CID - Adaalat crossover story : Salunkhe suspended! (COMPLETE)

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: visrom
when duo caught Jaggu he said I am returning from Delhi. (a lie) Abhijeet mentioned this to KD. then KD remembered that he had phoned Rajesh and the phone didn't give the Marathi message so it's true that Rajesh had really gone to Delhi.

Oh Acha...😊😊

Lovely...😳😳

I really Enjoyed Ur that Clue...⭐️⭐️

Awesome Boss...⭐️⭐️

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dayaangel.1

@dayaangel.1

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Amazing story di 😳
Love the court room scenes 👍🏼
KD ka abhijeet sir ko thank you bolna
Then KD's suspection on fake Rajest 😊
Superb investigation with superb twist 🤗
At the end apology part 😳
You nicely wrap up di...❤️

Edited by dayaangel.1 - 9 years ago

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Ok... so read it from the beginning again and completed finally.

Got late because of the exams that were suddenly announced. Sorry.

The story was good from all aspects...from investigation to dialogues everything but what i loved the most were the small conversations that came in between...like the one between jaiswal and abhijeet after the court session, then the small lines signalling the sadness of abhijeet upon questioning by daya and acp sir. And how can I miss the small scene between Abhijeet and Dr. Niyati. 😆

Investigation, however was not like what i read in other stories of you. It was kind of predictable in the 2nd part after a certain point. I think you could write better, though it too was nice.😳

Sorry Di...please don't mind.

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Thanks for reading and commenting, Dayaangel and Diya. 😊

Unless people read and post comments - positive or negative there will be no motivation to write again.

Diya... that's perfectly OK. I wrote part 2 in a hurry and since there was a long gap between part 1 & 2 I lost momentum in the middle. I had to read up part 1 myself and I forgot what I had in mind when I started it.

Anyway this was supposed to be an OS on Angel's request. The investigation was my own addition later. 😆

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: visrom
Thanks for reading and commenting, Dayaangel and Diya. 😊

Unless people read and post comments - positive or negative there will be no motivation to write again.

Diya... that's perfectly OK. I wrote part 2 in a hurry and since there was a long gap between part 1 & 2 I lost momentum in the middle. I had to read up part 1 myself and I forgot what I had in mind when I started it.

Anyway this was supposed to be an OS on Angel's request. The investigation was my own addition later. 😆

No complaints.

Such thoughts and additions are always welcome from your side.😉

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally I had a bigger Niyati-Abhi scene in mind. but when I wrote I was in a hurry so cut that short. 😆

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23Diya

@23Diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: visrom
Originally I had a bigger Niyati-Abhi scene in mind. but when I wrote I was in a hurry so cut that short. 😆

That's really sad for me.

I love their scenes. Those were the best days at forensic lab scenes.😆

Can't you write it now and post it in some other thread? I'm really serious about this demand as it's about Dr. Niyati.😛

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Let me see.I have to think...😆

She was a good actress and honestly that chemistry was there. I so much wish it were she in T's place. 😛

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: visrom
Let me see.I have to think...😆

She was a good actress and honestly that chemistry was there. I so much wish it were she in T's place. 😛

Here you get a pinch from me. A 'same pinch'.

I always think this whenever T comes in front of Abhijeet.😃

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beena1508

@-beena-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Awesome story Visrom.
The investigation part was superb.Especially the incorporation of the Aadhar Database part is really an ingenious idea.
It was good to see Jaiswal as the public prosecutor opposite KD.
The end apology part between Salunke and Abhijeet was really sweet.Well written part.

Thank you so much for such a nice story Visrom.