Daya Sir & Hrishikesh Sir Bday Combined Story Contest-RESULT Pg4

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: KhotaSikaShreya

@ GD: I'm not happy with my theme 2 story though. That was a very bad one. I didn't think it would win like that.

it was a Very Tough Theme cz after 14/15 years,...

there were so many Situation, Daya Sir Save their Buddies by Killing Culprits...

thatswhy I Leave this Theme either I want to Write as Sachin told Some bad words regarding Bhai in that sense that He gave His Life at Sake and then Abhijeet Sir told the Main Scene...

but it was Too Emotional thatwhy I Left...

aur Yaar result to hona Yehi tha...

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Gamayun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: gadhadada

it was a Very Tough Theme cz after 14/15 years,...
there were so many Situation, Daya Sir Save their Buddies by Killing Culprits...
thatswhy I Leave this Theme either I want to Write as Sachin told Some bad words regarding Bhai in that sense that He gave His Life at Sake and then Abhijeet Sir told the Main Scene...
but it was Too Emotional thatwhy I Left...
aur Yaar result to hona Yehi tha...

Exactly lekin idea bahut acha tha. 14/15 years baad kaise woh baat Daya sir ko yaad aati hai isme problem thi. Maine do baar try ki tab jaa kar yeh aaya. Warna pehli baar OTT tha with too much emotion aur doosri baar maine Father's Revenge ka part kiya hi nahi tha.

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: KhotaSikaShreya

Exactly lekin idea bahut acha tha. 14/15 years baad kaise woh baat Daya sir ko yaad aati hai isme problem thi. Maine do baar try ki tab jaa kar yeh aaya. Warna pehli baar OTT tha with too much emotion aur doosri baar maine Father's Revenge ka part kiya hi nahi tha.

Yes, But I must say it was a Brave Attempt and U tried to atleast Covered that Point...👏

its really a Good Try Yaar...👏

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visrom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

I had a clear story in mind wrt theme 2. But I have no time at all for creative stuff now due to work commitments. I didn't expect this would be such a tough theme...in fact tougher than a story without Abhi and ACP. 😒 I thought a few more would give it a shot. Anyway chodo... The stories without ACP and Abhi were surprisingly entertaining! kudos to all. 👏

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Gamayun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

^ Vis di the plot was actually quite easy to write on. It was including Father's Revenge that became hard. Given that the incident happened 14 or so years ago it was hard to bring it up suddenly after so many years.

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visrom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Bringing the story wasn't necessary. It was just like the scene you wrote. You did that part exactly as I had in mind.

Someone could have written that he overcame his hesitation and shot, another person could have said he was about to shoot and hesitated but acp arrived on the spot. There's no emotional drama in there! is just a fraction of hesitation and what happened to sachin.

The rest of the stuff was a normal kidnap drama and could have been written anyway.

I thought this was easier as it's less restrictive. Honestly I am disappointed only one person tried.

Next time please give only one theme. It's a waste of effort to think of a theme and then have no response.

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Ravi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Congrats Shreya and GD also. Loved your stories! 👏 😃

I'm sorry the second half of my story was extremely disappointing (for me at least), because I wrote it in less than two hours. But the only scene in the story I'm personally satisfied with is Daya sir and Sachin sir's scene with the child in the hospital... its loosely based on something I have experienced myself. Thanks for all your kind reviews and suggestions. 😊

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Secret

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Congratz Ravi bro,shreya and GD...👏👏😛

Awesome writers gang of the forum,hat's off to you...👏⭐️

Nice siggies Angel...😊😊

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Arry why U all Congrats Me...😕😕😕

My Story does Not Stand there...😕😕😕

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: DemonStar
Congrats Shreya and GD also. Loved your stories! 👏 😃
I'm sorry the second half of my story was extremely disappointing (for me at least), because I wrote it in less than two hours. But the only scene in the story I'm personally satisfied with is Daya sir and Sachin sir's scene with the child in the hospital... its loosely based on something I have experienced myself. Thanks for all your kind reviews and suggestions. 😊

That whole Scene is Icing of Your Story...😳⭐️⭐️