Beyond Investigation (Ep. Name : Behrupiya)...(New Story@page 48)

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: gadhadada

No I mean their Relation with Each Other...😊
U only Showed Anjali had 2 Daughters named Lisa and Maya...😆

Haannn...umm...🤔

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Rifah

@HIDEnSEEK06

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#212

Reserve😛

Have read less than half...interesting,,,will read with cool mind😆

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: Rine
Nice story Diya

Thanks buddy.😃

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Riya

@dreamfanatic

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#214

Abbey such long story...😲

I am not even half way through...

And till the time I would reach half there are chances I would have forgotten everything by then...

This one's reserved for me yaar...😳

I'll read it when I am completely off books for atleast a month...😉

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: dreamfanatic
Abbey such long story...😲
I am not even half way through...
And till the time I would reach half there are chances I would have forgotten everything by then...
This one's reserved for me yaar...😳
I'll read it when I am completely off books for atleast a month...😉

Phir toh parh chuki tu ye story.

sapna hi reh jayega mera ki teri review mile

Aur haan. Itni bhi lambi nahi h yaar.

Naam jyada the isiliye zara sa stretch ho gaya sabko dialogues dete dete.

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Kulasya.

@Kulasya.

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#216

Such a long story . With so many characters & the names really tough to remember & do something from it , That's why I was afraid to choose this plot .
But you have written very well. WIth nice language. Story building is nice. Finished finally . It's very awesome job 👏 Where many like me ran away by looking at idiot plot & so big & confusing with lots of names, you wrote such a nice story . Only thing was culprit was guessable but rest all is nice. Could have been more short I feel 😊 Keep writing

Edited by Kulasya. - 9 years ago

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: Kulasya.
Such a long story . With so many characters & the names really tough to remember & do something from it , That's why I was afraid to choose this plot .
But you have written very well. WIth nice language. Story building is nice. I am near the halfway. Taking break now 😛

Really it was too tough to remember all the characters' names and their relations with each other. But I had to do it once I made my mind for it.🥱

Chalo then, enjoy ur popcorns and coke.

See you soon.😉