Daya Sir & Hrishikesh Sir Bday Combined Story Contest-RESULT Pg4 - Page 2

Simple yet interesting.i liked the flashback part very much...😊 7/10

Theme 1# story 1

I liked the 1st scene..it was nice to imagine...😊.liked DCP character and that too without comedy..case was interesting...thank God i m a biology student...i was able to understand abt the case...😃 lovely surprise by bringing Dr. Niyati,kajal n vivek..😛😊

Liked the whole investigation...the writer is indeed awesome...👏👏⭐️

Theme 1# story 2

OMG...i just loved this story...😛😊 case,dialogues,investigation everything was nice...👏 Daya sir in full sharp minded cop...the scene where Daya at construction site checking mud and smells gun powder was...👏👏 (why did'nt u bring Dr.Niyati here? U like her na...😉) wah..kya dimag chalaya...sucking ke zariye dynamite ko churaya...👏⭐️ that girl bunty part was nice...

And offcourse,last scene was a treat... wish we see such cases in the show...😊 😊

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Whenever i read a story,i keep imagining abt it...truly saying ur story reminded me of golden era cases.no OTT,simple yet. interesting investigative...😊👏 (Daya in polite way and not like todays as angry cop always😊👏 i liked it 😊) Blood ke ek small sample se itna kuch pata kar liya...Dr.Niyati is great.👏 I liked agent M part as a negative character very much.😛 u portrayed her very well..👏 (i liked females in negative roles more than the males in Cid..they r very intelligent..😉) nice investigation by Sachin.i liked the scene where M disguised as marathi maid and Daya caught her red handed...👏 but i was eager to know abt the reason behind her mission...anyways...Daya sir talk with ACP sir was nice,agar ek bar Duo ka zikr ho jata to aur bhi achha lagta...😳 story was nice and the writer is indeed amazing...👏⭐️

Theme 2: Story 1: Narration was good.. But somehow I felt the story ended too quickly. But nevertheless a lovely one,, I loved the beginning.. The forest scene where he recalls father's revenge was excellently portrayed. 8/10

Theme 1: Story 1: Aha!! Lovely concept with so many scientific ideas..and u know what.. I felt that Angels-and-Demon-ish feeling althrough the story.. The canister.. The battery.. 24 hours..kya dimaag lagaaya! As usual, the narration was top class. The fight sequence of Sachin sir was excellently done. BTW, what are the swearwords 😉

Anyhow.. 9/10

Theme 1:Story 2: Hmm.. A nice work.. Felt good to see Dr. Nyla and Rishi. I'm surprised the cops did not know what TNT was. I mean if not the expansion at least it's hazardous application in nature. Anyhow, moving on.. Investigations done really well and somewhere in the middle I had to reread few partsand get back to it. Nevertheless a good story,.. 7.5/10

Theme 1: Story 3: Wow dude.. Your style was flawless.. Lovely narrative. A very gripping story with the two cops. Felt great to see Niyati getting a commendable role in the story. The Hydrogen Peroxide concept was well handled. The hospital scene was well written particularly. 9/10

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theme 1 stry 2 8/10

theme 2 stry 1 7/10

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Theme 2 story 1 is posted first.

Brave Attempt 👏👏... Its Really Difficult to Re Create that Aura after Spending 14/15 Years of that Particular Incident but U did it Awesomely...⭐️👏👏

Story started Casually and then the case Came Accidently through Media...👏 Sachin pressed His Memory Buttons and got the Link and then ACP Sir Departed the Work to DUO Separately...👏

I Like that U Combined Birthday Boys Together so the Story Automatically turned BOTH centric...👏😉

The Chasing started, Lovely way of Showing the Similar way throughout the Jungle...👏

Goons nabbed Sachin, Good and then that Cell which was the Basic Tool to Search that way U Spectacularly Narrated...⭐️👏👏

The Less Bars of Signals, Cutting Conversation Time to Time really Mentioned Classically...👏👏

