CID - Adaalat crossover story : Salunkhe suspended! (COMPLETE)

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Rifah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: visrom
I am OK with some nice company with cousins. what I meant was that I can't write a story unless I get some silence and private time.

Oh acha😆 In this case..i can't read a bit when peeps r around me😛

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23Diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: aditya_anjaana

Oh acha😆 In this case..i can't read a bit when peeps r around me😛

I can read until and unless they are small kids calling around didi-didi and pulling out my hairs for playing with them.😆😆

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23Diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: 23Diya

I can read until and unless they are small kids calling around didi-didi and pulling out my hairs for playing with them.😆😆

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visrom

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Just venting out...a distant, not-so-friendly, nosy, chatterbox uncle landed at my home last week. He came without a return ticket and decided that he will book a tatkal train ticket when his work here is over. That work seemed to be taking forever. 😵 At last he finished it and asked us to get him a tatkal ticket. It was 12 noon by the time he announced this, so there was only a waitlisted ticket. He took it for granted that it will get confirmed. He went to the railway station confidently. And now he's back saying the ticket didn't get confirmed and even bribing the TTE didn't help. I offered to book a flight ticket but he doesn't want to take a flight because he has a phobia. 😔 Again tatkal.

I can't sit and complete this story till he leaves. 😔 Please bear with me.

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Rifah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: visrom

Just venting out...a distant, not-so-friendly, nosy, chatterbox uncle landed at my home last week. He came without a return ticket and decided that he will book a tatkal train ticket when his work here is over. That work seemed to be taking forever. 😵 At last he finished it and asked us to get him a tatkal ticket. It was 12 noon by the time he announced this, so there was only a waitlisted ticket. He took it for granted that it will get confirmed. He went to the railway station confidently. And now he's back saying the ticket didn't get confirmed and even bribing the TTE didn't help. I offered to book a flight ticket but he doesn't want to take a flight because he has a phobia. 😔 Again tatkal.

I can't sit and complete this story till he leaves. 😔 Please bear with me.

🤣 🤣

Sorry...i can understand ur situation...but still laughing. U r just talking like my mom😆

All the best. Hope he will leave soon😉

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visrom

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES
Pushed up 😛

Sorry Angel. Really...the moment I get some free time I will finish this. Sorry for keeping you waiting. Even I want to get this done ASAP.

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visrom

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Story finished. 😃

Do read...and as usual I didn't proof read due to lack of time...please ask any questions if you didn't understand. I myself was feeling out of touch because of the long gap between part 1 and 2. 😳

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Bought some time to read visrom's story. Was thinking of it and hey presto! Ure pm!

Loved the twist (cant gv spoiler to anyone who reads reviews first!)

Loved each and every scene! Only u can manage to make it non-ott Golden Era style, viz. u understand the characters so well!

I did suspect the Twist angle by connecting two dots- rajesh being in two places and the saliva getting matched! But the way u wrote the story is marvellous!