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Story 5: The 25 Year Old Case

Ha haa haa... The disclamation is just 😆😉

Nice story👏👏

Asha n Viren's inclusion is wow⭐️⭐️

Again DCP, achha phasaya unhe😆

Very professional story sir se paon tak👏👏

Writer: I think Shreya

Story 7: BELIEVE ME

Story has been started with a sweet essence of Rajat😃 and a slight glimpse of Abhijeet.🤗

Like Sameer's professionalism.👍🏼

I was initially confused thinking just to guide Sameer, how Rajat could again come back to Mumbai even in his old office!!!😲 The leap is little uneasy for very first glance.🤔

Pankaj's little witty murmur😆😆

My dear friend... Bengali foods are very delicious... hmm...😳 How Rajat faces trouble in it?😕

Leave my contact id to him... I'll supply him meals regularly. Ok? 😃CID building is not so far from my place, actually.😉

Wow! Just wow inclusion of Asha.⭐️⭐️

Hmm... Something is fishy with Helping Hand😉

Ha haaa... Pankaj's scary look... aww...😳 he is going to become groom! 😆Finding matches.😛

Nice yaar.😊

Oh! Anything related to numerology? 😕All the serial murders are? Let's see.

Aha! Small twist😃

Clue from FB and then trio acted and Vimal came in scene👍🏼

I think it's going to be a sensitive issue... faith in God and all🥱🥱

Well I have to be cautious then, I m a strict non-believer of Almighty😉😉

Haaannn... Vimal is college student😲😲

Maniac then😡

Well, proceeding for more😊

Euuu... Vimal is crazy or psycho.🤢 The number maniac😲

Na baba... aage se kabhi bhi aise hi Prasad nehi lene wali hoon main, sachhi me😉

Prasad rahe apni jagah, main apni jagah😛

Aain! How can victims read letters after death!!!!!!😲🤣

Oh! Poor Munna😭😭

Dear why don't you write regularly?😊

Why?

We are missing a gem day by day😒

But... but something still in cue my dear...😈

Plot or better to say motive is not very strong

Inclusions of former officers are really appreciable👏👏

Clue is ok

Revelation of Vimal is dramatic😎

But at the end... again the motive is not so strong🥱

If it can be seen, Vimal is a patient of Multiple personality Disorder or it's related to some Baba type Ashram related matter and Vimal is his/her blind believer... 😔which is very common in India, you know...😳 then it will be the ten on ten dear.😳

Somehow, the wrap up essence is missing😭😭

Writer: BT😃

Originally posted by: gadhadada

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Story 4: Five Whorls of Lybranth

Length me agar na bhi jaun, this Voice 1, Voice 2 is the evidence of the writer.😛

Awww... kitten😊

Hush! Mumbai me local police bhi hain😆😆

Yaar, har Marathi ka meaning samajh nehi aaya. Thora thora translation bhi daal dete har jagah

Awww... I guess Vivek ne Freddie sir ko FB pe acc banana sikha raha hain😉

Phir se ek bachha😭😭

Ahhh! Duo come is scene⭐️

Yeee... Jayent, unexpected addition😎

Haaa haaahaaa... Sachin's surprised statement😆😆

Oho! Freddie sir ek jhatka me tech savvy ban gaye. Pahele FB aur aab Tweeter😉

Sharp Shine ka dimag chalne laga👏👏

Haa haa... ACP sir bhul gaye kya kehna tha👍🏼😆

Yaaa... Boss is always right⭐️

Again catty

Aain! 11 pastries bhi koi kharidta hain! 😲It should be 10 or 12... haan haan samajh gayi, chillar prob😎

Sweet Freddie-Manisha jhalak⭐️⭐️

Ohhh... Bhukha billi

Ek-adh spelling michtake😈

Achha! Kahin Daya sir ko Khargosh Khan toh yaad nehi aa gaya?😭😭

Hain! Comic story murder!😲😲

Oh! FB acc toh Manisha ki hain😃... Maine socha Freddie sir ka😉

Oppsss😛

Muskaan kaise iss case me kaam karne lag gaya, samajh nehi aaya.😕 Shadi me aayi thi, milne aayi. Itna tak thik hain. May be mujhe samajh nehi aaya hoga sayad.😒 Ok, I'll check baad me again this point.🥱

Bina scale ka map banta hain? ❓Meri knowledge aisa nehi kehta wayse... even diary me bhi joh maps hota hain, koi na koi scale zaroor hota hain usme.😵🤔

Ah! The big work of finding similarity of murders nd Alice is done by Abhijeet🤗

Nd now Daya's turn😃

Hmm... good point by Jayent.👏 Lekin unsecured Wi Fi use karta hi kaun...😒

Ha haaa dukhi atma Salunkhe sir😆😆

Sab thik hain, lekin Muskaan add kaisi hui hain case me? 😕Aab toh wo Delhi transfer ho gayi, bas milne aayi thi Bureau. Aab jitna bhi achha relation rahe, aise bina official reference pe koi kayse sath kaam kar sakta hain, yahi mujhe khatak raha hain.😕😕

Abhijeet sir ka best friend Salunkhe sir!!!!!!! 😲Aain!😲😲 Oh, u mean ACP sir ka best friend. 😉Mistake mistake😛 (may be😉)

Bolo, jiske zindegi khatra me hain already, Muskaan kaise candy kha sakti hain? Cop hain yah dhakkan😡

Wonderful yaar, some stupid girls mainly 😡should be aware now, should think before share anything personal in social sites.😡🤢

Too much shocking ending seriously.😲

Wonderful flair of a critical but shaking concept.⭐️⭐️

Wonderful siggies⭐️⭐️

Writer: GD😃