Beyond Investigation (Ep. Name : Behrupiya)...(New Story@page 48) - Page 21

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Hi Junior...😛

Hello ji.

Main aa gaya...😉

Welcome senior...

Luckily, My Net is Not working Good and i m Tired with My Own Contest Story so take a Chill Pill Break Yesternight by Reading Your Story.😳😃

Initial Scene was a Nice COPY/PASTE...😉😆

Hehehe...

Yaa...the first scene was 60% a copy paste with additional dialogues and without some of those disgusting words.😡

The Case comes so Casually...😉😉

The Instant Investigation Started, I Loved that U showed about Old Construction of 4 Storied Building without having Courtyard.⭐️⭐️

Somehow, the so many Names really gives Whoaaa...😆

Haan mere nanhe se dimag par bhi bada zor pada. Such a difficult task to handle so many characters and to give them dialogues to speak too.

But what to do...plot me hi itne sare naam the. Maine koi extra name nhi add kiya. Sach!

Culprit as ANJALI was Predicted.😉😉

the Investigation was Lovely...👏👏

I Like that They Personally Checked Everything even Exercising too..⭐️⭐️

the Exchange Role was Cute...😳

Hai na.😛

Loved the way Bhai Extend hand and baray Bhai come with Support...👏👏

that Small Window Idea at Study is Good...👏

Rani Statement...👏

Shilpa Interrogation through Purvi.👏👏

Sameer Background was Nice too...👏👏

Amit Support also Good but Somehow VED characters was Undefined...

Oh!! Sorry for that. 😒

Same with Aakash Uncle as I dunt get that how Amit suddenly come out as His Son..

No no...Amit was Ved's son. First they doubt on Ved, that's why they say that "kahi apne bete ko hi na maar de".

The Attic Idea is OK...👏

its Amazing that from Maid to Daughter even no-one Recognized that Sandel..😲😲

kya sirf Murder krnay ky liye Khareedi thi...😉😆😆

I Enjoyed Your Plot but I knew it would not be Selected by FW...😉😉

I too knew that.😆

Un ko kitnay Naam rakhny party...😉😉

Choonch, Dum, Par, Panjy, Pony aur lastly Toota.🤣

Ufff...😊😊

Paise bhi kharch hote kitne. Phir bhaiyo ki salary se cut.😉

Par ye to do para me plot me itne sare naam dalne se pehle sochna tha na unko.

Try to add Few Dialogues Scenes of those Cops U used...😊😊

Only showing nazar rakhna is not Good na...

Done.👍🏼 Agli baar kuch likha kabhi toh pakka.

Wonderful attempt Baccha...👏👏

Little Dragged One, No Doubt...😉😉

Itni badi joint family ke har member ko dialogues dete dete meri munni si story kab badi ho gayi pata hi nahi chala.😆😆

Thank you so much Betajee.. 😳😳

Thank you so much bade. 🤗

Its always great to read such detailed review from you.⭐️😃and to know the dher saari galtiya from it.😆😆

Originally posted by: 23Diya

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Originally posted by: 23Diya

Originally posted by: Kulasya.

Reserved for reading . Will read today itself. BTW , please read my story also . It's on plot 2 .

Originally posted by: trina134

Wow amazing story

I wish they show such amazing stotries on the show too

But still you still didnt tell about Duo role exchange😉

The first part was very funny and yeah the danger one was quite funny😆