Beyond Investigation (Ep. Name : Behrupiya)...(New Story@page 48)

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visrom

@visrom

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#221

Very nice story. 👏

I was in the mood for a story and you posted this at the right time!
It reminded me of a similar story I had written a few years back. 😊

Nice ending and nothing OTT about it. Loved acp's role in this. I just wished for a little more role for Daya but it's ok. enjoyed it. 😃

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HIAK

@HIAK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

love it ❤️

abhidaya ky scenes bhut achy thy ⭐️

i love it bhut acha likha hai 👍🏼

waiting for your next story 😊

ye 1st story ka feedback hai 😆

Edited by Haffooo - 9 years ago

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Harshinie

@Harshhoney

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Posted: 9 years ago

#223

Great story diya di 😊 it was like a magical ride back to 1998 and it was heart warming to read and relish each and every word of yours😛😊

A completely practical approach but emotions of each and every character was potrayed to their best duo😳

Nice play of words di👏⭐️ wish to see more ⭐️

Take care stay blessed and keep smiling always 😊

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1.KRITTIKA

@1.KRITTIKA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#224

i smhw dnt like reading Abhi-ACP or Abhi and his mthr much, but gtng ur PM i checkd it
first i read i upar upar then ur way of presenting made me read it
well written one

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: Kousar-Aditya
last 2 lines read ki hein😉
Thank u for happy ending😳

Haww...cheating...😲😆

Pura parho.

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23Diya

@23Diya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: visrom
Very nice story. 👏

I was in the mood for a story and you posted this at the right time!
It reminded me of a similar story I had written a few years back. 😊
Phir se!😆 Which one?😛

Nice ending and nothing OTT about it. Loved acp's role in this. I just wished for a little more role for Daya but it's ok. enjoyed it. 😃

I had planned to make it majorly a duo and Abhi-Abhi's mom story but when then I remembered that daya and Abhijeet were not great friends then. They didn't look much bothered about each other, even in stolen dynamite, daya was very easy while remembering 1997 incident. In later episodes like spitting cobra, he was very easy with everything. Isiliye role kam kr diya.😈

On the other hand, ACP sir always seemed to be much concerned about Abhijeet starting from dynamite episode to a few years' back episodes. So jyada role de diya.😛 Also I love their jugalbandi.😳

Thanks for reviewing Di.😃

Edited by 23Diya - 9 years ago

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Rifah

@HIDEnSEEK06

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#227

Amazing story Diya👏

U portrayed Abhijeet & his mother's emotions nicely without dragging it much.

Could feel the strong Abhijeet..yet broken.

Loved ur presentation. <3

Now i m waiting for my Rony's story😛

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: AS-Rifi
Amazing story Diya👏
U portrayed Abhijeet & his mother's emotions nicely without dragging it much.
Could feel the strong Abhijeet..yet broken.
Loved ur presentation. <3
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Now i m waiting for my Rony's story😛

Thanks a lot Riffi.😃

You are not going to forget Rony, haina?😆😆

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#229

I think it's the same one which we were talking about last time.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4381514&PID=122888930&#p122888930

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: Haffooo
love it ❤️
abhidaya ky scenes bhut achy thy ⭐️
i love it bhut acha likha hai 👍🏼
waiting for your next story 😊
ye 1st story ka feedback hai 😆

Tabhi mai sochu duo scenes kaha mile is story me.😆

Thanks Haffooo.😳