Just One point Confuses Me as You mentioned that Daya Sir heard A KM but Not with Direction little Unacceptable...🤔😒

Then the Peculiar Scene coming so Many Things, Daya Sir Mind had... Revolving around Him was Really Well Written...👏👏

I Like that U did not Drag that moment and Head goon already Less the Emotional Bar from Daya Sir Shoulder by Killing the One creating Trouble...👏😆

Lovely Portrayal of Police Inspector with Sr. Inspector Abhijeet having No Authority and Orders...👏👏

Somehow the Case was Not much Crisp and You Wrapped it Suddenly but All and All a really True BRAVE attempt...👏👏

I m So Sorry if U and any of Other Writer, Reader or Fans feeling Bad about this Review...😊😊

It's Just a Single Opinion of One Reader which Hope U Accepts like the way U did Earlier...👏👏

Thank You so much Writer...😳😳

Excellent Portrayal of a Scientific Research Laboratory with All the Authentication and Measurements...👏👏

Nice way of Stealing a Virus and then Saving it in Canister...👏

Now Adding of Both Officers but Somehow I m Not Convinced the Reason which U gave for Others Absence...😒

DCP Taunting was also Not giving a Good Flavor... I Only Like that He did not Open the Case at Bureau and with Passage of Time Case Opened...👍🏼

Dr, NIYYATI was a Good Surprise but Somehow how the Forensic Doctors associated to Such High Profile Scientific Research in which Only Few High Profile Scientists associated who are Specialized in their Work...😕😕

I Like If U added that Scientists giving the Information and also Helping to Deactivate the Canister and DR. NIYYATI Only Helped Them is much More Reasonable...(Sorry but it's My Own Opinion 😊😊)...

Dr. Mohan coming in Gate Security camera was really a Nice Idea as U gave that this camera Operated by Separate Server...👏👏

KAJAL and VIVEK was Good but I Think They did not Get Much Role in the Story...😉😆

The Dynamite Idea was Not Fit in Ur Story as Already it Not Connected to that Virus either Its Plot Demand...😕😒

The Idea of Carlos and Dr. Mohan to move that Dynamite Site in Lab Jacket was also Not Accepted with Those who are already in that Dirty Business and Carlos Indulged in it Earlier... OK, He was Not Successful but must Know the Points which will Arrested Him...😊😊

The Cute Kid was the Icing of Ur Story Writer⭐️⭐️... I Loved it and the Way U Portrayed the Whole Flick is Really WOWest and AWESOMEST...⭐️

Car Searching through CCTV Footage also a Good Idea...👏👏

Sachin went to that Place and then Safe that Kid was also not Fitted 😒... BTW, already they knew Carlos, why dun't Taking Out His Cell Records, His Office, Official/Personal Garage etc...😕😕

About Dr. Mohan Inclusion, Yes He was there in that Research for Initial Small Flick where He worked and already He Knew that in Researching anything, Specially about any Biological things Changes Rapidly, so why He First did not Contact to any of His Friends and Trying to take Out the Current Situation of that Virus Research kyunkay Us ko tou Pata hee nahi tha kay aagy Research mein hua kya...?😕😕

Last Fight was also Confusing as Another DR Arrival without any Idea but I Loved DR. Mohan Step... Truly Awesome...⭐️👏

The Skype Calling was Cute and Mentioning about Gifts gives a Sweet Feel...😳

Some of Ur Dialogues and connects are Superb Specially when Daya Sir thought that Spending Hours with Slimy Octopus is far More Better that Investigating with DCP was Fantabulous... same as with All the Cute Gyan of that Small Boy with Cops are Heart Touching...⭐️

The Idea of Patent Research/Medicines was Excellent and Fantastic as U Portrayed it Spectacularly...⭐️⭐️⭐️

