachin: tum sahi kah rahi ho Hume aage chale dekhna chahiye (don't worry friends before their engagement they always work as perfect team

There Abhijeet and tarika were about to ran quickly but in dark they can't saw In dark and they fallen in a dig.

Tarika: kya yar abhi is barish me is gadde me Sadna padega

Abhijeet: daya... Sachin... Saluke sir koi hai yaha pe...

Tarika: saluke sir Hume is halat me dekhenge to bahut khush hoge

Abhijeet: unhi NE Gali di hogi jo him yaha fas Gaye..

Tarika: Hume bahar nikalne ke liye koshish karni chahiye... Nahi to subah tak sabko hamari lash milegi

Abhijeet: vo to hai...

And they started tried to climbed But they can't succeed

tatika: ab to yahi pe marege lagta hai. Vese abhijeet ab last chance hai jo bolna hai vo bol do... Kya pata kal ho na ho

Abhijeet: kya bol do... Mujhe.. Kya.. Bol..

Tarika: soch Lo abhijeet kahi aisa na ho ki tumhari aamta bhi phir bechen hoke is jungle me ghume

Abhijeet: kya tarikaji aap bhi... Aatma me kab se viswas karne lag gayi

Tarika: abhijeet sach me tumhara kuch bhi nahi ho sakta...jindgi bhar kuware hi maroge

Abhijeet: aisa kyu kah rahi ho

Tarika: o goddd abhijeet... Abhi bahut intzAr kar liya.. Jaldi se bol do ab.. Varna hum log marege nahi to bhi me tumhe to pakka Mar dalugi

Abhijeet: tarika ji... Vo me... Kya.. Bolu😳

Tarika: Are yar... Tumhe I love you bolne me or kitne sal lagege... Bata do. Budape me shadi karoge kya phir

Abhijeet embarrassed. Tarika :ok done... Aaj tum ya to bologe varna me tumse kabhi bat nahi karne wali

Abhijeet: tarika ji vo...

Tarika: are yar kya Ji ji laga rakha hai... Tumhari Puri team hi fattu hai.. Aise to badi Bahadur bante ho sab ke sab... Andar Se sab darpok... Baki ka to pata nahi.. Pat tumhara or daya kabhi bhi kuch nahi ho sakta

Abhijeet: aisa kyu kah rahi ho abhi bol deta hu.. Bolne me kesa dar.. Vo me aapse...aapse

Tarika : bus bahut ho gaya lagta hai mujhe hi bolna padega. Me batati hu kese bolte hai And she stood on a rock and shouted: abhijeet I...loveee youuu. And the voice was surrounded all side..😳😳😳

All was stopped on their location🤓

...

Saluke to ishita... Ye tarika hi chillayi na

Ishita nodded.

...

Daya: ye tarika ko kya ho gaya..

Jaywanti: chalo kuch to accha hua is jungle me

...

Shreya: ye tarika NE bola

Purvi: lagta to yahi hai..

Sachin : aaj ka case to lagta hai hath se gaya..

Feady: mujhe to lagta h tarika ke andar koi aatma ghus gayi hai

Sachin : to kya vo aatma abhijeet sir se pyar karti hai

Purvi and shreya laughed. purvi: Hume Awaaz ki side chalna chahiye

Sachin: vaha pe bad me ja sakte hai.. Pahle ye case jaruri hai aage chale...

Shreya: sir aapki koi girlfriend hai

Fready: thi na vo saloni par uski shadi ho rakhi thi.

Sachin: fready bus Karo or aage chalo... Kitni bar ye kahani sunaoge sabko.. Purvi and Shreya followed Sachin silently.

...

Tarika: aise bolte hai

Abhijeet: me khud ka nam leke chillauga to ajeeb nahi lagega

Tarika: abhijeettt... tum abhi mujhe bol rahe ho

Abhijeet: tarika ji ye jungle hai... Yaha pe Awaaz gunjti hai

Tarika: to sabke samne bolne me sharam aati hai me bhi to boli abhi... Tum serious to ho na... Ya phir aise hi mujhe Tarka rahe ho

Abjijeet: aisa nahi tarika... Vo me khud.. mere ateet ke bare me nahi janta.. Aise me an.. Ye sab

Tarika: I don't care about your past... Agar tum sach me mujhse pyar karte ho to aaj tum bologe

Abhijeet: vo daya NE sun liya to vo chidayega bad me

Tarika: o god abhijeet.. She pickup a grass stick and fold it just like a round. And sat on the knees: Abhijeet tum to kar nahi rahe ho to tumhara kam me hi kar deti hu.. Will you marry me abhijeet

Dr. Saluke(from uperside) : aise din bhi dekhne padega malum nahi rha.. Abhijeet tum bhi na Sach me..

