CID - Adaalat crossover story : Salunkhe suspended! (COMPLETE)

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visrom

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: 1.KRITTIKA
Nice one
good twist and invstigation
bt itni simple srry se mein stsfied nahi hu 😈

I don't like to make it OTT Kritika...😛 I prefer the 'loss of words' expressions. 😳

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: visrom
you finished this long story so fast! 😲

fast reader

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sherdilali

@sherdilali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

wow great work dii. Enjoyed it a lot

Dr.Niyati...Special thanks to bring her back...I am missing her these days more and more

Keep writing whenever you find time

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@ANGELICEYES

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Honestly you've done an excellent job ⭐️ . While reading I didn't at all feel that this part or ending was hurried. You nicely wrapped up everything. Have a doubt though - why did the receptionist give key of Abhi sir's room to Sophia? 😕 She was not known to her na.. I'm glad that you kept that sorry part sober and simple. Thanks for taking the request 😊 ..

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

the receptionist didn't give. Abhi had it in his pocket.

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Gamayun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

I guess it's good that I didn't read this story when you sent the first PM in January.

I had a lot of free time today so I read it slowly and carefully and really liked it! No OTT, simple, and to the point, and realistic. I liked that.

Nice to see Dr. Niyati again after so long. After Dr. Salunkhe, she was my favourite (sometimes maybe even the same or more).

And seeing Jaiswal and KD was nice after so long. I had stopped watching Adaalat long back, but I still miss the Jaiswal-ness. 😆

Thank you so much for the great story Vis di!

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Yes, I Read Both Parts again cz I Forgets the First Part of Story...😆😆

DII, Very nice and Innovative Turn U take...⭐️⭐️

I Like the Investigation Abhijeet Sir Doing on His Behalf...👏👏

KD ka Haarna...😆😆

Maza aaya...👏👏

although I Like His Few Doubts but I m Surprised that if Rakesh does not talk to Him in Jail, How could He Communicate about that Rakesh was at Delhi...😕😕

I mean kya Rakesh nay Likh kr Baat ki thi...😲😲

Loved His Instant Doubts when Rakesh Left Court without Thanking Him...👏👏

Abhijeet Sir Comment to KD about 17 Saalun ka Experience aur Khooni ko Ek Nazar mein pehchan leta hun was little Saw against My Eyes...⭐️

Yes, that Sopiya Idea was also Nice...👏👏

But why Abhijeet Sir said to Bhai kay agar tum Log Nahi aaty tou Main yahan Mar jata...😕😕

Sorry as I m asking a Very Silly Query but kya agar Hotel mein Customer kay Room kay bahar DO NOT DISTURB ka Borad ho tou Staff 2/3 din Room ko Check Nahi krty Kya...?❓

I Like that No Verification through Adhar card Deta...⭐️⭐️

its was really Innovative...⭐️⭐️

The Exchange of Both Twin was also Lovely...👏👏

Somehow in Second Part, Salunkhy sir ka koi Kaam Nahi tha...😉😉

the Last sorry was really Sweet One...😳👏👏

again a Tremendous, Practical Story...⭐️👏

a Big Thank You so much...😳😳

Thank you Angel for Picking the Right Person to Write on that Idea...😳👏👏

Edited by gadhadada - 9 years ago

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Thanks for detailed feedback GD...ek aap hi hain jo detail mein likhti hain...😳 Warna likhne ka interest hi nahi aata.

The Rakesh in jail avoided talking to KD on purpose kyonki woh use pehchaan lete. The one in Delhi was the real one and he had switched off the phone during a meeting or something.

The tum log nahi aate toh Mar jaata...obviously... 2-3 dinn band kamre mein bina fresh air, bina khaana, bina paani... with drug effect... naturally isn't it?

and yes... we can assume that the stupid hotel guy didn't bother to check. 😆

Thank you for the detailed feedback 🤗

Edited by visrom - 9 years ago

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gadhadada

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: visrom
Thanks for detailed feedback GD...ek aap hi hain ji detail mein likhti hain...😳 Warna likhne ka interest hi nahi aata.
its My Habit, Good or Bad...😉😉
Kaun Sochy...😆😆

The Rakesh in jail avoided talking to KD on purpose kyonki woh use pehchaan lete. The one in Delhi was the real one and he had switched off the phone during a meeting or something.

No, My Point kay KD sy tou Us nay Koi Baat nahi ki tou KD nay kesy saari Jaankaari hasil ki kay wo Delhi gaya tha.. Science Centre...?
kuch tou Wartalap Us nay KD sy kiya hoga...
agar bol kay nahi tou Likh ky...😕😕

The tum log nahi aate toh Mar jaata...obviously... 2-3 dinn band kamre mein bina fresh air, bina khaana, bina paani... with drug effect... naturally isn't it?

Thank you for the detailed feedback 🤗

Your Most Welcome Boss...😳😳

Edited by gadhadada - 9 years ago

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 9 years ago

#70

when duo caught Jaggu he said I am returning from Delhi. (a lie) Abhijeet mentioned this to KD. then KD remembered that he had phoned Rajesh and the phone didn't give the Marathi message so it's true that Rajesh had really gone to Delhi.