I Like that this time U Portrayed Carlos Character in much Lower manner...👏👏

I knew might be My Review Hurt U but I complained U earlier too that Now Ur Stories are much Monotonous either U have Incredible Skills to Gear up Ur Talent by Changing Ur Writing Style...😊😊

I m So Sorry if U and any of Other Writer, Reader or Fans feeling Bad about this Review...😊

It's Just a Single Opinion of One Reader which Hope U Accepts like the way U did Earlier...👏👏

Thank You so much Writer...😳😳

The Story started Nicely and the Background Reason was Acceptable too...👏

Inspector Rishi and NYLA Inclusion was really a Pleasurable Surprise...😳👏

I did not like VIVEK Inclusion as u already included Some Juniors with Rishi too and now the Whole Investigation looking Hoth Potch...

Both the Cases Interconnected Classically and Nice Investigation side by side...👏

Somehow so many things Confused and I thing Some Sentences are Missing so Cant Connect it...😕😕

I Like that U showed Both People Connected with the Same work so their Idea was Good to make anything in Wrong way...👏👏

It's Nice that U used Vivek in backup Only...👏

The End Birthday Surprise was really Cute...😳

I m So Sorry if U and any of Other Writer, Reader or Fans feeling Bad about this Review...😊😊

It's Just a Single Opinion of One Reader which Hope U Accepts like the way U did Earlier...👏

Writer started the Story with Usual way looking Nice but still Not Convincing Background for Team Absence...😒

Then Hydrogen Per Oxide Stealing from a Lab through a Scientist named Dr. Singh with Her Guest...👏

Hmmm, I dunt think that any Scientist who would be arranged by RAW went inside the lab having No Verification or Security Checks, except saying that Nobody knows Dr. Singh was Not a Solid Reason... Lab must have so many Ways to Verified that or U showed that Someone from RAW would be the Part of that Robbery...😕😕

Dr. Niyyati Inclusion was Nice and it showed Really CIDiens Missing Her and Vivek a lot...😳👏

Then Dynamite Stealing from Vault and only for a Month Working period, Management Allowed Both Girls to Access that Vault Not looking Good...😒

The Blood and that Apollo Tire marks are Awesome...⭐️⭐️

The whole Investigation Regarding This was Spectacular especially the Anemic Disease found from Blood Sample then how Niyyati taken out Details those Chemists which Sell that Medicine was Awesome...⭐️

Same with Apollo Tire marks... it's also Classy...⭐️👏

Somehow that Chewing gum Wrapper was not Convincing as I find it Really Difficult as I feel Something were Missing there...😕😕

Dr. Singh Revealing and then the Boy who Support those Girls for Rent was Really Good...👏👏

Somehow the Both Girls Stupidity was Indigestible cz Recruiting was the Main thing regarding Such Missions...😕😕

The laptop and rent Agreements were much Stupid Lapse...😲😲

I also dunt Like that how Agent M fooled as She Killed Both Herself and Not Checked them Once either so Confused about Her Attempt either U showed Her so Accurate and Perfect...😉😉

Her Character was Really Classy and the Disguise Idea was Nice too 👏👏... BTW, why Sachin did not Contact to that Circus group from where Agent M working...😕😕

Hydrogen Per Oxide is a Low Reactive Explosive when coming contact with Dynamite so Explode 6 City Blocks were Not Convincing too...😒

Somehow I Really Enjoyed the Investigation and Grip as well Speed so I felt that it's the Best Entry which Fulfill the Plot Criteria...👏👏👏

I m So Sorry if U and any of Other Writer, Reader or Fans feeling Bad about this Review...😊😊

It's Just a Single Opinion of One Reader which Hope U Accepts like the way U did Earlier...👏

Theme 2, story 1 : 7.5/10

Theme 1, story 1 : 9/10

Theme 1, story 2 : 8/10

Theme 1, story 3 : 9/10

Wow...i really enjoyed reading them...😛

Hat's off to u all the writers...👏👏 u r truely amazing...⭐️

Thank u so much...😛