From other side daya and the team: ab ha to bol do abhijeet bechari ke ghutne dekhne lagege..

Abhijeet: tum yaha.. .. To phir us aatma ka kon dund raha hai

Tarika: us aatma ko chinta hai meri nahi

Dr. Saluke: Sachin tum logo ki Tarah nahi hai vo Dundke le Aayega us aatma ko.. Tarika me to bolta hu uth jao... Uske sath shadi karke fas jaogi..

Tarika: daya aaj agar abhijeet ha nahi bolega to hum logo ko is gadde se nikalna hi mat.. Yahi pe jaan de dege hum

Saluke: abhi acp rahta to bhi kya tum log yahi drama karte

Jaywanti: par abhi to vo nahi hai na... Keep it up tarika... Hum tumhari lasho ko ghar pahucha dege... 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Pankaj and daya stared her.. Vo me mazak kar rahi thi.. Vo kya hai abhijeet sir kuch bolege nahi na..🤣🤣🤣🤣

Daya.: abhijeet time pass mat kar or bol dal... Varna kal acp sir se dant tum khaoge

Tarika: ab to sab bol rahe hai.. Abhi to Bol do

Abhijeet: vo me...

Puri and shreya shouted: ek min abhi mat bolna ... hum log aa rahe hai and they also joined all.. Sachin and fready was hold two other man.. And sachin look toward dig..

Sachin : sir aap yaha kya kar rahe hai

Daya: apni shadi ki tayariya.. Vese good job... Tumne pakad hi liya.. Hum logo ko to aaj abhijeet NE disturb kar diya

Tarika: ab bus... Abhijeet bol rahe ho ya.. Sabke samne kiss karu tumhe🤬

Abhijeet: ye aap kya kar rahi hai.. Me bolta hu na.. I... Love... Love...

Tarika came close to abhijeet : Abhijeet last bar kah rahi hu and she hold his face🤬

All was shocked😕😕

Abhijeet (slowly): ek min.. Ek min I.. I.. Love you tarika ji

Tarika: jor se or bina ruke... Or bina ji ke... jaldi abhijeet

Abhijeet one voice ... He shout : I love you tarika...

All clapped... tarika: to ab tum mujhse shadi kar rahe ho.. hai na vo to karoge hi.. to kal me mom dad ko Mumbai bula leti hu... Tum aake unse bat kar Lena... And I love you too abhijeet

All laughed.. All team remove both of them from the dig.. daya: sach me KUCH NAHI HO SAKTA TUMHARA

SALUKE: MATLAB SACH ME AB YE ReCORD TUT jayega.. Daya meri mano ab tum bhi dund lo kisi ko jaldi ae jaldi.. Tumhara dost ab tumhara nahi raha... Shreya looked toward other side.

Daya: mera me bad me dekhuga hum log chale... Nahi to Subah sab log hume Dundte hue aayege.. Or ab jake in logo ki shadi ki taiyariya bhi karni hai..

so next day all fixed their marriage and was ready to attend a grand event...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Super funny story! Amazing👏👏
Loved it...😃

The best part was this-

Freddy: mujhe to lagta h tarika ke andar koi aatma ghus gayi hai

Sachin : to kya vo aatma abhijeet sir se pyar karti hai

Edited by -VPaintings- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hilarious one 🤣
At last Tarika had to propose Abhijeet in this way😆
Loved it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Super Awesome...had a great laugh 😃😃...I hope they make an episode on this ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -VPaintings-

Super funny story! Amazing👏👏

Loved it...😃

The best part was this-

Freddy: mujhe to lagta h tarika ke andar koi aatma ghus gayi hai

Sachin : to kya vo aatma abhijeet sir se pyar karti hai


Thanks to response

Yo I also laughed after write two dialogs.. 1st that and second Jaywanti : hum aapki lasho ko ghar pahucha dege
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tashu_CID

Super Awesome...had a great laugh 😃😃...I hope they make an episode on this ❤️

Thanks

I also want
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AS-Rifi

Hilarious one 🤣

At last Tarika had to propose Abhijeet in this way😆
Loved it!


Thank you..
This os is one of the my Fevr8 creation

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